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( Leaving our MC living with the Godmother Edith ) ??????????
.........PS.........Sorry, my English is bad.
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There's a Ublock Origin choice for Firefox browser only for Android. I use it for my cell phone, as I normally avoid Chrome or anything Google (the telemetry tracking crap, that forces their ads with their browser).
Also, I forgot to mention in your option section of Ublock Origin...make sure you enable (check box) remote fonts. This is how many sites inject their banner ads. As well I usually enable everything within the filter lists area, except the languages area (I leave those unchecked). This will give you complete control how your Firefox browser displays ads on your phone.
And final note, that Ublock Origin will need regular manual updating by the user (happens to both PC and phone setups). As I found the browser extension seems to fail at auto updating on a regular basis. Regards.
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ru5ty He's laying in koma so i have the chance to tell his parents story and there death story and the MC has to learn to he a bit harder... so there will be other chars who learn him to
I'm already on it...
I'm already on it...
- Oct 24, 2019
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what did you do .... what did you do ..... i can't load a saved game ....... grrrrrrr
i guess i have to restart
dev you make me hate i love your game so much
i guess i have to restart
dev you make me hate i love your game so much
- Aug 4, 2022
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Try the most recent autosave first. I didn't.what did you do .... what did you do ..... i can't load a saved game ....... grrrrrrr
i guess i have to restart
dev you make me hate i love your game so much
- Oct 24, 2019
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naww .. i went back to the very 1st save at the start and it did not load .... i have no problem retsarting a new game .. like i said i love this game alot .... just being retired i'm to poor to help support ya .... sorry
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yeah i have to restart but no matter i am fine with replaying
- Oct 24, 2019
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wait rework ..... oh shit thats probably why .. its cool tho man .. no sweat ... i hope most things stayed how they where .. they where so perfect
Oof... I gave this a try and well, I have some difficulties reading this through.
1st is the way sentences are phrased, for some reason it reads/feels choppy / not really fluent. Which distracts me from immersing myself into the story.
2nd; there is little to no backstory and the mc is already proclaiming his undying love to his foster mother... ehm... little build-up would be nice? I felt like I missed everything and went straight to the aftermath.
3rd; the first meeting between the mc, his foster mother, veronica, tasha and.... eh... Z(something), was weird to say the least. MC rejecting the whole inheritance outright without hearing what the conditions are, feels rushed, not only from the mc's perspective but the scene as a whole. The story just started but you get thrown from one location to the next without much explanation. The mc is supposed to get explanation at that meeting but the mc and foster mother get super angry all of a sudden?!? (even though the grandfather of the mc is allegedly evil, no reason to flip out to people who did nothing but being hospitable and respectful, except for that Z girl), and after that the meeting is postponed without further explanation... The whole scene felt like beating around the bush.
Also, from what I understand of what I read, the mc didn't know his grandfather that well, everything he knows about his grandfather, his foster mother told him during the road trip to the meeting. How can the mc be biased enough to reject such an amount of wealth outright just because his grandfather is evil? What has the grandfather done to the mc that the mc reacts in such a way? Yeah sure the grandfather was an *ssh*le and messed with the inheritance the mc got. In my opinion that's not reason enough to hate someone with such ferocity. And again, a little more build up would be nice.
Even though I find it difficult to immerse and read this, I'll read this further, hopefully it will improve
edit: Just noticed a scene that was more tell than show. Which I find weird since you have models to show, why tell the reader the character is going to look if you can show that?
PS: I'm sorry if my critique is harsh or too direct, not my intention.
edit2: I'm dropping this. I simply can't get into the story. Too bad, the synopsis seemed interesting though.
1st is the way sentences are phrased, for some reason it reads/feels choppy / not really fluent. Which distracts me from immersing myself into the story.
2nd; there is little to no backstory and the mc is already proclaiming his undying love to his foster mother... ehm... little build-up would be nice? I felt like I missed everything and went straight to the aftermath.
3rd; the first meeting between the mc, his foster mother, veronica, tasha and.... eh... Z(something), was weird to say the least. MC rejecting the whole inheritance outright without hearing what the conditions are, feels rushed, not only from the mc's perspective but the scene as a whole. The story just started but you get thrown from one location to the next without much explanation. The mc is supposed to get explanation at that meeting but the mc and foster mother get super angry all of a sudden?!? (even though the grandfather of the mc is allegedly evil, no reason to flip out to people who did nothing but being hospitable and respectful, except for that Z girl), and after that the meeting is postponed without further explanation... The whole scene felt like beating around the bush.
Also, from what I understand of what I read, the mc didn't know his grandfather that well, everything he knows about his grandfather, his foster mother told him during the road trip to the meeting. How can the mc be biased enough to reject such an amount of wealth outright just because his grandfather is evil? What has the grandfather done to the mc that the mc reacts in such a way? Yeah sure the grandfather was an *ssh*le and messed with the inheritance the mc got. In my opinion that's not reason enough to hate someone with such ferocity. And again, a little more build up would be nice.
Even though I find it difficult to immerse and read this, I'll read this further, hopefully it will improve
edit: Just noticed a scene that was more tell than show. Which I find weird since you have models to show, why tell the reader the character is going to look if you can show that?
PS: I'm sorry if my critique is harsh or too direct, not my intention.
edit2: I'm dropping this. I simply can't get into the story. Too bad, the synopsis seemed interesting though.
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- Oct 24, 2019
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i'm such a badass ... this game is so refreshing compared to alot of other games where the MC is a simp ....
dev. your awesome
dev. your awesome
sp4ckj4rr0w_420
Thanks for your feedback.
to your 1st point:
It may be that i type things different than other dev's, I got 3 nativ english speaking proofreaders from different regions of the States so i don't think it is too complicated to read...
to your 2nd point:
Since day12_2 the MC lay's in koma and now is the point in time where the background story gets much more deepness.
The telling of that topic started already with day12...
parts directly and others a bit betwwen the lines... (I don't want the players to get lazy on reading...)
to your 3rd point:
You will learn about why they are angry about the grandfather (day12-26)
Why i don't show things... every render costs a lot of time to build and render and i have a time line to get it trough...
Setting up a scene takes more than just a few minutes (from time to time a half day or more)
If i do it for just 3-4 renders it's not worth the time, since i don't do it fulltime, i wish i could but TL doesn't pay off enough to do it.
I'm sorry that you don't like it and couldn't find into the story (A lot of guy's are able to), I wish you the best and i think you'll find a game that fits your feelings...
Blackthunder
Thanks for your feedback.
to your 1st point:
It may be that i type things different than other dev's, I got 3 nativ english speaking proofreaders from different regions of the States so i don't think it is too complicated to read...
to your 2nd point:
Since day12_2 the MC lay's in koma and now is the point in time where the background story gets much more deepness.
The telling of that topic started already with day12...
parts directly and others a bit betwwen the lines... (I don't want the players to get lazy on reading...)
to your 3rd point:
You will learn about why they are angry about the grandfather (day12-26)
Why i don't show things... every render costs a lot of time to build and render and i have a time line to get it trough...
Setting up a scene takes more than just a few minutes (from time to time a half day or more)
If i do it for just 3-4 renders it's not worth the time, since i don't do it fulltime, i wish i could but TL doesn't pay off enough to do it.
I'm sorry that you don't like it and couldn't find into the story (A lot of guy's are able to), I wish you the best and i think you'll find a game that fits your feelings...
Blackthunder
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I'm not a native speaker myself, so maybe that's why? I don't know.
Anyways thanks for the reply and I wish you good luck with your game. I'm sorry again if my critique was too harsh =3