still some grammatical errors here and there more in the starter chapters,....nothing big to point out inmediately but for me a non english native was little off,...i think dev sometimes we want to say something in our language [yours german] but when we try to put same sentence in english doesnt connect in the same way....i dont know if saintblackmoor is here maybe im wrong but it feelt impersonal ,..he will be a good critic i u can ask him to chek your script and see if he can do better[talking only about the grammatical issues] those 2000 plus renders didnt weight on the lenght of this update,....but a solid work till now ....waiting on goddes
shamtiiomi We are already on a revistit and part rework of the old chapters.
The 2000+ render are including the animations (around 200+ per animation)
Thanks for the flowers.
The 2000+ render are including the animations (around 200+ per animation)
Thanks for the flowers.
indio68
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- Sep 26, 2020
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way to short update and nothing interesting happened, story wise,apart some lewd scenes....and i think mc needs a bigger cock, if not only because how the girls speak about it...praising the 3 thrust so much , but a granny take it his cock so easy and she didn't came during the "famous" 3 thrust..and sex scenes were quite dull too.. i don't know, i'm not convinced about this update at all.. i liked the game till the last update..so i was expecting much more..and a man who don't like BJobs..really dev
indio68 Hmmm...
It was as long as the others before...
Nothing interresting happend hmmm... idk which game have you played? I dont think it was TL?
Nope MC's cock is big enough we want the girls to have fun and not to suffer in pain...
Why could a old Lady take the cock easyer as a jung one?
Hmmm lets think about it but you should get it yourself... I think.
You know expecting much more is a nice thing but someone has to do the work for much more...
I only have 6 weeks to do a update on a game... so... not much income since a lot of you want it just for nothing.
Less money, less Maschines to get the work done... It's a easy calculation.
A big thanks to all of my Patrons and SubStars....
Yeah some guy's dont like BJ's like myself... I enjoy a nice pussy much more than a sloppy BJ.
Plus my Blowjob animations look like crap, I hate to do them.
Have fun and take care.
Blackthunder
It was as long as the others before...
Nothing interresting happend hmmm... idk which game have you played? I dont think it was TL?
Nope MC's cock is big enough we want the girls to have fun and not to suffer in pain...
Why could a old Lady take the cock easyer as a jung one?
Hmmm lets think about it but you should get it yourself... I think.
You know expecting much more is a nice thing but someone has to do the work for much more...
I only have 6 weeks to do a update on a game... so... not much income since a lot of you want it just for nothing.
Less money, less Maschines to get the work done... It's a easy calculation.
A big thanks to all of my Patrons and SubStars....
Yeah some guy's dont like BJ's like myself... I enjoy a nice pussy much more than a sloppy BJ.
Plus my Blowjob animations look like crap, I hate to do them.
Have fun and take care.
Blackthunder
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Yup. Ran into being railroaded into railing that fugly hag. Quit the railroad and deleted the game. Now it's for the ignore list.
PhoenixRage23
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- May 24, 2020
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I hope the dev goes back to the earlier dialogue and fixes the grammar and spelling errors. I've already come across a few issues within the first 10 seconds of the game. I've also noticed there are punctuation errors too.
- Mar 15, 2020
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Blackthunder_vn I really hope you aren't paying your proofreaders anything because as is evidenced by the first few pages of the game v0.10, because they really suck at it.
GrammerCop
The first few pages of the game you say... that's fine since they are over 4 years old and proofreaded by no one be at the actual team.
Also we are on a revisit of the Game already, yeah it will take some time but I think it's worth the time tom wait.
I'm not sure is a partial release of the revisit will happen at some point or if it will be released if finished.
The first few pages of the game you say... that's fine since they are over 4 years old and proofreaded by no one be at the actual team.
Also we are on a revisit of the Game already, yeah it will take some time but I think it's worth the time tom wait.
I'm not sure is a partial release of the revisit will happen at some point or if it will be released if finished.
Punto
Engaged Member
- Jun 18, 2020
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It's always exciting and full of new surprises. Keep it up. Waiting for the next update.
Belgrath19
Member
- Oct 28, 2018
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Well the story start of this game is so ugly I'm out. Thanks for supporting Linux games and I've hand no probe playing it on my Steam Deck.
wonderful story lines everything is perfect i love this game. i don't have other words to describe this content. thank you