sexypeanut
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Gave this one a go.
Good:
Bad:
Suggestions:
Typos & Nitpicks:
"possession"
The page flip corner should cover part of the "m" instead of being transparent
I have yet to meet Pam, so how do I already know that stuff in the Trivia section? It would be more immersive if this was dynamic, being updated as the story progressed. Likewise, I still had to meet Belle - but the journal told me she didn't like me...
"opportunity"
W-Why did she become a face in the cloud??
Checking the board and clicking 'Close' shouldn't send me back to the entrance
The college track field has no way to go back to the college without using the map!
Why is he wearing the same clothes from the previous day, when he was caught peeking at her? That's not very smart!
If I try to speak to Steven here, this is all I get
In this line and the next one it should be "integrity"
That city is truly a most curious place. Boobs can grow hands there!
Good:
- The art is super cute and the girls are quite thicc!
- I like that we can explore the city without advancing the time, differently than what happens in most free roam games.
- Interesting story and how you meet the characters happens in an organic way.
Bad:
- No background music or even sound effects (apart from sex scenes). It would be nice to have them added in the next update.
- The "wait a few days" while having no other story to pursuit is a bit boring.
- Aline has those amazing breasts and MC doesn't even fondle them during sex? smh
Suggestions:
- The leads and objectives should be separated from the girls' bios, I think. Like a specific journal for them.
- Have a button near the time icon to quickly take us home and sleep (there's no reason to make us go back home, go up the stairs, enter the room and sleep every night).
- Option to turn off the x-ray thing when MC cums.
- Tell me Sophie (the library girl) will become a LI in the future!
- A gallery, so we can rewatch h-scenes
Typos & Nitpicks:
"possession"
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The page flip corner should cover part of the "m" instead of being transparent
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I have yet to meet Pam, so how do I already know that stuff in the Trivia section? It would be more immersive if this was dynamic, being updated as the story progressed. Likewise, I still had to meet Belle - but the journal told me she didn't like me...
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"opportunity"
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W-Why did she become a face in the cloud??
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Checking the board and clicking 'Close' shouldn't send me back to the entrance
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The college track field has no way to go back to the college without using the map!
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Why is he wearing the same clothes from the previous day, when he was caught peeking at her? That's not very smart!
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If I try to speak to Steven here, this is all I get
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In this line and the next one it should be "integrity"
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That city is truly a most curious place. Boobs can grow hands there!
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Wow that's huge! o.o
Thanks, that's a huge help that you picked up these stuffs! I will try to fix them ASAP.
Except the notebook. It will require a bit more planning and a solid sit down before I can get to it.
We played tested the game a few times but we still can't catch all the bugs.
Funny story why Misty's body is missing. It was problably one of the cats. (They like to walk on the keyboard)
If you have any suggestions or ideas, please message me (even personally on discord so I don't lose the message).
sexypeanut
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The notebook thing is secondary, tbh. I don't know how you guys are planning each episode but, supposing each one will focus on one girl, my suggestion would be unnecessary.
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Oh I absolutely think it's necessary(the original idea was for this notebook to be updating according to events that happen). I want the game to be focused on storybuilding, characters, plot (and porn of course). But since we don't have much content right now, I'd rather show "everything" we've got.
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Yeah, Dick or Private Dick is a term for an investigator/detective.
Yep, like Dick Tracy...
But True Dick would seem a bit weird.
Nice release by the way.
P.S: Don't know if I'm right since english isn't my first language, but when Steven talks to his wife, he says: "You've got old!'
Shouldn't it be "You got old!" ?
And then he says:
"I thought she's never gonna leave."
Should be: "I thought she'd never gonna leave."
Well I understand it's not very important for a first release.
And sorry if it was already reported.
But True Dick would seem a bit weird.
Nice release by the way.
P.S: Don't know if I'm right since english isn't my first language, but when Steven talks to his wife, he says: "You've got old!'
Shouldn't it be "You got old!" ?
And then he says:
"I thought she's never gonna leave."
Should be: "I thought she'd never gonna leave."
Well I understand it's not very important for a first release.
And sorry if it was already reported.
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I'm not sure about the 1st one but you're correct about the 2nd thing. I will fix it.Yep, like Dick Tracy...
But True Dick would seem a bit weird.
Nice release by the way.
P.S: Don't know if I'm right since english isn't my first language, but when Steven talks to his wife, he says: "You've got old!'
Shouldn't it be "You got old!" ?
And then he says:
"I thought she's never gonna leave."
Should be: "I thought she'd never gonna leave."
Well I understand it's not very important for a first release.
And sorry if it was already reported.
YogSothoth1982
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I think making him a more competent detective, while still keeping that goofy demeanor, could work too.Thanks for the essay boss! I enjoyed reading it and it gave some nice ideas for story setups and character development. I was already thinking of how to change the prologue and your suggestion sounds to be pretty well fitting. Perhaps I could make it a hot professor doting on him and helping him pass classes because she was horny for him.
The truth is that I like harem endings with romance where all the LIs know that the MC is with all of them and they are completely okay with it.
In fact, I'm only interested in the MC having sex with the LIs with which he's going to end up having a romantic relationship at the end of the game.
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Oh I didn't think about the end of the game
. Yeah, certainly it would be better for him to have his own harem and for LIs to share him rather than keeping status quo.
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Hmm I don't think so, I don't think many people would want to refuse the LI anyway.
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