VN Ren'Py Turning the Page [v0.26.0 Patreon] [Azienda]

[phantomz]

Just played through both sides, and this - in my opinion - is one of the best NTR stories out there. Intriguing story, great art work. Great work guys, keep up the good work, and can't wait to see how this is all resolved.

yea Great NTR game indeed , i didnt skip the dialogues even for once .
this is the difinition of slow burn corruption with great and interesting build up ,it makes things and future events much more interesting .
not finished playing the game yet but till now everything was just perfect .
looking forward to see completely fallen and corrupted sophie . especially since the game is school themed theres much more opportunity for them to do interesting things.

well i have to continue playing the game and hope they dont finish it soon they can make much more interesting and spicey situation, scenarios and eventsfor the poor husband

 

[anonsuit]

I have seen the game from the girl prespective up to a few scenes after she died her hair. and I have to say that the game have some amazing writing, it has been one of the most naturally progressing story that does not take any shortcuts with the characters processing their emotions and some scenes even have long setups like anal starting with some prodding before it even before actually doing it and it tying up with doing it raw.

my only negative critique is:

Why
does
the game
have
such short phrases
that you
have to press
the progress button
so many times.

Seriously the game have plenty of room to write full paragraphs why did they opt to have the character have around 10 micro lines before even switching to another's character's reply. The game would be 20% better if some short lines were condensed into one paragraph and even some small lines were out right omitted.

even the montage scene was verbose. a promise best left unkempt had a similar problem but at least they wrote full paragraphs, and you can notice the difference in the ease of reading.

 

[Terix3]

my only negative critique is:

Why
does
the game
have
such short phrases
that you
have to press
the progress button
so many times.

Seriously the game have plenty of room to write full paragraphs why did they opt to have the character have around 10 micro lines before even switching to another's character's reply. The game would be 20% better if some short lines were condensed into one paragraph and even some small lines were out right omitted.

even the montage scene was verbose. a promise best left unkempt had a similar problem but at least they wrote full paragraphs, and you can notice the difference in the ease of reading.

Single lines are much easier to read when your eye focus is on something else.

 

[anonsuit]

Single lines are much easier to read when your eye focus is on something else.

we are clearly different the line is so short i already read it before it was displayed
i also have to focus back and forth each new line disturbing my focus from something else.

 

[Vampire_Lord]

is out!

 

[LostBR]

is out! View attachment 3709337

 

[nickrotund]

is out! View attachment 3709337

just look at art is it much worse before old versions.. what happen..

 

[Nefurien]

just look at art is it much worse before old versions.. what happen..

It improved for me. A matter of taste

 

[Terox34567]

just look at art is it much worse before old versions.. what happen..

It was much better at 0.10.0 update face, neck, boobs( particularly well shaped and drawn), nose eyes (specially) when she used to roll them up in a particular mannner

 

[Vampire_Lord]

just look at art is it much worse before old versions.. what happen..

change of artist

 

[ItsNotUs]

change of artist

Why?
I noticed that the art is no longer the same, but no one answered my question and there is no animation, it’s a pity, that artist was good, it’s a big downgrade!

 

[Terix3]

change of artist

First time I hear about it. Got any source ?

Why?
I noticed that the art is no longer the same, but no one answered my question and there is no animation, it’s a pity, that artist was good, it’s a big downgrade!

Simply none cared to give you an answer, why would they all you do is complain? I only give answer because I fear people will start repeating your nonsense.To begin with only 1 scene par patch/month was animated, that is 1 in 3 scenes. Now we got the patches twice as often but the frequency of animated scenes is not changing. Also last month instead of animation the devs went with multi CG scene to better portray them fucking whole day. 0.25 will have animation, you could already see Sophie distinctly moving in the window in 0.24.

 

[ItsNotUs]

First time I hear about it. Got any source ?

Simply none cared to give you an answer, why would they all you do is complain? I only give answer because I fear people will start repeating your nonsense.To begin with only 1 scene par patch/month was animated, that is 1 in 3 scenes. Now we got the patches twice as often but the frequency of animated scenes is not changing. Also last month instead of animation the devs went with multi CG scene to better portray them fucking whole day. 0.25 will have animation, you could already see Sophie distinctly moving in the window in 0.24.

Here source, look at art https://f95zone.to/threads/turning-the-page-v0-24-0-patreon-azienda.131246/post-13936777 or you blind?

And what would you know, three updates in a row without animations!

 

[Terix3]

Here source, look at art https://f95zone.to/threads/turning-the-page-v0-24-0-patreon-azienda.131246/post-13936777 or you blind?

And what would you know, three updates in a row without animations!

Check their other two games, they all are made by same artist. They even stopped making games for some time to improve their art. One can add 2 and 2 together and come with the answer that the artist is still young and is polishing their craft. The art has been slightly changing all the time but I don't think many are bothered by it. The art is consistent enough that the characters are easily recognizable and that's what counts. Only certain people like yourself try to find issues everywhere.

Reading is hard i guess:
1 animation per month
2 patches per month
April 1st patch - last animation
May animation - canceled, multi CG scene instead
June 1st patch - next animation
Yes it is 3 patches since last animation.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Check their other two games, they all are made by same artist. They even stopped making games for some time to improve their art. One can add 2 and 2 together and come with the answer that the artist is still young and is polishing their craft. The art has been slightly changing all the time but I don't think many are bothered by it. The art is consistent enough that the characters are easily recognizable and that's what counts. Only certain people like yourself try to find issues everywhere.

Reading is hard i guess:
1 animation per month
2 patches per month
April 1st patch - last animation
May animation - canceled, multi CG scene instead
June 1st patch - next animation
Yes it is 3 patches since last animation.

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Damn, can't you see the difference?

 

[Azienda]

Hi everyone! The artist didn't change. We are currently doing several tests with the coloring, and the art will continue to evolve over time. Also, in case a member of the group changes, we would of course let people know with a post on Patreon/Discord.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Hi everyone! The artist didn't change. We are currently doing several tests with the coloring, and the art will continue to evolve over time. Also, in case a member of the group changes, we would of course let people know with a post on Patreon/Discord.

Well, as for me, in the last scene, the one in the link, is a big downgrade in art.

 

[blewbury]

Well, as for me, in the last scene, the one in the link, is a big downgrade in art.

Why are you being so icky. It's just a dark scene. It's one of the hardest challenges to color the dark scenes with non-standard light. It looks a bit off from others but it is what it is. From your own attachments it's obvious it's the same artist. And this game is already in top 3% by the quality of art. What is wrong with you?

 

[ItsNotUs]

Why are you being so icky. It's just a dark scene. It's one of the hardest challenges to color the dark scenes with non-standard light. It looks a bit off from others but it is what it is. From your own attachments it's obvious it's the same artist. And this game is already in top 3% by the quality of art. What is wrong with you?

For me, as an artist, this scene is not "beautiful" compared to the previous ones, what’s wrong with that? I’m only talking about the vesual component of the last scene, and it’s not about the color, but about the proportions of the characters, they have large bodies and small heads (especially with short hair, her head seems even smaller), and Sophie’s face didn’t turn out very well for me - this is just my opinion, if this scene is in the vesual aspect for you and others good and you like it - its ok!

 

[anonsuit]

Hi everyone! The artist didn't change. We are currently doing several tests with the coloring, and the art will continue to evolve over time. Also, in case a member of the group changes, we would of course let people know with a post on Patreon/Discord.

as for me I do not mind, Id rather see the artist experiment and progress as an artist. to me it looks like he wanted to try some shading in what was quite possible the hardest scenario. doing lighting in a dark scene. no wonder it does not look as good as the White lighting god rays that all the other scenes had in a way the previous ones cheated on the lights. Even in photography dark scenes are harder and those do not require an artists skill to portray just calibrating a machine.

For me, as an artist, this scene is not "beautiful" compared to the previous ones, what’s wrong with that? I’m only talking about the vesual component of the last scene, and it’s not about the color, but about the proportions of the characters, they have large bodies and small heads (especially with short hair, her head seems even smaller), and Sophie’s face didn’t turn out very well for me - this is just my opinion, if this scene is in the vesual aspect for you and others good and you like it - its ok!

you mean "Visual" right?

hey I am bothered by the proportions of the guys dick. but I know it is fantasy. on one side I understand your problem with proportions I have that complaint too. When you draw a dick that big proportions tend to go out of whack, I have noticed that problem in like 90% of the big dicked artwork in hentai, the artist have to literally bend proportions just to fit the body within the boundaries of a screen proportion (rectancle) because he started with an ilogically proportionate body part that turns to be the centerpiece of the image. so you see the top part of the image has to be shrunk to fit the screen. and it ends up looking weird.

if you want i can find you hundreds of examples from other artists