VN Ren'Py Twinewood [v2.5] [Professional Degenerate]

[Fazed]

I liked this update. Self aware hentai plot callouts aside, I feel that overall the dialogue was pretty good. I had a good time reading through it. Some commas were missing in the lore drop it think but that's it.

MC seemed rather stoic considering all that was going on. I was half expecting him to freak out in the fight and be entirely useless. He did encounter the beast woman before so I am glad that didnt happen. It's consistent with his previous behavior. I do wish he was a bit more outspoken about being kidnapped. Nothing he could do about it obviously, but still.

Not onboard in believing it was because of his own ability at play though. Not yet anyway. Actually I agree with the MC in that all he did was touch boobies, because that is what was shown to us. The grimoire did the cast. He just supplied the mana, so them saying it was MC's own ability is a bit of a stretch.

Enjoyable development.

Good music selection.

Lia is hot.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

This game has some great potential, but at the start of episode two I was kinda disappointed with it. Mostly due to how frustrating it felt with how quickly the MC got over how he was literally KIDNAPPED and had his girlfriend threatened with TORTURE.

I get that the story needs to move forward, and there really wasn't much else the MC could've done, but glossing over something like that just feels like shit. I'm not asking for some macho man moment where he kicks ass or something, but I'd like to be able to express some level anger & resentment or even just be mildly uncooperative.

I liked this update. Self aware hentai plot callouts aside, I feel that overall the dialogue was pretty good. I had a good time reading through it. Some commas were missing in the lore drop it think but that's it.

MC seemed rather stoic considering all that was going on. I was half expecting him to freak out in the fight and be entirely useless. He did encounter the beast woman before so I am glad that didnt happen. It's consistent with his previous behavior. I do wish he was a bit more outspoken about being kidnapped. Nothing he could do about it obviously, but still.

Not onboard in believing it was because of his own ability at play though. Not yet anyway. Actually I agree with the MC in that all he did was touch boobies, because that is what was shown to us. The grimoire did the cast. He just supplied the mana, so them saying it was MC's own ability is a bit of a stretch.

Enjoyable development.

Good music selection.

Lia is hot.

Thanks for all the feedback! Some good points raised here, as I continue to write and (hopefully) get better at it things like this are always useful to hear. As for MC's reaction I always imagine him as quite a calm and level headed individual but perhaps I did gloss a little to quickly over the fact he did in fact get kidnapped in his own home lol. I think I'm going to make a few minor adjustments to these scenes for the next update to try and have him better convey some of the emotions one might feel in these very unusual and dangerous situations whilst still keeping his overall level headed-ness.

I'm glad things where mostly enjoyable over all though!

 

[Fazed]

calm and level headed individual

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Just my thoughts and ramblings.

It is good to see some difference though. Some personalities freak out in danger, some freeze, others put up a fight and some become focused and analytical., even if still frantic because of immediate danger. I am assuming MC is more like the last type then. Definitely don't want that to change but a bit more indication of what is going on in his head, like more thoughts about the surrounding, recognizing they were in a basement, entrance/exit etc would be cool. Just a little to show the player how the MC thinks. I don't mean he should be Jason Bourne right away or have copious lines of internal monologue though.

 

[Hateitfuckit]

Yeah, this game definitely not for me if we have to watch other characters fuck like a dumb c*CK. Li or not, I personally don't like watching random characters fuck. Especially if it a mother character and developer decided to get her fucked by random people. (even if incest is not planned, that shit is just weird)

Definitely not a game for vanilla harem fans, should probably add Ntr/Sharing tags as well.

 

[Spiderfox]

Definitely not a game for vanilla harem fans, should probably add Ntr/Sharing tags as well.

Why should they add tags that don't apply to the game. If you don't like seeing other characters have sex, don't play the game that has that, or choose the option that lets you not see it. Just because you want the mother to be a LI doesn't mean her having sex is either NTR or sharing as she isn't a LI.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Yeah, this game definitely not for me if we have to watch other characters fuck like a dumb c*CK. Li or not, I personally don't like watching random characters fuck. Especially if it a mother character and developer decided to get her fucked by random people. (even if incest is not planned, that shit is just weird)

Definitely not a game for vanilla harem fans, should probably add Ntr/Sharing tags as well.

At the start of the game you are now asked whether or not you would like to enable voyeur content. If you say no you won't see any sex scenes with characters other than the mc. Even with this option on, no love interests will have sex with any other character without mcs direct involvement. E.g. threesomes.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

At the start of the game you are now asked whether or not you would like to enable voyeur content. If you say no you won't see any sex scenes with characters other than the mc. Even with this option on, no love interests will have sex with any other character without mcs direct involvement. E.g. threesomes.

Personally I'm glad I read this thread so I knew to go back and change the option. I don't mind seeing random characters getting boned but if they're connected to the MC like a mother that's gonna ruffle feathers. Definitely isn't even remotely close to NTR like buddy said but I don't think too many people who are not into NTR are gonna wanna watch MC's mom getting boned even if she isn't a LI.
wait a minute, just a futa? That's a silly thing to get upset about, dude must be hella insecure about his masculinity screaming ntr over a futa scene with non LIs. Disregard my above rant

 

[Hateitfuckit]

At the start of the game you are now asked whether or not you would like to enable voyeur content. If you say no you won't see any sex scenes with characters other than the mc. Even with this option on, no love interests will have sex with any other character without mcs direct involvement. E.g. threesomes.

Yeah, pretty good idea but sadly it doesn't work that way. Making shit optional means less contents for people. Like the dude above said watching mother character fuck is definitely a turn off even for non-incest fans. I play game to fuck characters either pov or with my main character not to watch some random bozo fuck eachother lmfao. I would have just watched porn if I wanted that.

Critism aside, good luck with your game. This is definitely not the way to go if you are trying for harem/vanilla.

 

[Absurdity]

This is a good game, I have a few nitpicks with it but I really liked the world and the fantasy feel of it.

The main suggestions I have for now are:
-Add a quick load button. It's weird having Q save there but not Q load.
-Maybe add a way to cheat the waifu cards? I finished the whole game without finding any. Skill issue I admit but I just don't like having to search at each frame everytime the scene changes instead of letting the story flow normally so I hate this type of collectible type mini games. I understand that a lot of people like it but since there's already a option to cheat stats and a episode selector I don't think it's a stretch to add this for people who don't.

Also for the people who turn girl dick off I found a bug since the girl in the persona game randomly grows a dick in the final scene even if it's off.

 

[BFC 78]

I'm glad you like her! As for F.T.E I'm afraid I'm not sure what that is? Another game on this site?

yes, it is

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it is a pretty good game and I admit, later on one scene can get a little dark for most people but I still recommend it

 

[Professional Degenerate]

This is a good game, I have a few nitpicks with it but I really liked the world and the fantasy feel of it.

The main suggestions I have for now are:
-Add a quick load button. It's weird having Q save there but not Q load.
-Maybe add a way to cheat the waifu cards? I finished the whole game without finding any. Skill issue I admit but I just don't like having to search at each frame everytime the scene changes instead of letting the story flow normally so I hate this type of collectible type mini games. I understand that a lot of people like it but since there's already a option to cheat stats and a episode selector I don't think it's a stretch to add this for people who don't.

Also for the people who turn girl dick off I found a bug since the girl in the persona game randomly grows a dick in the final scene even if it's off.

Ah, yes that's definitely a bug that needs to be fixed ASAP! Thanks for pointing it out. As for the waifu cards adding an option to cheat them all is probably something I'll end up adding yeah, for developments sake too since I'm going to add a proper reward for it. In the game right now once you've completed an episode whenever you replay it a little noise plays whenever an uncollected waifu card is on the screen. Dont see why I can't add the qload feature too. Glad you like the game so far!

 

[TheDick69+]

I really like this game, it's funny, sexy and exciting, all which I like.

I have said no to voyeurism and as I don't support this game*, I don't have any right to complain. People that pay may have a problem, as they might think you're "wasting" their money when you have scenes they don't wanna see. Just a thought.

* With my money situation as a retiree I can't support any game.

 

[Kekekerkek]

futa on male?

 

[Professional Degenerate]

futa on male?

None in the game yet but it is planned for some optional scenes.

 

[Sngo]

Yeah, this game definitely not for me if we have to watch other characters fuck like a dumb c*CK. Li or not, I personally don't like watching random characters fuck. Especially if it a mother character and developer decided to get her fucked by random people. (even if incest is not planned, that shit is just weird)

Definitely not a game for vanilla harem fans, should probably add Ntr/Sharing tags as well.

Ty for the honest comment now I know it's not for me and can safely put the game on the ignore .
If it was stated in the notes would be better than to need to read all the comments .
Really annoyed with shady devs putting cuck crap on harem games.

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Ty for the honest comment now I know it's not for me and can safely put the game on the ignore .
If it was stated in the notes would be better than to need to read all the comments .
Really annoyed with shady devs putting cuck crap on harem games.

It's not in the notes because it's not in the game. I've adjusted things as the updates have released. In the current build you will not see any sex scenes with non love interest characters unless you choose to enable voyeur content and then choose to see the scene in game.

 

[Darkmessiah30]

please for the love of everything holy please allows us to get chloe pregnant she's the most cutest and adorable goblin ive seen

 

[Danv]

thanks for encrypting everything, modding game now is really *fun*
can't adjust game to my personal preferences, but can still rip patreon code - was it fucking worth it?
0uF@77iw

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

thanks for encrypting everything, modding game now is really *fun*
can't adjust game to my personal preferences, but can still rip patreon code - was it fucking worth it?
0uF@77iw

Thanks for probably ruining things for future versions. Posting the vip code when the thing you used to grab it is literally linked in your signature. If I can't get vip enabled next version I'll know exactly who to thank

 

[BFC 78]

umm, about this scene seems a little off to me.

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I'm looking forward to the next update and sexy time with Chloe and the sexy book lady oh shit I mean grimoire, sexy grimoire lady oh for the love Ero please don't tell Lia, I called her a book, I so don't want to wake up to Lia making extra creamy peanut butter with her feet if you know what I mean ha-ha