VN Ren'Py Twinewood [v3.1] [Professional Degenerate]

[yunrutaro]

Can anyone give me the 3.0 version

 

[Ratapignata]

Can’t wait for the new update

 

[cosmicv1]

This game looks good, I just have a question, how is the harem at this point in the game? Do the girls know that they are in a harem and accept that they are in one? Does the Mc hide his relationships from the other love interest? I hate it when a Mc does that and there just constant jealously and drama that prevents the harem from forming.

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

This game looks good, I just have a question, how is the harem at this point in the game? Do the girls know that they are in a harem and accept that they are in one? Does the Mc hide his relationships from the other love interest? I hate it when a Mc does that and there just constant jealously and drama that prevents the harem from forming.

Harem queen with a cuckquean fetish who's very enthusiastic about letting the MC's potential lovers know that they're free to go for him. It's a real harem.

 

[Leviashen]

Quick question about the planned futa on male tag. Is this going to be part of fem/futadom content or is it more a mutual pleasure situation?

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Quick question about the planned futa on male tag. Is this going to be part of fem/futadom content or is it more a mutual pleasure situation?

Definitely more of a mutual pleasure situation.

 

[Quetzzz]

Bug:

        if unlock_20 == True:
            if unlock_21 == False:
                show screen newHiddenCard(id = 21, xp = 55, yp = 900)
                if ep2Tracker:
                    play sound "audio/waifuTracker.ogg"
        ch "{i}Mmm…{/i} That's definitely one way to put having my classmates all see my hairy coochie."
        mc "They don't know what they're missing out on."
        if unlock_21 == False:
            hide screen newHiddenScreen

newHiddenCard isn't getting hidden, and newHiddenScreen doesn't exist.

I'm not a fan of the cards. They're often behind UI elements (date or textbox), and their collection is bound to a save, not a persistent variable. On the other hand, other than to refresh oneself on the story, there's little reason to replay.

 

[Quetzzz]

Typo:

=> peeking

Capitalization of "hailthorn" is inconsistent:
I have to admit that I'm confused on how to apply the grammar rules here... Is "hailthorn" a proper noun?
Since all races in this world originate from their own autonomous areas, I lean toward capitalization for Hailthorn, Light Elf, Elves, ... Maybe not for dryads since they're usually more ubiquitous.

# script.rpy
  3737,97:     j "Kara obviously has the height advantage but I've never really thought about being with a hailthorn."
  3753,50:             j "Oh yeah? Even with the extra heat hailthorns pack?"
# episode3.rpy
  805,55:         ch "S-sure… I’ve never actually talked with a hailthorn before."
  882,48:         mc "(Kara… I’ve never really spoken to Hailthorn before but she seems pretty nice.)"
  965,37:                     isl "The lovely hailthorn lady standing with the guy with the nice cock, come on up."
  993,81:                     isl "They're rather spacy. I suppose that makes sense for a hailthorn."
  1123,93:                     kar "What about dicks? I mean um, do you think you could ever be with a hailthorn?"
  2119,33:                     mc "So that hailthorn is your friend Kara right?"
  3635,57:     ca "I mean seriously, I've seen some big cocks on a hailthorn but you've got any humans I've met beat by a long shot."
  4129,59:     "{i}It’s not long before the next student is ready, a Hailthorn woman who you recognise from before."
  4561,74:     "{i}Once again you strip off, this time under the hungry gaze of the Hailthorn."
  4842,120:     "{i}After being weighed and having the first few body measurements taken, the doctor doesn’t hesitate to grasp the hailthorn’s cock."
  8773,103:         mc "(I guess she's the open minded type, and maybe there's some social nudity presence in the hailthorn kingdom too.)"
  8924,118:         kar "S-sorry... I know I'm not all neat down there like you are, and I'm not that muscular compared to other hailthorns... You’re probably pretty disappointed right?"
  9283,72:         kar "Yeah… I guess I was never really that interested in other hailthorns back home…"
  9616,53:                 "{i}A slight flush on her face, the hailthorn slips down her panties letting her cock flop free."

Is the game supposed to use British English or American English? I suspect it's British English, but some words are spelled the American way consistently, like "favorite".

Midday, but it's dark:


Better to write "Miss" here instead of "Ms."


Needs to be said by Gaia:


Probably needs to be gated behind transRobin as well:

 

[Professional Degenerate]

Typo:
View attachment 5563013
=> peeking

Capitalization of "hailthorn" is inconsistent:
I have to admit that I'm confused on how to apply the grammar rules here... Is "hailthorn" a proper noun?
Since all races in this world originate from their own autonomous areas, I lean toward capitalization for Hailthorn, Light Elf, Elves, ... Maybe not for dryads since they're usually more ubiquitous.

# script.rpy
  3737,97:     j "Kara obviously has the height advantage but I've never really thought about being with a hailthorn."
  3753,50:             j "Oh yeah? Even with the extra heat hailthorns pack?"
# episode3.rpy
  805,55:         ch "S-sure… I’ve never actually talked with a hailthorn before."
  882,48:         mc "(Kara… I’ve never really spoken to Hailthorn before but she seems pretty nice.)"
  965,37:                     isl "The lovely hailthorn lady standing with the guy with the nice cock, come on up."
  993,81:                     isl "They're rather spacy. I suppose that makes sense for a hailthorn."
  1123,93:                     kar "What about dicks? I mean um, do you think you could ever be with a hailthorn?"
  2119,33:                     mc "So that hailthorn is your friend Kara right?"
  3635,57:     ca "I mean seriously, I've seen some big cocks on a hailthorn but you've got any humans I've met beat by a long shot."
  4129,59:     "{i}It’s not long before the next student is ready, a Hailthorn woman who you recognise from before."
  4561,74:     "{i}Once again you strip off, this time under the hungry gaze of the Hailthorn."
  4842,120:     "{i}After being weighed and having the first few body measurements taken, the doctor doesn’t hesitate to grasp the hailthorn’s cock."
  8773,103:         mc "(I guess she's the open minded type, and maybe there's some social nudity presence in the hailthorn kingdom too.)"
  8924,118:         kar "S-sorry... I know I'm not all neat down there like you are, and I'm not that muscular compared to other hailthorns... You’re probably pretty disappointed right?"
  9283,72:         kar "Yeah… I guess I was never really that interested in other hailthorns back home…"
  9616,53:                 "{i}A slight flush on her face, the hailthorn slips down her panties letting her cock flop free."

Is the game supposed to use British English or American English? I suspect it's British English, but some words are spelled the American way consistently, like "favorite".

Midday, but it's dark:
View attachment 5563234

Better to write "Miss" here instead of "Ms."
View attachment 5563303

Needs to be said by Gaia:
View attachment 5563326

Probably needs to be gated behind transRobin as well:
View attachment 5564188

Thanks for pointing out these issues for me! I appreciate it. Going for British English but the online world has gotten some American spellings into my head lol.

 

[Quetzzz]

Thanks for pointing out these issues for me! I appreciate it. Going for British English but the online world has gotten some American spellings into my head lol.

My pleasure!
Would you like me to send you spellchecked files? I've noticed quite a few typos and issues with possessive forms, like "Jaces item" instead of "Jace's item".

 

[Professional Degenerate]

My pleasure!
Would you like me to send you spellchecked files? I've noticed quite a few typos and issues with possessive forms, like "Jaces item" instead of "Jace's item".

Nah, I think it's about time I take the time to actually add a proper spelling/grammar checker to my own IDE. I've already fixed what you pointed out ready for the next update.

 

[Quetzzz]

Nah, I think it's about time I take the time to actually add a proper spelling/grammar checker to my own IDE. I've already fixed what you pointed out ready for the next update.

If you're using vscode, then the Code Spell Checker plugin (cspell) is great for typos. Grammar is more complex, but an AI plugin or LanguageTool/Grammarly work in a pinch.

Spoiler: my vscode cspell settings for Twinewood

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