VN Ren'Py Twisted Memories [v0.9b] [BaiBai]

[X|Mortis]

I'm a fan of pussy juices / squirting etc... but it's a bit too much since two updates, you barely touch the girl, she squirt right away. It was handled a little better (just my opinion again) at the beginning (like Stephanie's solo scene or the first time with her).

Yeah, I can see what you mean. For what it is worth, perhaps there is too much of an easy/ "immediate" of a reaction that makes it less ecstatic and/or pleasurable. Perhaps to the point wherein one might feel a tad desensitized or view the scenario as too "comical" in scope because there was not much of an emphasis on a long-winded build-up leading up to the final squirty climax per-se.

There could be more of a buildup to make the overall gaming/viewing experience worth the pay-off, but regardless, the squirt scenes were pretty hot in my book, despite it being a little too easily attainable i.e.

 

[Xythurr]

Yeah, I can see what you mean. For what it is worth, perhaps there is too much of an easy/ "immediate" of a reaction that makes it less ecstatic and/or pleasurable. Perhaps to the point wherein one might feel a tad desensitized or view the scenario as too "comical" in scope because there was not much of an emphasis on a long-winded build-up leading up to the final squirty climax per-se.

There could be more of a buildup to make the overall gaming/viewing experience worth the pay-off, but regardless, the squirt scenes were pretty hot in my book, despite it being a little too easily attainable i.e.

It's one thing to squirt and it's another to spray like a fountain for minutes on end lol. Like I said they would be dead from dehydration at the rate they are losing fluids.
It would be funny if the dev made a spoof scene where their tits gradually deflated as they spewed girl cum.

 

[X|Mortis]

Like I said they would be dead from dehydration at the rate they are losing fluids

spray like a fountain for minutes on end lol

Bwahhaoahohaah, well the squirt scenes at times can feel a bit excessive in the sense that they may come off as "comical" but that never really detracted from my overall enjoyment of the scene tbh. If anything, (in my opinion) it made it, even more, hotter for me, the more they squirted I guess you could say, I love living life on the extreme

dev made a spoof scene where their tits gradually deflated as they spewed girl cum

That would be equal parts arousing and terrifying I would say... :O

Sounds like something straight out of a "Junji Ito" comic lmao

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[Xythurr]

Bwahhaoahohaah, well the squirt scenes at times can feel a bit excessive in the sense that they may come off as "comical" but that never really detracted from my overall enjoyment of the scene tbh. If anything, (in my opinion) it made it, even more, hotter for me, the more they squirted I guess you could say, I love living life on the extreme



That would be equal parts arousing and terrifying I would say... :O

Sounds like something straight out of a "Junji Ito" comic lmao

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Don't get me wrong I think the scenes are really hot too it just had me rollin when he had Mya by the booty and she was pretty much hosing down her own face in that scene lololol.

 

[Simpgor]

As far as the act as a bitch it's two-fold we know she was whoring around and that she ditched her former friends to the point of exclusion.

is there anything in game that says she was the one who "ditched them"? It would make more sense for MC to have stopped caring about her because she wasn't Catherine? I mean MC (with the mind of a 40+ year old man) simps pretty hard for Catherine imagine how an actual hormonal teen would be. Not to mention (unless it's stated otherwise) MC and leo were about on the same level in the OG timeline and leo can hardly talk to girls (emi/new blonde girl) so its safe to assume OG timeline MC would be about the same. Why would you want to be friends with someone who constantly simps for the most popular girl (in a committed relationship), who can only talk to you because they don't view you as a girl?

It's kind of a stretch to think that MC was a "normal" kid and then he became "an ugly bastard who goes back in time to...." vs him being a weird horny loser (like leo in current timeline) who grew up into a fat werid horny loser.

Oh also Stephani would have been just as horny the first time around but wouldn't have been able to do anything with MC or leo because they don't view her that way and by the time they do she is already drifted away and become a "slut" (1st timeline).

Honestly Steph is the most likely one to have had a "bad life" in the first timeline, Vicki isn't even in the final level of schooling her "hating" boys is just a bit above "cootie" levels and MC is clearly the most foggy about her (forget they were friends/liked each other etc), both the sisters married people that MC didn't like/he says arent good for them? And they don't let their incest obsessed impregnation fetish pervert brother see their children........ it sounds like they are reasonable people?

 

[Xythurr]

is there anything in game that says she was the one who "ditched them"? It would make more sense for MC to have stopped caring about her because she wasn't Catherine? I mean MC (with the mind of a 40+ year old man) simps pretty hard for Catherine imagine how an actual hormonal teen would be. Not to mention (unless it's stated otherwise) MC and leo were about on the same level in the OG timeline and leo can hardly talk to girls (emi/new blonde girl) so its safe to assume OG timeline MC would be about the same. Why would you want to be friends with someone who constantly simps for the most popular girl (in a committed relationship), who can only talk to you because they don't view you as a girl?

It's kind of a stretch to think that MC was a "normal" kid and then he became "an ugly bastard who goes back in time to...." vs him being a weird horny loser (like leo in current timeline) who grew up into a fat werid horny loser.

Oh also Stephani would have been just as horny the first time around but wouldn't have been able to do anything with MC or leo because they don't view her that way and by the time they do she is already drifted away and become a "slut" (1st timeline).

Honestly Steph is the most likely one to have had a "bad life" in the first timeline, Vicki isn't even in the final level of schooling her "hating" boys is just a bit above "cootie" levels and MC is clearly the most foggy about her (forget they were friends/liked each other etc), both the sisters married people that MC didn't like/he says arent good for them? And they don't let their incest obsessed impregnation fetish pervert brother see their children........ it sounds like they are reasonable people?

I agree Steph def most likely had a bad run of it. Viki seems pretty psychotic over something that is just jealously over some childhood promise the MC has forgotten.
You've gotta remember that in the OG timeline MC wasn't a twisted up UB he was just a kid with issues like the rest of them.
It took him years to reach the point we see at the start and he even thinks about that fact during the game.
Years of bitterness + regret and all that.
It's true though aside from things being generally crappy for even the ones that fared better a lot of the finer details are still up for conjecture.

EDIT: It's also a stretch to assume the MC was close enough for them to know what kinks he may or may not have been into as a kid. They shunned him pretty early on. At least with Emi it seems like he probably hurt her by not spending time with her etc before she became bitter and cold to him.
They kept their kids away because they looked down on him. We can't assume he was perving on them at that point because that fact hasn't been established.
Being horny doesn't mean you must become a slut. She already revealed she had deep emotional issues of self-worth to the MC and that's when he swore to never let her go to himself.

We can read the MC's mind they can't.

 

[BaiBai_]

Can someone remind me how are the girls in the original timeline? Kind of forget what they will be like since it has been too long from now...
Stephanie: Being public toilet in high school, everyone can fuck her except mc, act as a bitch and make friend with melena, forgot by mc and don't know what happen after high school?
Emily: Cold towards mc and hate him, marry someone and have ? child but don't let them meet mc since he is a pervert?
Alyvia: Same as her sister who hate mc, finally marry dillan(or break up with him and marry some rich old folk?) and have children with him but don't let mc meet them?
Jacky: Will soon get fired at that current timeline in game and have a hard time for a long period, upset by alyvia for her marriage and move out? Dead when mc get old?
Viki: Hate and bully mc harder and harder in high school, don't know what happen after graduated?
Cathrine: Marry aden and have children with him, live happily?
Leo: ???

There isn't actually that much to forget about what happened with the girls in the original timeline as the information about that is quite sparse in the game and most of that you got about right. Non of the main girls had a awfully fulfilling live though. Alyvia got it somewhat together after her first marriage but she remained scarred, Emily handled herself probably the best of all the girls but she grew very distant with everything from her past, Jacky pretty lonely and most of the time drunk, Cathrine very successful but childless and kind of bitter. Stephanie and Viktoria probably got it the worst.

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About Leo I actually haven't thought that much. I think he did alright though.

Cheers, it's not so much the style of art but a certain ethereal colouring. I'm not trained in art so unable to correctly describe what it is.


Cheers! Not criticising the art, just makes me feel queezy, like whenever I used 3D glasses.

Not completly sure what you mean, but I think I'm a bit more generous with the bloom then other hs2 devs which makes everything a bit more glowy.

I'm a fan of pussy juices / squirting etc... but it's a bit too much since two updates, you barely touch the girl, she squirt right away. It was handled a little better (just my opinion again) at the beginning (like Stephanie's solo scene or the first time with her).

I actually wanted to tone it down a bit from v0.7, but its kind of like when I get my hands on a boob slider, really hard to control myself.

 

[Xythurr]

There isn't actually that much to forget about what happened with the girls in the original timeline as the information about that is quite sparse in the game and most of that you got about right. Non of the main girls had a awfully fulfilling live though. Alyvia got it somewhat together after her first marriage but she remained scarred, Emily handled herself probably the best of all the girls but she grew very distant with everything from her past, Jacky pretty lonely and most of the time drunk, Cathrine very successful but childless and kind of bitter. Stephanie and Viktoria probably got it the worst.

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About Leo I actually haven't thought that much. I think he did alright though.


Not completly sure what you mean, but I think I'm a bit more generous with the bloom then other hs2 devs which makes everything a bit more glowy.


I actually wanted to tone it down a bit from v0.7, but its kind of like when I get my hands on a boob slider, really hard to control myself.

Thanks for the clarification ( I FUCKING CALLED IT!). Also why do you have to bring up my trauma like that? I've spent years trying to forget that cursed doujin! JOJO ENDING IS CANON TO ME!

 

[Xythurr]

BaiBai_ Also did I miss the info about Cat being successful but childless or is that info not in the game yet?? I thought SHE was the one that did alright! Aden really is a POS if he didn't give her any kids.

 

[RG80100]

I actually wanted to tone it down a bit from v0.7, but its kind of like when I get my hands on a boob slider, really hard to control myself.

No kink shaming

 

[Dogorti]

Also why do you have to bring up my trauma like that? I've spent years trying to forget that cursed doujin! JOJO ENDING IS CANON TO ME!

Tbf that doujin traumatizes you a little if you are 13 years old (like me when I read it) but after thinking about it a little the doujin is just mind breaking porn and trauma porn

I still jerked off too (?

 

[BaiBai_]

BaiBai_ Also did I miss the info about Cat being successful but childless or is that info not in the game yet?? I thought SHE was the one that did alright! Aden really is a POS if he didn't give her any kids.

Its not in the game and because the MC has no way of knowing what happened to any of them apart from his family, it also is kind of hard for me to think of a way to get it into the main game outside of some bonus content.

 

[arimfan]

Thank you BaiBai_ for letting me feel something with that Alyvia Romance scene

 

[Kitiuuu]

it seems like a cool game, but it looks like the author has a problem with doing it normally and it's hard

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[w123t4]

Tbf that doujin traumatizes you a little if you are 13 years old (like me when I read it) but after thinking about it a little the doujin is just mind breaking porn and trauma porn

I still jerked off too (?

That doujin is actually the best material to against drug-using, the government should really consider using it as a propaganda.

 

[Xythurr]

Tbf that doujin traumatizes you a little if you are 13 years old (like me when I read it) but after thinking about it a little the doujin is just mind breaking porn and trauma porn

I still jerked off too (?

I was older than 13 by far and it turned my stomach but it was like watching a disaster I had to know how it ended.

 

[Xythurr]

Its not in the game and because the MC has no way of knowing what happened to any of them apart from his family, it also is kind of hard for me to think of a way to get it into the main game outside of some bonus content.

Well you answering these questions is more than enough for me. Your engagement with your community is truly appreciated and I think you deserve my support.
Thanks again!

 

[Simpgor]

EDIT: It's also a stretch to assume the MC was close enough for them to know what kinks he may or may not have been into as a kid.

I don't think the incest fetish has to do with them being close (nice) to him? Steph doesn't call the fetish out because they are nice to him after all

Personally it sounds weirder to me that MC didn't have an incest fetish growing up (og timeline) and then after his sisters were "mean" to him (ignored him/not being Catherine) he stops talking to them only to develop one (maybe to try to fix the issues between them?) Rather than MC has impossibly attractive women living with him, his mom still being freaky with dad while young, or any "accidental" perving done during childhood. Thinking about it we have gotten a direct explanation for the impregnation fetish (his mind is still that of an old man vs a teen) but we haven't gotten a reason/first example of the incest portion

Was it made clear how old their children were in the OG timeline? If they were emi age (which MC is fine with going after) you would have to say that MC incest fetish started a decade after he stopped talking to them for neither of the sisters to know about it. It's been awhile since I've played the intro but is the MC saying he is the one who "got worse over time"? Because if he is then I guarantee everyone else noticed he was getting worse first

 

[w123t4]

Its not in the game and because the MC has no way of knowing what happened to any of them apart from his family, it also is kind of hard for me to think of a way to get it into the main game outside of some bonus content.

And by now it will be impossible for mc knowing it since he is in the past now and cannot go "back".
Or maybe there will be some chances that we can see some "back tot the future" scene likes mc some how travel back to the original timeline or get help from the people from that time to make him understand these information?

 

[Xythurr]

I don't think the incest fetish has to do with them being close (nice) to him? Steph doesn't call the fetish out because they are nice to him after all

Personally it sounds weirder to me that MC didn't have an incest fetish growing up (og timeline) and then after his sisters were "mean" to him (ignored him/not being Catherine) he stops talking to them only to develop one (maybe to try to fix the issues between them?) Rather than MC has impossibly attractive women living with him, his mom still being freaky with dad while young, or any "accidental" perving done during childhood. Thinking about it we have gotten a direct explanation for the impregnation fetish (his mind is still that of an old man vs a teen) but we haven't gotten a reason/first example of the incest portion

Was it made clear how old their children were in the OG timeline? If they were emi age (which MC is fine with going after) you would have to say that MC incest fetish started a decade after he stopped talking to them for neither of the sisters to know about it. It's been awhile since I've played the intro but is the MC saying he is the one who "got worse over time"? Because if he is then I guarantee everyone else noticed he was getting worse first

That's all very interesting but I didn't have an incest kink growing up either and I still don't IRL but I developed one in my porn habits through the process of gradual corruption.
We're all degenerates on this site so maybe that happened with the MC but more extreme. I think a lot of it was revenge fantasies where he dominated his hateful sisters with his manhood but who knows?
EDIT: We should stop assuming he was trying to molest their kids. There is no data that supports this. What we know is that he had a bad relationship with his sisters.