VN Ren'Py Twisted Memories [v0.9b] [BaiBai]

[zerosu13]

i love this game! i need more plz!

 

[Disco-Inferno]

Great premise, lots of potential for kinky scenes and storylines but, man could the dev have been a little less comical with the breasts sizes? Nothing pulls me out of these games quite like ridiculously unrealistic proportions. Especially when they just look like balls attached to a chest rather than having any weight and give to them... Sigh. I'll give it a go though might be good enough to distract me from it all.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I really love this about this story, how young him was really just blind to all the love and potential that he had. Will we ever see what happened in the Ugly Bastard timeline? Like how did Stephanie turn into the Z school bicycle if she was such close friends wit MC in Y school?

It's certainly something I don't want to see, and I don't think we will.

I can see very easy the plan: to take Katherine as future wife, both sisters and mom will stay in family as his lovers. His teacher will be his secret lover, mother of his secret children and the boss of the company. Stefanie is nice, but I don't like little bit her character.
So - she pass.
Victoria - can be only lover.
The best chance is Katherine.

I go the romantic route with all the main LIs, so I see them all as MC lovers.

I do not believe you. Many small details show us that this is not his past. It's impossible to not remember people and things and not to see differences between his real past and this reality.
The same totally new people do not jump from nowhere as nothing special.
He must remember Stefanie. He did not know, who she is. She is one of the details of the parallel universe. In his past she doesn't exist.
I can write the list of all these details.

I personally trust what the Dev says more than your theories. I really don't see a reason for him to be lying.

 

[Zareem]

It's certainly something I don't want to see, and I don't think we will.



I go the romantic route with all the main LIs, so I see them all as MC lovers.



I personally trust what the Dev says more than your theories. I really don't see a reason for him to be lying.

Man Id love to know & see what would happen if next update the kid MC is returned back to his kid body after a few days of old man being in control. Waking up thinkings its just another day and then seeing everyone behave differently to him due to what old man did when he was in control for a couple of days. I wonder if theres ever gonna be a what-if like that in the game. Maybe as part of a dream sequence.

 

[Jacob VK]

Compressed version?

 

[Gojii]

The MC has a pretty bad memory, that's true. And while I would agree that its kind of weird for him not to remember his relationship with characters such as Viktoria or Stephanie, I don't think totally unrealistic. If someone spends decades alone and wallowing in his own thoughts I definitely can see him forgetting and misremembering quite a lot of stuff.

Imagine dude trying to argue with you about your own game's plot. I ignored his ass apparently at one point and now I see why. Looking forward to seeing what you do next.

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As to the Game structure, I've been wondering if the game will follow 2/3 patterns to get an idea of the flow of things:

1)Is the plot to stay somewhat linear with just the nuance of romance/corruption as it seems to be atm with just a handful of days?

2)Is the intent to be like "MC has a week/month/whatever to fix his life"
and/or
2b)At a certain point MC will have a sandboxy interaction system after say, the initial week (to interact with the LIs as he sees fit)
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Also, with these, is there some intent of some sort of time skip intended as a plot device at some point? (Be it as part of plot, like MC is now in "Z school" arc or a post game "here's what happened after the story based on MC/points") Kind of curious.

 

[HentaiKami]

The MC has a pretty bad memory, that's true. And while I would agree that its kind of weird for him not to remember his relationship with characters such as Viktoria or Stephanie, I don't think totally unrealistic. If someone spends decades alone and wallowing in his own thoughts I definitely can see him forgetting and misremembering quite a lot of stuff.

I mean, i'm bit younger than the MC when he kicks the bucket at the start, and i can honestly say that i only remember some stuff from my school years. So it's not unrealistic that MC would have forgotten things with Viktoria and Stephanie.

 

[Gojii]

I mean, i'm bit younger than the MC when he kicks the bucket at the start, and i can honestly say that i only remember some stuff from my school years. So it's not unrealistic that MC would have forgotten things with Viktoria and Stephanie.

Real. I'm barely 30 and occasionally I'm recalling people, including girls I grew up around (and yes including two I no doubt 100% missed chances with and a couple more that were probable... brb about to kms...I'm joking btw) so I think this game is VERY realistic in that regard actually of MC not realizing affection from girls and being all up in his own head.

I'm fortunately not in as shit a state as MC nor did I become a wizard, but man do I sometimes get him in some ways.

But now we know the secret guys. Unlocking your warlock powers at 40 lets you time travel.

 

[DatWanGai]

Damn, this makes me hope reincarnation to your previous self ain't real. My school days were even shittier than the present (main regret is I should have simply burned down the school with everyone locked inside and did my time in juvie, would have been simpler albeit different set of bullshit to deal with).

That's the thing, if you can remember the time and place you can actively avoid things.
But I do get what you're saying, if I could choose a time to go back to....It would be my high school days, my personality is way too different for going back further than that and the big decisions I would like to do differently started in high school. Not to mention, I still remember some of the winning numbers of some big jackpot in the lottery.
Downside is, a small chance now can cause a big difference later.....

 

[milidornaela]

The MC has a pretty bad memory, that's true. And while I would agree that its kind of weird for him not to remember his relationship with characters such as Viktoria or Stephanie, I don't think totally unrealistic. If someone spends decades alone and wallowing in his own thoughts I definitely can see him forgetting and misremembering quite a lot of stuff.

The main character "has a pretty bad memory", and in the same time he is a teenager genius who has plans to build the company, have a lot of money, change his past, save his family, all alone, in the body of 9-10 years old boy. Yes, very "realistic". I believe you.
I can remind just about his best results in math, speak about the exam in math, where he very easy and playfully has the best marks and results. With a "bad" memory. Again.
In one moment he has no memory, when it is comfortable for the story, in another he is pretty smart, active, collect all women (sounds too well for reality and not for a dream), has no mistakes and is lucky in every step. Yes, I totally "believe" in your words and arguments.

 

[starkj]

Going back in time to your high school days would only make sense if you actually remembered everything from back then, otherwise you would be so out of your depth in relation to what you were learning in school/ hobbies/ what is happening around you ( country/world).

 

[milidornaela]

It's impossible not to remember all people from your class in the school. Also 20-25 years later. All these faces etc.
Also your love, enemies etc.

 

[milidornaela]

I mean, i'm bit younger than the MC when he kicks the bucket at the start, and i can honestly say that i only remember some stuff from my school years. So it's not unrealistic that MC would have forgotten things with Viktoria and Stephanie.

It's a huge difference - you went 12 years with the same people in high school or a couple of years in some college or school after high school. In the first case, you will remember a lot of details; in the second case, you will even forget the names and surnames of these people. It's just high school. The protagonist has seen these people every day for more than a decade. Enough not to forget.

 

[HentaiKami]

It's a huge difference - you went 12 years with the same people in high school or a couple of years in some college or school after high school. In the first case, you will remember a lot of details; in the second case, you will even forget the names and surnames of these people. It's just high school. The protagonist has seen these people every day for more than a decade. Enough not to forget.

I mean, some of the people i went to school with were my friends and we knew before primary school and were in same classes all the way through high school, yet i still don't remember everything. It all depends quite a lot if i have had active contact with them after high school also.

 

[milidornaela]

I personally trust what the Dev says more than your theories. I really don't see a reason for him to be lying.

I didn't say a single word that he was lying. I just pointed out the details that themselves scream that the reality and the truth is completely different. The author has the right to make mistakes - he is also only a human being.

 

[Small-pp-22]

It's impossible not to remember all people from your class in the school. Also 20-25 years later. All these faces etc.
Also your love, enemies etc.

Dude, I have no idea what my hs crush looked like anymore and I forgot her family name, I barely remember anything before that, so no, it's not "impossible" and besides, you are arguing with the dev about his own game? The hell?
His memory holes are also OBVIOUSLY a plot point, why he forgot Stephani and Viktoria, why his sisters hated him, he forgot all of that and there has to be a reason , the character himself says it

 

[Gojii]

He only hung out with Stephanie for like a year or so, and clearly even by his own recollection was all up in his own head back then anyhow/dense af. I don't see why anyone is making a massive deal out of this. He was distant with her and her needing someone to be there for is why she thotted out in high school. MC wasn't childhood friends with her like he was with his best bud.

He wasn't hanging around with Stephanie from start to end. He played around for maybe a couple years as a kid with Viki, until she started getting crazy jealous the MC wouldn't look her way (MC not understanding why she was so shitty to him is a key point of the entire plot, like hello?). He was well over 40 when he died, and had been obsessing over another girl that time.

How hard is this to get that someone is going to forget a lot of details by that point, especially when he kept obsessing over a handful of specific details/memories?

The game is literally called "Twisted Memories" of course his perception of the past is going to be screwed up. MC even admits to himself how he has a lot of things all screwed up from hyperfocusing on his own warped perceptions of people. Like what are some people so pissy about?

 

[Small-pp-22]

It's a huge difference - you went 12 years with the same people in high school or a couple of years in some college or school after high school. In the first case, you will remember a lot of details; in the second case, you will even forget the names and surnames of these people. It's just high school. The protagonist has seen these people every day for more than a decade. Enough not to forget.

Who says he has? Not everyone spends years with the same classroom

 

[Small-pp-22]

He only hung out with Stephanie for like a year or so, and clearly even by his own recollection was all up in his own head back then anyhow/dense af. I don't see why anyone is making a massive deal out of this. He was distant with her and her needing someone to be there for is why she thotted out in high school. MC wasn't childhood friends with her like he was with his best bud.

He wasn't hanging around with Stephanie from start to end. He played around for maybe a couple years as a kid with Viki, until she started getting crazy jealous the MC wouldn't look her way. He was well over 40 when he died, and had been obsessing over another girl that time.

How hard is this to get that someone is going to forget a lot of details by that point, especially when he kept obsessing over a handful of specific details/memories?

The game is literally called "Twisted Memories" of course his perception of the past is going to be screwed up. MC even admits to himself how he has a lot of things all screwed up from hyperfocusing on his own warped perceptions of people. Like what are some people so pissy about?

EXACTLY!!!!


The game is named TWISTED MEMORIES, and a big part of the plot is MC's having holes in his memories, IN BOTH LIVES

 

[Gojii]

Who says he has? Not everyone spends years with the same classroom

Plus there are clearly at least two classes in their grade level to boot as part of the plot, maybe more.