VN Ren'Py Twisted Memories [v0.9b] [BaiBai]

[Dogorti]

BaiBai
Mar 17, 2024 04:30 pm
Development update

I had some problems with my PC over the past week but I got it back earlier today and everything seems to be working again. It didn't really hinder the development too much though. I couldn't continue with the mapping but for writing my laptop is still just good enough.

In terms of writing the scenes I got quite far into the update, but I would consider this more like a first draft without any of the variations. The morning scene turned out a bit different than I initially visualized it but I think I like how the first variation turned out. For the corruption variation of the Alyvia stuff I'm still struggling a bit with how to pick everything back up but for now I think I will just continue with the first draft until I go over it again.

I also had a pretty spontaneous idea for something for the Julia scene but I'm not quite sure about it as it seems a bit too porny. I may just write it and see how it turns out and in the end I intend there to be a few variations of the scene anyway, so maybe its fine if one of them is a bit silly.

For the Viktoria stuff I haven't reached the high points of the update yet, but so far the scenes went pretty smooth. But that's probably not to surprising as I've been thinking of how to do them for quite a while now.

Anyway, I'm kind of in a writing mood right now, so even though my PC works again I will probably continue to do some writing over the next week. Sooner or later I will hit a roadblock anyway and then some mapping will make for a nice change.

 

[Ligmawalls]

I noticed there's one more scene in the gallery of the official android version than the Cebs joker leader mod (after the Lola/Emily bj scene).
Is this a bug? Is there supposed to be an Alyvia scene?

 

[Master of Puppets]

Damn, this is amazing. I've seen the old dude travelling to his own past before, but never so well done. It's great how his memory of the time he's gone to isn't that good, some of them have him acting like he's been there all along and you wonder why they even bothered with the time travel thing at all. It's great how with his decades of life experience in his young strong body that the schoolgirls around him don't stand a chance. And these girls are all incredibly sexy. He just needs to get Steph to accept him having other girls and it will be perfect, I don't like cheating on her.
Mindbreaking Cathrine on the full corruption route is damn hot too, never seen such a good Netori in a VN.
It needs a proofreader pretty badly, there are a ton of typos, though other than that the writing is really good.

 

[Dogorti]

Damn, this is amazing. I've seen the old dude travelling to his own past before, but never so well done. It's great how his memory of the time he's gone to isn't that good, some of them have him acting like he's been there all along and you wonder why they even bothered with the time travel thing at all. It's great how with his decades of life experience in his young strong body that the schoolgirls around him don't stand a chance. And these girls are all incredibly sexy. He just needs to get Steph to accept him having other girls and it will be perfect, I don't like cheating on her.
Mindbreaking Cathrine on the full corruption route is damn hot too, never seen such a good Netori in a VN.
It needs a proofreader pretty badly, there are a ton of typos, though other than that the writing is really good.

Yeah, one of the best "new" games on this forum. And kinda underrated too.

 

[dolfe67]

Overview:
Twisted Memories is a game about an ugly bastard that travels back in time and turns into his teenage self.
What will an ordinary looking teenager with the mind of a perverted old man be able to do?
How many of the woman from his past will he be able to corrupt?
Will he build the harem he always dreamed about, or will he maybe find the true love he was always missing in his life?
The choice is yours.

With that premise you would think it's a game about corruption and dark themes only, but it's actually pretty sweet especially on the love routes.

I enjoy the game a lot but I have a gripe: too many typos. Also some clipping with clothes. And a personal thing: boobs too big, especially the mom, it's kinda ridiculous.

 

[Cherubin25]

boobs too big

I see those words, but they dont make sense. Can you even build a sentence with those words?

 

[Kansier]

I noticed there's one more scene in the gallery of the official android version than the Cebs joker leader mod (after the Lola/Emily bj scene).
Is this a bug? Is there supposed to be an Alyvia scene?

The unofficial port is 0.8a and the official android got updated to 0.8b it got another scene but you need to look at the character profile to find it.

 

[Gojii]

I see those words, but they dont make sense. Can you even build a sentence with those words?

The only way those three words should ever be arranged is (she has really) "big boobs too" ( )

 

[TheBlub]

There isn't actually that much to forget about what happened with the girls in the original timeline as the information about that is quite sparse in the game and most of that you got about right. Non of the main girls had a awfully fulfilling live though. Alyvia got it somewhat together after her first marriage but she remained scarred, Emily handled herself probably the best of all the girls but she grew very distant with everything from her past, Jacky pretty lonely and most of the time drunk, Cathrine very successful but childless and kind of bitter. Stephanie and Viktoria probably got it the worst.

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About Leo I actually haven't thought that much. I think he did alright though.


Not completly sure what you mean, but I think I'm a bit more generous with the bloom then other hs2 devs which makes everything a bit more glowy.


I actually wanted to tone it down a bit from v0.7, but its kind of like when I get my hands on a boob slider, really hard to control myself.

so the mc travling back in time is pretty much an universal blessing for everyone involved. the only one maybe screwed is aiden. but i can´t imagine his live being good being with Cathrine & leading a empty, bitter live.
maybe his cheating got more intense & got beaten down with that, as shady things tend to work that way for most (gambling, drugs,... there are lots of things that can lead aiden astray, seeing how easily he resorts to cheating & is easily swayed/blackmailed)

so, how about giving aiden a kind of good ending with him finding joy in being cucked? kinda figured it heading that way either way.

 

[lorkdubo]

There isn't actually that much to forget about what happened with the girls in the original timeline as the information about that is quite sparse in the game and most of that you got about right. Non of the main girls had a awfully fulfilling live though. Alyvia got it somewhat together after her first marriage but she remained scarred, Emily handled herself probably the best of all the girls but she grew very distant with everything from her past, Jacky pretty lonely and most of the time drunk, Cathrine very successful but childless and kind of bitter. Stephanie and Viktoria probably got it the worst.

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About Leo I actually haven't thought that much. I think he did alright though.


Not completly sure what you mean, but I think I'm a bit more generous with the bloom then other hs2 devs which makes everything a bit more glowy.


I actually wanted to tone it down a bit from v0.7, but its kind of like when I get my hands on a boob slider, really hard to control myself.

Vicky ended up all alone? What?? I thought she ended quite well after being apart from MC. Was MC such an inflection point in her life?
Did Catherine end up with Aiden after all? I mean, if they remain in a dead marriage, it appears like.

 

[Xythurr]

Vicky ended up all alone? What?? I thought she ended quite well after being apart from MC. Was MC such an inflection point in her life?
Did Catherine end up with Aiden after all? I mean, if they remain in a dead marriage, it appears like.

The devs response was due to a conversation where I argued that the unhinged way Vicki was treating MC would make her end up as an angry cat lady while the other guys acted like I was retarded and she was somehow emotionally healthy and normal.

I was also pointing out how shitty things turned out for everyone else especially most likely Steph. Boy they didn't like that lol. Then the dev came in and confirmed everything. You would think it would be obvious but I guess they read a different AVN than me.

Look at Vicki's behavior and honestly ask yourself if you can see someone like that turning out alright without a dramatic change occurring.

EDIT: Mixed up Vicki and Cat came back and fixed it.

 

[Xythurr]

Yeah I got that after playing the recent update, thought it was aden going to cuck the mc, and steph being a whore before and her favorite genre being NTR, that's why I also thought this was going to happen into multiple endings and multiple options.

The only person Aden could ever successfully cuck is himself.

 

[lorkdubo]

The only person Aden could ever successfully cuck is himself.

In the two previous responses, you mean Vicky, right? Catherine is the goody two shoes one.
In regards to Stephanie, i was edging towards her going into a self-destructive spiral in her life or MC having 100% the wrong idea. It appears it was the most obvious choice. Dev compares her life to Metamorphosis, which is not good at all.
I'm still baffled that Vicky ended so badly. I mean, even if her personality got really distorted and hateful, she is still a successful athlete, it appears, and not atrocious academically. I mean, she was hateful towards one specific person, and maybe that did skew her towards a progressive, hateful feminist mindset?

 

[Xythurr]

In the two previous responses, you mean Vicky, right? Catherine is the goody two shoes one.
In regards to Stephanie, i was edging towards her going into a self-destructive spiral in her life or MC having 100% the wrong idea. It appears it was the most obvious choice. Dev compares her life to Metamorphosis, which is not good at all.
I'm still baffled that Vicky ended so badly. I mean, even if her personality got really distorted and hateful, she is still a successful athlete, it appears, and not atrocious academically. I mean, she was hateful towards one specific person, and maybe that did skew her towards a progressive, hateful feminist mindset?

Yes I meant Vicky...total brainfart moment will edit my post. Thanks for correcting me! Yes she becomes a cat lady according to dev. You can figure out how she got there by her behavior lol.

EDIT: I called it with Steph pointing out RL knowledge of how super promiscuous girls at young ages usually meet tragic ends and pissed a lot of people off but the facts are what they are.

 

[Gojii]

In the two previous responses, you mean Vicky, right? Catherine is the goody two shoes one.
In regards to Stephanie, i was edging towards her going into a self-destructive spiral in her life or MC having 100% the wrong idea. It appears it was the most obvious choice. Dev compares her life to Metamorphosis, which is not good at all.
I'm still baffled that Vicky ended so badly. I mean, even if her personality got really distorted and hateful, she is still a successful athlete, it appears, and not atrocious academically. I mean, she was hateful towards one specific person, and maybe that did skew her towards a progressive, hateful feminist mindset?

I know multiple classmates from HS that were genuinely attractive athletes who went onto college on scholarships who.... things did not pan out well, and two of them I know of are explicitly headed on that trajectory not even having to do with feminism per se, but just very bitter/angry women that couldnt hold down relationships (I'm in my early 30s, and I don't see those two that come to mind changing at this point ), they are the "tiktok" types who rant on there almost every day.

 

[lorkdubo]

I know multiple classmates from HS that were genuinely attractive athletes who went onto college on scholarships who.... things did not pan out well, and two of them I know of are explicitly headed on that trajectory not even having to do with feminism per se, but just very bitter/angry women that couldnt hold down relationships (I'm in my early 30s, and I don't see those two that come to mind changing at this point ), they are the "tiktok" types who rant on there almost every day.

Something like Johnny Manziel?

 

[Gojii]

Something like Johnny Manziel?

Prior to the ruling letting college athletes make money on NIL deals. At least Manziel can make bank off his fuckup with media/podcasts and a possible book deal now that he cleaned up his act, plus he was a trust fund kid anyhow iirc.

More the bad personalities. Very restless types that are never satisfied/unrealistic mentalities and like to blame other people. The two I'm thinking of were not the nicest people back then, so it wasn't surprising to see they don't have a husband or even got knocked up by some dbag that I'm aware of.

I can see the sort of comparison to Victoria being an angry type of girl but athletically gifted and seeing a couple people IRL I graduated with that loosely fit the same character type.

My graduating class alone was over 400 people, (like 478 or something? so more like 500 almost) so it's always amusing when just about every type of person in "totally not western" settings seem familiar.

 

[The Senior Perv]

The devs response was due to a conversation where I argued that the unhinged way Vicki was treating MC would make her end up as an angry cat lady while the other guys acted like I was retarded and she was somehow emotionally healthy and normal.

I was also pointing out how shitty things turned out for everyone else especially most likely Steph. Boy they didn't like that lol. Then the dev came in and confirmed everything. You would think it would be obvious but I guess they read a different AVN than me.

Look at Vicki's behavior and honestly ask yourself if you can see someone like that turning out alright without a dramatic change occurring.

EDIT: Mixed up Vicki and Cat came back and fixed it.

Funny how everything went as you predicted. Viki reminds me of Superalloy Darkshine from One Punch Man: physically strong but mentally weak. So sensible that she prefers to deal with her feelings in a very destructive way.

Contrary to the doujinshi where this AVN is based on, every love interest ended up in a not so happy future in the original timeline, with Emily being the only one achieving a better life at the cost of distancing herself from her family. Ms Clements' fate wasn't mentioned, but I suppose she also didn't had a good life, knowing how unhappy she was with her husband and that her daughter had a very cold attitude towards her.

 

[Xythurr]

Funny how everything went as you predicted. Viki reminds me of Superalloy Darkshine from One Punch Man: physically strong but mentally weak. So sensible that she prefers to deal with her feelings in a very destructive way.

Contrary to the doujinshi where this AVN is based on, every love interest ended up in a not so happy future in the original timeline, with Emily being the only one achieving a better life at the cost of distancing herself from her family. Ms Clements' fate wasn't mentioned, but I suppose she also didn't had a good life, knowing how unhappy she was with her husband and that her daughter had a very cold attitude towards her.

Whats the name of the doujin if you can recall and don't mind sharing? I would like to check it out.

 

[XKL27]

so, how about giving aiden a kind of good ending with him finding joy in being cucked? kinda figured it heading that way either way.

I don't mind Aiden having a kind of good ending, but I don't want it to have anything to do with the MC or the MC's LIs. Plenty of netorase games out there if it's your thing.