VN Ren'Py Twisted Memories [v0.9b] [BaiBai]

[mentosa]

I would prefer Malena over Catherine.

Based.

 

[jI11jaCksjAkk]

im this close to droping this shit over the idiotic best friend trope

 

[jvbatman]

Just finished my second playthrough doing the seduction route. It's definitely the superior route IMO. Really enjoyed this game and the animations are top notch.

But for the love of all that is holy, please hire a proofreader Baibai! There are SOOO many typos and mispellings in almost every single line of dialogue. It feels like you wrote the entire script in one go and never looked at it again afterward. Most of the time you can figure out what you were trying to say but there are several lines of dialogue that are just completely indecipherable.

 

[Xythurr]

i made a comment the other day about how aiden wouldnt mind me banging his mom after i give him his girl and everyone thought i was talking about leo and malena or something. they just didnt understand, i dont want catherine, and since MC is already basically blackmailing her, if aiden ever does get with her, it requires the MC letting him have his girlfriend back. but i got tired of explaining i was commenting on what id like, not what is happening. aside from feeling bad about cucking leo, definitely prefer malena over catherine

You do know the blackmail only occurs during the corruption route right? It's not a set in stone story beat that's worth all the work it would take to swap out a different girl and make content for her.
Baibai has already had to scale his vision back a bit and I don't want anything that will add to his burden.

THIS STORY MUST CONTINUE

 

[MaxRichard]

definitely prefer malena over catherine

You! Out!!

 

[Phase_01]

Just finished my second playthrough doing the seduction route. It's definitely the superior route IMO. Really enjoyed this game and the animations are top notch.

But for the love of all that is holy, please hire a proofreader Baibai! There are SOOO many typos and mispellings in almost every single line of dialogue. It feels like you wrote the entire script in one go and never looked at it again afterward. Most of the time you can figure out what you were trying to say but there are several lines of dialogue that are just completely indecipherable.

I've done half the game in a seduction route but then changed to corruption, what would you say makes seduction better?
From what I've played most of the dialogue is the same, but theres some dialogue changes here and there right? Not to mention some scenes being route exclusive.

Also yea BaiBai def needs a proofreader or use chatgpt or something lol

 

[jvbatman]

I've done half the game in a seduction route but then changed to corruption, what would you say makes seduction better?
From what I've played most of the dialogue is the same, but theres some dialogue changes here and there right? Not to mention some scenes being route exclusive.

Also yea BaiBai def needs a proofreader or use chatgpt or something lol

As someone else mentioned in this thread before Corruption feels like you're going back to your creepy old man ways and seduction feels like you're becoming a better person. Corruption is also just a lot more rapey (which I know some people are into). The shit you do to Cathrine for example is completely fucked. In the Seduction path it feels like she's actually falling for you. I don't mind Corruption when it's just about kinky S&M stuff but the Corruption path in this game really feels like it crosses a line.

 

[duckydoodoo]

You do know the blackmail only occurs during the corruption route right? It's not a set in stone story beat that's worth all the work it would take to swap out a different girl and make content for her.
Baibai has already had to scale his vision back a bit and I don't want anything that will add to his burden.

THIS STORY MUST CONTINUE

i cant tell if you are a being facetious or are simping for catherine. so, imma just answer with, durrrrrrrr huh?

 

[Xythurr]

i cant tell if you are a being facetious or are simping for catherine. so, imma just answer with, durrrrrrrr huh?

The fact that you imply "simping" took place anywhere in my very clear post tells me that your reading comprehension is either nonexistent or you're being deliberately obtuse because you got butthurt by a differing and logical opinion.

I'm going to assume "Durrrr" is the extent of your capability for higher thought going forward.

 

[Phase_01]

As someone else mentioned in this thread before Corruption feels like you're going back to your creepy old man ways and seduction feels like you're becoming a better person. Corruption is also just a lot more rapey (which I know some people are into). The shit you do to Cathrine for example is completely fucked. In the Seduction path it feels like she's actually falling for you. I don't mind Corruption when it's just about kinky S&M stuff but the Corruption path in this game really feels like it crosses a line.

Yea that's fair, that Catherine scene is like the only one where I've been contemplating whether I should go back to seduction route and just watch corruption through gallery cuz of how fucked the context was, but then the actual lewd part of that scene without the context I enjoyed lol and wouldn't be surprised if the more degenerate scenes are on corruption route.

 

[Alandir]

Honestly I think there's not really one corruption route.
Both routes are about corruption. In one route you're being a selfish bastard about it. In the other route you try to be a better person and understand the people around you on a personal level.
But it's still corruption. The MC is still changing the girls, trying to get them to accept a harem. He's still dominant during sex.

 

[colobancuz]

Honestly I think there's not really one corruption route.
Both routes are about corruption. In one route you're being a selfish bastard about it. In the other route you try to be a better person and understand the people around you on a personal level.
But it's still corruption. The MC is still changing the girls, trying to get them to accept a harem. He's still dominant during sex.

It's an argument about concepts, seduction is also a kind of corruption, only more subtle. And I like it better for that reason - more subtlety and finesse.

 

[Xythurr]

Honestly I think there's not really one corruption route.
Both routes are about corruption. In one route you're being a selfish bastard about it. In the other route you try to be a better person and understand the people around you on a personal level.
But it's still corruption. The MC is still changing the girls, trying to get them to accept a harem. He's still dominant during sex.

I see your point but I'll raise another and that is we're learning that a whole lot of these girls (Cat aside) were already pretty perverted on their own.

Emily? She actually fell in love and started making moves herself but there was a bit of mutual corrupting going on there. She's pretty damn proactive.

Steph? Lol yeah..

Alyvia? Just as deviant as her brother if not more so she just hid it well.

Lola? Straight up classic pervert. Thought the MC having a harem was cool while also sniffing nasty male underwear.

Ms Clements? Some corruption there but he wouldn't have gotten so far if she didn't have certain predilections for younger males... I don't shame women on how they dress but she knew exactly what she was doing to that middle school of horny teenage boys.

Mom? Confirmed nympho who seduced an adult while still being jailbait herself.

Mya? She may be getting corrupted but we all know she already fakes being a slut due to low self-esteem which is a bit pervy in itself.

Julia? MEGA PERVERT who even fantasizes about her own daughter in sexual situations while letting the boy she's trying to hook up with her daughter secretly include her in the fun.

Victoria? Definitely corruption and manipulation on said route. Seduction route she does the ho math and tries to steal MC with the power of pussy and even let's him cream her on their first time. I'd say she's a mixed bag.

Doctor remains to be seen. These are just some of my observations/opinions but it definitely ain't just the MC who's a deviant in this game.

 

[Alandir]

I see your point but I'll raise another and that is we're learning that a whole lot of these girls (Cat aside) were already pretty perverted on their own.

Corruption isn't just about sex though. It's about corrupting and changing a person's values and beliefs.
Steph may be perverted, but she's still looking for a normal relationship. Getting her to accept a harem is corruption.
Getting Viki who was barely interested in sex to compete for you sexually is corruption.
Getting Alyvia, who was disgusted at the fact that her brother looks at her lustfully, to fall in love with sucking his dick is definetly corruption.
Ms clements is very concerned with being a professional teacher and gets made to agree to a date with a student.
Even Mya. Getting her from being a one-night-stand kindof girl to agreeing to not seeing other guys is corruption even if it goes in the opposite direction that corruption usually moves in.
I could go on, but I think you get my point.

 

[Xythurr]

Corruption isn't just about sex though. It's about corrupting and changing a person's values and beliefs.
Steph may be perverted, but she's still looking for a normal relationship. Getting her to accept a harem is corruption.
Getting Viki who was barely interested in sex to compete for you sexually is corruption.
Getting Alyvia, who was disgusted at the fact that her brother looks at her lustfully, to fall in love with sucking his dick is definetly corruption.
Ms clements is very concerned with being a professional teacher and gets made to agree to a date with a student.
Even Mya. Getting her from being a one-night-stand kindof girl to agreeing to not seeing other guys is corruption even if it goes in the opposite direction that corruption usually moves in.
I could go on, but I think you get my point.

I think some of the things we've listed can be true at once. My point was that most of these girls weren't exactly what we would call traditionally wholesome either lol.
MC is just expanding their repertoire of kinks.

I will say that you can change someone's mind and viewpoint without it being corruption though. Corruption really applies to the darker manipulative/brainwashing path. Fits the game path well. I don't think introducing girls who are already perverted to new perversions is really corruption.
They were morally corrupt to begin with.
Seduction route has plenty of simply changing their minds IMO.

 

[Ford Mustang]

I see your point but I'll raise another and that is we're learning that a whole lot of these girls (Cat aside) were already pretty perverted on their own.

Emily? She actually fell in love and started making moves herself but there was a bit of mutual corrupting going on there. She's pretty damn proactive.

Steph? Lol yeah..

Alyvia? Just as deviant as her brother if not more so she just hid it well.

Lola? Straight up classic pervert. Thought the MC having a harem was cool while also sniffing nasty male underwear.

Ms Clements? Some corruption there but he wouldn't have gotten so far if she didn't have certain predilections for younger males... I don't shame women on how they dress but she knew exactly what she was doing to that middle school of horny teenage boys.

Mom? Confirmed nympho who seduced an adult while still being jailbait herself.

Mya? She may be getting corrupted but we all know she already fakes being a slut due to low self-esteem which is a bit pervy in itself.

Julia? MEGA PERVERT who even fantasizes about her own daughter in sexual situations while letting the boy she's trying to hook up with her daughter secretly include her in the fun.

Victoria? Definitely corruption and manipulation on said route. Seduction route she does the ho math and tries to steal MC with the power of pussy and even let's him cream her on their first time. I'd say she's a mixed bag.

Doctor remains to be seen. These are just some of my observations/opinions but it definitely ain't just the MC who's a deviant in this game.

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How is Mya a fake slut she been around & trying to convince Alyvia it's okay to lose her virginity in one night stand.

And we still didnt talk about Ms.Clement daughter, she obviously a gyaru & love doing everything her mom against.yknow what type she will be

 

[Ford Mustang]

I dont get Leo gf hype, Steph already said she is the type that jump on any popular guy in school ."pick me"girl

I hope Dev show her nature in the game so people will see why MC dont like her that much

 

[Xythurr]

How is Mya a fake slut she been around & trying to convince Alyvia it's okay to lose her virginity in one night stand.

And we still didnt talk about Ms.Clement daughter, she obviously a gyaru & love doing everything her mom against.yknow what type she will be

Go back and rewatch her scene when the MC is at her house. She is clearly putting on a fake front and almost tells him so a couple of times.
She is not sleeping around and there are no other guys.
She had her heart broken by her first boyfriend.

I dont get Leo gf hype, Steph already said she is the type that jump on any popular guy in school ."pick me"girl

I hope Dev show her nature in the game so people will see why MC dont like her that much

EDITED: You're right I thought you were talking about Steph. I misread that part of your comment. My bad dude.

 

[BruceWayne123]

He likes her enough that he deeply regrets ignoring her the first time around and has sworn to never abandon her. Did you even read the story bro because you are way off base.

I think it is you who is way off base, bro. There is nothing in the story suggesting that MC regrets ignoring Melena and that he will never abandon her.

 

[Xythurr]

I think it is you who is way off base, bro. There is nothing in the story suggesting that MC regrets ignoring Melena and that he will never abandon her.

Oh shit you're right I misread it. I was talking about Steph.