Pretty dissonant to have the mom think the MC is her husband only to wake up the next day with her son there and say nothing, but ok, maybe she was too drunk to remember... except for all the cum... then we go on to have the MC do it again and effectively glaze her in a gallon of man goo, to which she... wakes up and says nothing, but ok, she was drunk again... but this is pushing all sense of logic out the window. Then, and this for me is the final straw, she just casually gets fucked on the beach and just thinks it's a massage, followed up later by giving her son a boobjob like it's totally normal...
I was really looking forward to some scenes about her realising she's been fucking her son and coming to terms with that but she's either a completely air headed bimbo or Snats just kind of didn't bother making her storyline make any sense. I'm leaning far into the latter option, he's never given me the feeling he cares much about writing the girls coming to terms with fucking their relative, easier just to skip forward to more sexy sex.
its almost as if incest doesnt work because the characters dont act like they are in an incestuous relationship. i have said this a few times in diferent posts, what's the point of making it incest, if they dont act like it is? to me, that aspect never worked, so maybe im bias, but i genuinely think the story would work better if it was written not as an "incest force turned into landlady" stuff, like always, but starting from that aspect, and maybe getting that later.
as a side note, i also said this a few posts earlier, i dunno if it was due to the amount of work, or the time he had to work on those lines, but ALOT of the content and actions feel disjointed. on one moment he feels almost offended that a trap wants his dick, on another he goes in to rape a diferent trap.
on one moment he blackmail someone to give him a blowjob, but just the next day he acts all coy when someone else blackmail him into letting her give him a blowjob.
and its not him playing an angle, he is taken for a ride, kinda against his will.
now im not complaining about the quality of the scenes, i quite like them, im just commenting on how the events dont work the way they are presented.
maybe, and again i will talk about this, if given time to breath and fit in its own series of events, those scenes could work better or be better developed, but, and this is my theory, snats just kinda went with the easiest solution for a situation because he was overworked with the other stuff he already made.