HTML Completed Twisting Time [v1.0] [Amai Otoko]

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DonkeyPuncher82

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Sep 13, 2022
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I didn't find the clickable bits that hard, but a couple of times it took me a few seconds to find. I did find somewhere in there that the word "straddel" is used instead of straddle, but that's all the negative criticism I've got. On to the positive; you've got the bones of an excellent story, and I was honestly entertained at the thoroughness of the inbreeding; You are your own grandpa AND father, and it gets more layered for any children from your children that you are of course the father of as well. Time fuckery is always going to be either terrible or awesome, and you've got a real good basis to make it awesome.. so, I want more, dev. Put some more meat on those timey-wimey bones, please.
 
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AmaiOtoko

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May 21, 2017
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DonkeyPuncher82 said:
I didn't find the clickable bits that hard, but a couple of times it took me a few seconds to find. I did find somewhere in there that the word "straddel" is used instead of straddle, but that's all the negative criticism I've got. On to the positive; you've got the bones of an excellent story, and I was honestly entertained at the thoroughness of the inbreeding; You are your own grandpa AND father, and it gets more layered for any children from your children that you are of course the father of as well. Time fuckery is always going to be either terrible or awesome, and you've got a real good basis to make it awesome.. so, I want more, dev. Put some more meat on those timey-wimey bones, please.
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One day when I get better, I would like to.
 
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3.20 star(s) 5 Votes