Sandmaster

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well, gave it a go, and while at this stage of the game I can't justify full on patreon support, what I'm seeing is very much in my wheelhouse. Aisha and the breastfeeding bit pretty much got me in one son. with that, I hope to see more transformation bits, perhaps Aisha and Pamela get into a competition to have the best breasts on the vessel, something to that note. The game is young, and the potential is limitless, and I can't wait to see more. Personally I hope to see more play towards the whole last biologicals bit, and the responsibility to continue the species (I'm a sucker for Preg content, zero shame)
 

AfroM

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Dec 26, 2017
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honestly, if you could name the MC then i would like it much more, being stuck up whit a forced preset name its just a bit downer for me at least
 

stewscotia

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Jun 4, 2018
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Honest feedback: Models look well done, altho pamela looks like a certain character (Isabella aka Bella) from another game but with blonde hair (since I know were not supposed to mention other game names). Story line so far is Ok, obviously not into the whole kid bones a load of women, Hoping the "growth" of the kid means you plan on making him into a mature adult. Storyline is slightly engaging but not something someone else hasnt done before or thought of. I like the scifi concept VNs and they allow for a larger storyline if the creator chooses to do so. Could go along the lines of the tv series lexx in a way (minus the organic ship of course, but character wise could be injected with a little comedy like the series was) Otherwise so far its ok, I like the models so far, cant say the story is off to a hugely great start, but its early in the narrative, so Ill leave full judgement to things as they progress. So far a 6 out of 10 stars, I feel theres plenty of room for growth here (especially in the MC lol). Keep up the good work on the models and keep people engaged in the story and Im sure you will do great :), good luck :)
 

aspar4gus

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Here’s my honest feedback, their breasts are too big.
I don't think anyone knows how to make women of normal proportions anymore unfortunately. Weird uncanny valley women make pee pee go soft.

Overview:
A young man was abducted by aliens, but after 1000 years his cryogenic chamber will be found by *~ s e x d o l l s . ~*
 

Zantei

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It Will Be:

- Corruption [Corrupting someone's mind robbing them of their purity/innocence.]
- Creampie [Internal ejaculation, either vaginal or anal.]
- Futa/Trans [A woman with both male and female genitals or just male genitals. Or a trans character.]
- Group sex [Sex act involving 3 or more people.]
- Handjob [Masturbating another person's penis.]
- Interracial [Sex act between 2 or more people of different races.]
- Lesbian [Sex act between two or more females.]
- Male Domination [Used when a character submits to a male character via domination.]
- Masturbation [Self-pleasuring by hand or with toys.]
- Oral Sex [Sexual act involving the stimulation of the genitalia using the mouth.]
- Sex Toys [Any kind of toy that is used for sexual purposes.]
- Teasing [Used when a character teases another another, either by seduction or via sex.]
- Titfuck [The act of thrusting a penis (or similar object) in between breasts.]
- Transformation [A sequence showing a physical, biological change of some kind.]
- Vaginal sex [Penetrating the vagina, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Virgin [Sex act involving virgins and the loss of virginity.]

It May Be:

- Animated [Used in combination with 2DCG/3DCG/Real Porn when a CG is animated.]
- Anal Sex [Penetrating the anus, (sex toys, tentacles, etc).]
- Ahegao [Used when a character displays a orgasm face with her tongue sticking out.]
- Multiple Penetration [Sexual penetration involving 2+ penis/toys into multiple holes or same holes.]
- Exhibitionism [Nudity or daring stunts with a risk of getting caught by strangers. Also blatant exposure to strangers.]
- Female domination [Used when a character submits to a female character via domination.]
- Furry [Anthropomorphic animal (Not to be confused with monster or humans with animal ears/tails).]
- Groping [Sex act involving groping anothers body.]
- Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.]
- Humiliation [Humiliating/degrading a person in a sexual manner generally in-front of others.]
- Pregnancy [The act of impregnating a woman or having sex with a pregnant one.]
- Prostitution [The act of soliciting sex in exchange for money.]
- Sissification [Dressing a submissive partner as a woman and/or encouraging/training to act in a feminine manner.]
- Spanking [Spanking someone's butt as torture or for sexual pleasure.]
- Stripping [The act of taking ones clothes off usually in exchange for money in-front of an audience.]
- Tentacles [Tentacle Monster using tendrils for sexual purposes. (Does not classify as Monster).]
- Trap [Usually men in women's clothing, but may also be the other way around.]

Your Ideas:

- Asslicking.
- Corruption: My imagination of Aisha being corrupted into a exhibitionist sex nanny/maid/etc. makes this appealing.
- What about netori? When the MC steals someone elses girl
- Especially corrupting the little guy into a sissy and a few lady dongs for him to play with.
- Include in the female domination: facesitting and forced orgasm
- Maybe low gravity sex.
Be a based footCHAD and add footjob to this list.
 
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Furyan

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Please explain in detail what exactly do you mean? Interesting
Most porn sites have statistics of access, tags per video which kind of content is more searched etc, even Netflix does it. Once you have the numbers you can develop a product based on those demographics. Most Game Developers make polls to know their donors, but this you do to please the people that you already have with your product, but to get new people new market sometimes means that you need to change your product, in order to please a bigger audience, and so on...
 

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Most porn sites have statistics of access, tags per video which kind of content is more searched etc, even Netflix does it. Once you have the numbers you can develop a product based on those demographics. Most Game Developers make polls to know their donors, but this you do to please the people that you already have with your product, but to get new people new market sometimes means that you need to change your product, in order to please a bigger audience, and so on...
I think it really works, thanks for the idea.
 

Ryantrix

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Nov 21, 2018
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Looks good, but maybe you should add a name changing option.
Keep futa optional, netori? are there any other male around? if so, its good idea, Sissification of MC? not a good idea, I liked how Aisha turned out (willing to do anything for her baby)
 
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I don't think anyone knows how to make women of normal proportions anymore unfortunately. Weird uncanny valley women make pee pee go soft.
Here’s my honest feedback, their breasts are too big.
Big, bimbo tits and unrealistic boob sizes are also a fetish. And, believe it or not a majority like big boobs, why do you think so many women get breast implants, some even to unrealistic and back breaking sizes. I don't like how people are shaming or hating on big boobs (however big they may be), imagine if I went to threads with flat/small chested women and said, "Flat chest make pee pee soft", or "Their breasts are too small".

If it's not for you, it's for someone else, don't ruin it for the people who do enjoy this sort of thing, or any other kink. This is a fictional VN, we play these for entertainment, escapism and to get our rocks off, realism need not apply here. If you want realism, look at "real" porn, however unrealistic even that may be.

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17MOONKEYS
, the models are :love:"chef's kiss", change nothing about them, in fact the bodies here are more realistic than some of the other VNs on this site. I want to see more MILFS and girls shaped like Aisha, maybe a thicc Asian and a plump Latina too. If you add a character with small boobs but a curvy and thicc bottom, I think that would please everyone. (Look at "AJ Applegate" for reference).

Please don't ever add Sandbox or any sort of point-to-click navigation, it adds nothing to the narrative and makes fapping almost impossible, and they are never implemented well most of the time. In some threads that have had polls for "VN or Sandbox", VN style has always won the poll vote.

Adding an option to change the MC's name would be great, it adds to the immersion and enjoyment.

Animation/animated sex scenes, while not necessary is a welcome addition. Honestly, with models this thicc I'm okay with no animation, but many people do enjoy some sort of animation in VNs. If it hinders your development process and lengthens the time between updates, then having no animations is acceptable.

Sex noises/sfx are not necessary, though they would be a bonus; they improve immersion and are generally well liked by people.

Although I'm happy with the frequent updates, they are too small in content. ~300 renders updated every month is a good pace generally. Frequent updates are good to keep the VN relevant, but make the updates too small and some people get upset (happened with "College Bound", but that VN still has weekly updates of ~100 renders, and is doing well financially).

Regarding pubic hair, I like it, if the hair is above the clitoris and trimmed to an extent I'm down for anything. Though, if it is possible to make it optional or only some characters have pubic hair, that would be more preferable.

Kinks and fetishes, add as many as you can in the VN without compromising the narrative and essence of the game. "Monster Girl, Alien Girl, Mother-Daughter Threesome, Anal, Face-sitting, Roleplay, Light Fem-dom, Trans/Femboy/Futa, Creampie, Impregnation, Pregnant Sex, Harem, Incest" would be some of my suggestions. Again, make as many as you can optional. I love that "Lactation" is already in the tags, it's one of my favourite things, but few VNs have that tag.

Finally, make the game that you want to make & tell the story you want to tell, don't bend over backwards too much for people on a pirating site, communicate often with fans/supporters, keep updating regularly and consistently; please don't disappear without a trace & do let us know if something unforeseen/unfortunate happens, people can be surprisingly understanding, and lastly but most importantly, please take care of your mental and physical health, I'd hate to see anything bad happen to a fellow lover of thiccness. Be sure to take appropriate breaks and to get enough sunlight; burnout is frequently seen among artists/writers, and a Vitamin D deficiency can lead to depression, which just sucks the life out of you.

Thank you for providing us with more thicc MILFS, can honestly never have enough of them. I like what I'm seeing here and want more of it, I would support you but I'm incapable of it financially. Wish you the best of luck and good health! :)(y)
 

TheDick69+

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Jun 29, 2021
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Big, bimbo tits and unrealistic boob sizes are also a fetish. And, believe it or not a majority like big boobs, why do you think so many women get breast implants, some even to unrealistic and back breaking sizes. I don't like how people are shaming or hating on big boobs (however big they may be), imagine if I went to threads with flat/small chested women and said, "Flat chest make pee pee soft", or "Their breasts are too small".

If it's not for you, it's for someone else, don't ruin it for the people who do enjoy this sort of thing, or any other kink. This is a fictional VN, we play these for entertainment, escapism and to get our rocks off, realism need not apply here. If you want realism, look at "real" porn, however unrealistic even that may be.

-Feedback & Suggestions-
17MOONKEYS
, the models are :love:"chef's kiss", change nothing about them, in fact the bodies here are more realistic than some of the other VNs on this site. I want to see more MILFS and girls shaped like Aisha, maybe a thicc Asian and a plump Latina too. If you add a character with small boobs but a curvy and thicc bottom, I think that would please everyone. (Look at "AJ Applegate" for reference).

Please don't ever add Sandbox or any sort of point-to-click navigation, it adds nothing to the narrative and makes fapping almost impossible, and they are never implemented well most of the time. In some threads that have had polls for "VN or Sandbox", VN style has always won the poll vote.

Adding an option to change the MC's name would be great, it adds to the immersion and enjoyment.

Animation/animated sex scenes, while not necessary is a welcome addition. Honestly, with models this thicc I'm okay with no animation, but many people do enjoy some sort of animation in VNs. If it hinders your development process and lengthens the time between updates, then having no animations is acceptable.

Sex noises/sfx are not necessary, though they would be a bonus; they improve immersion and are generally well liked by people.

Although I'm happy with the frequent updates, they are too small in content. ~300 renders updated every month is a good pace generally. Frequent updates are good to keep the VN relevant, but make the updates too small and some people get upset (happened with "College Bound", but that VN still has weekly updates of ~100 renders, and is doing well financially).

Regarding pubic hair, I like it, if the hair is above the clitoris and trimmed to an extent I'm down for anything. Though, if it is possible to make it optional or only some characters have pubic hair, that would be more preferable.

Kinks and fetishes, add as many as you can in the VN without compromising the narrative and essence of the game. "Monster Girl, Alien Girl, Mother-Daughter Threesome, Anal, Face-sitting, Roleplay, Light Fem-dom, Trans/Femboy/Futa, Creampie, Impregnation, Pregnant Sex, Harem, Incest" would be some of my suggestions. Again, make as many as you can optional. I love that "Lactation" is already in the tags, it's one of my favourite things, but few VNs have that tag.

Finally, make the game that you want to make & tell the story you want to tell, don't bend over backwards too much for people on a pirating site, communicate often with fans/supporters, keep updating regularly and consistently; please don't disappear without a trace & do let us know if something unforeseen/unfortunate happens, people can be surprisingly understanding, and lastly but most importantly, please take care of your mental and physical health, I'd hate to see anything bad happen to a fellow lover of thiccness. Be sure to take appropriate breaks and to get enough sunlight; burnout is frequently seen among artists/writers, and a Vitamin D deficiency can lead to depression, which just sucks the life out of you.

Thank you for providing us with more thicc MILFS, can honestly never have enough of them. I like what I'm seeing here and want more of it, I would support you but I'm incapable of it financially. Wish you the best of luck and good health! :)(y)
I just agree with this. And don't let Aisha excersize too much, I love that thicc body so much! :love:
 
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