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It's a really great start! I love the thick chicks and the Star Trek theme. Lol I hope pregnancy will be a thing! I look foreword to more from you.
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- Aug 8, 2016
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Very good start. And i love natural womans with hairy twat ^^
Thanks for the detailed feedback, very interesting.Feedback 17MOONKEYS
1. Great renders
2. Beautiful FMC characters in the game - Aisha & Pamela both look & behave like top tier MILFs, really looking forward to their content, Aisha's model looks god tier, can't to see Pamela's naked design
3. Barbie is cute, can't wait for her content
4. The robot guiding the MC is practical, makes scenes a bit funny
5. Keep the dialogue as simple as possible, had no issues with understanding the dialogues, as long as the plot is clear to the people, should give them a good idea where the story is headed, don't stress about it too much
6. For me the USP is MILFs & Kirk[this is obviously subjective
7. I don't mind kinetic novels, since this is VN to begin with not RPGM, the story is in your hands, please don't drop the ball
8. I know the sex renders look amazing, but try to have balance of story & sex renders in coming updates [33% dedicated to sex & 67% dedicated to story]
Looking forward to future updates
All the best <3
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- Jul 1, 2017
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Nice! The recent update has fixed a lot of issue with the intro to the game. Flow is much smoother now. Keep it up dev!
Like everything except it's not long enough a 5 minute game hopefully future updates will have much longer gameplay Goodluck.
Absolutely loved this small prelude, I think this has great potential. Story seems fun and original and the renders are beautiful. (loved the hairy pussy )
Keep up the great work and whatever you do stay true to your ideas don't let people's feedback stray you.
Best of luck!
)Keep up the great work and whatever you do stay true to your ideas don't let people's feedback stray you.
Best of luck!
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loved the models..
could have explained the story line a bit better
good luck with the project
could have explained the story line a bit better
good luck with the project
- Mar 13, 2021
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We all are 12 here on F95
The MC looks pretty young to already be wearing a toupee.
Biologically mature.
- Dec 29, 2017
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excellent game
Should have patch inc. M/S to be hotter
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- Jul 4, 2018
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milf/onee x shota... added to my watch list
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- Jan 9, 2018
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*sniffs around the thread*
Is that the smell of ridiculously juicy MILFs in here?
Oh my, it is!
I will be watching this one like a hawk!
Is that the smell of ridiculously juicy MILFs in here?
Oh my, it is!
I will be watching this one like a hawk!
- Mar 9, 2018
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To further explain: While your grammar and spelling is fine (as some others already pointed out), I felt as if your overall structure could use a little more...care.
For example:
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Still, I wouldn't be bringing any of this up, hadn't you specifically asked for feedback. This VN is definetly one of the more promising 0.1 Games i have seen in this forum, going for a little humor and geeky references is always a big plus in my book. So take this Feedback with a grain of salt and feel free to completly ignore it should you disagree, it's YOUR project after all.
It will probably be.Oh great. Futa... Just what this game needed...