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It's a really great start! I love the thick chicks and the Star Trek theme. Lol I hope pregnancy will be a thing! I look foreword to more from you.Could you please give me some honest feedback?
It's a really great start! I love the thick chicks and the Star Trek theme. Lol I hope pregnancy will be a thing! I look foreword to more from you.Could you please give me some honest feedback?
Very good start. And i love natural womans with hairy twat ^^Could you please give me some honest feedback?
Thanks for the detailed feedback, very interesting.Feedback 17MOONKEYS
1. Great renders
2. Beautiful FMC characters in the game - Aisha & Pamela both look & behave like top tier MILFs, really looking forward to their content, Aisha's model looks god tier, can't to see Pamela's naked design
3. Barbie is cute, can't wait for her content
4. The robot guiding the MC is practical, makes scenes a bit funny
5. Keep the dialogue as simple as possible, had no issues with understanding the dialogues, as long as the plot is clear to the people, should give them a good idea where the story is headed, don't stress about it too much
6. For me the USP is MILFs & Kirk[this is obviously subjective
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7. I don't mind kinetic novels, since this is VN to begin with not RPGM, the story is in your hands, please don't drop the ball
8. I know the sex renders look amazing, but try to have balance of story & sex renders in coming updates [33% dedicated to sex & 67% dedicated to story]
Looking forward to future updates
All the best <3
-DD69
We all are 12 here on F95I'm not into playing as a 12-year-old.
Biologically mature.The MC looks pretty young to already be wearing a toupee.
excellent gameView attachment 1468441Thread Updated: 2021-11-07
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A young man was abducted by aliens, but after 1000 years his cryogenic chamber will be found by sex dolls.
Release Date: 2021-11-07
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Censored: No
Version: Ch. 1 v0.23.6b
OS: Windows
Language: English
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Aisha and Pamela so hotView attachment 1468441Thread Updated: 2021-11-07
Overview:
A young man was abducted by aliens, but after 1000 years his cryogenic chamber will be found by sex dolls.
Release Date: 2021-11-07
Developer: 17moonkeysYou must be registered to see the linksYou must be registered to see the links
Censored: No
Version: Ch. 1 v0.23.6b
OS: Windows
Language: English
Genre:
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Sorry, I'm not a native English speaker. Can you please explain in detail what exactly you mean?
Perhaps this will help me become better, but in general I need an editor who is a native speaker.
I really appreciate your opinion, criticism makes this game better.To further explain: While your grammar and spelling is fine (as some others already pointed out), I felt as if your overall structure could use a little more...care.
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Still, I wouldn't be bringing any of this up, hadn't you specifically asked for feedback. This VN is definetly one of the more promising 0.1 Games i have seen in this forum, going for a little humor and geeky references is always a big plus in my book. So take this Feedback with a grain of salt and feel free to completly ignore it should you disagree, it's YOUR project after all.
It will probably be.Oh great. Futa... Just what this game needed...![]()