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- Oct 11, 2017
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Okay, honest feedback. Love the models, curvy but not ridiculously so. The story's crazy but I'm into it. Some way to, ah, "adjust" the relationships would be nice. Alexandra's well hot but "step-grandmother" breaks my brain a little. Hope we see more of her and "step-mom" in future though, the events of the night before MC is abducted bears further exploration. Also this talk of Futadolls interests me greatly. They're not for everyone, but I'd at least like the option to interact with them in future. Note that a true Futa has a dick and pussy, just something to bear in mind.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes, good luck!
Looking forward to seeing where this goes, good luck!
- Sep 30, 2018
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Amazing game bro but please add more scenes with aisha
- Nov 27, 2019
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I don't have a good feel for what story you're trying to tell with your game, which makes it difficult to tell you whether you're succeeding or not.
Is just not a lot to go on.
From the story you've told in game so far,
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There are lots of plot holes and questions, but I don't really know that those plot holes need to be fixed, nor that the questions need to be answered. This is a fictional universe that exists for the duration of one game. Spending too much time trying to perfect it is going to get in the way of moving your story forward.
Thank you for the detailed feedback. It seems to me that you are too serious and formal about the plot. This is a fairy tale for adults that is usually played with one hand. Probably the answers to all your questions will be in version 1.0
- Dec 13, 2019
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I am very pleased to hear this, considering that this is your first message in several years.
- Apr 29, 2018
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Some points that I noticed that can give a headache and can be used as a strike..
The volume meme..unnecessary, use other characters, can be used as an offense to religion as well as the model with Muslim clothes.
Mc the room is very (little girl) try to take some items like the bear..or change the color of some assets..
The age of the mc..he looks more teen than shota..so don't change the model but what's around..
The mc can't go back to earth anytime soon: HOLODECK in theory should have files about the ancient earth(possible holodeck stories?)
A not so innovative idea and already used ..the mother and grandma return as androids since they don't exist anymore..and keep company with the MC..
Or... if you're going to use Star Trek as a reference... can you use time travel?!
A good idea for some fetishes to be alternate ON/OFF (in exchange for the loss of content better without being forced..to see)
Speaking of content it is possible for you to use the lewd patch (unofficial) as a way to add something ..more.. without worrying about what patreon has to say..and make a lighter game as a base..(aka version censored)
Ahh although you use a laptop it shouldn't be the cheapest, but keep in mind rendering uses 100% of the machine non-stop..
Its useful life will go away much sooner than you expect..and after that time it will lose speed as it heats up..(it should already serve as a heater in the room?)..
Desktop with good ventilation and good PSU for 24/7 work is essential.
The graphics are good and most of them are very clear and visible.
The ufo theme as a comedy is interesting and today there is a wide range of assets for sale with the sci-fi theme. (which saves time)
Your biggest problem really is creative ideas X corporate morals..
Unfortunately you are forced to adjust this or miss opportunities..and the platform as exposure..(including here)
Ps..time..please even with little content, more regular updates I think it's a big mistake nowadays..after months people get tired of looking and end up forgetting about VN..(new updates are not only posted here as in forums and other sites like Fap..
keep in mind as advertisement)
Good luck with your VN, I hope all goes well ..live long and prosper
The volume meme..unnecessary, use other characters, can be used as an offense to religion as well as the model with Muslim clothes.
Mc the room is very (little girl) try to take some items like the bear..or change the color of some assets..
The age of the mc..he looks more teen than shota..so don't change the model but what's around..
The mc can't go back to earth anytime soon: HOLODECK in theory should have files about the ancient earth(possible holodeck stories?)
A not so innovative idea and already used ..the mother and grandma return as androids since they don't exist anymore..and keep company with the MC..
Or... if you're going to use Star Trek as a reference... can you use time travel?!
A good idea for some fetishes to be alternate ON/OFF (in exchange for the loss of content better without being forced..to see)
Speaking of content it is possible for you to use the lewd patch (unofficial) as a way to add something ..more.. without worrying about what patreon has to say..and make a lighter game as a base..(aka version censored)
Ahh although you use a laptop it shouldn't be the cheapest, but keep in mind rendering uses 100% of the machine non-stop..
Its useful life will go away much sooner than you expect..and after that time it will lose speed as it heats up..(it should already serve as a heater in the room?)..
Desktop with good ventilation and good PSU for 24/7 work is essential.
The graphics are good and most of them are very clear and visible.
The ufo theme as a comedy is interesting and today there is a wide range of assets for sale with the sci-fi theme. (which saves time)
Your biggest problem really is creative ideas X corporate morals..
Unfortunately you are forced to adjust this or miss opportunities..and the platform as exposure..(including here)
Ps..time..please even with little content, more regular updates I think it's a big mistake nowadays..after months people get tired of looking and end up forgetting about VN..(new updates are not only posted here as in forums and other sites like Fap..
keep in mind as advertisement)
Good luck with your VN, I hope all goes well ..live long and prosper
The only part I hate about this is how short it is... really hope it does well
It has a incest tag can someone tell me what's the incest in the game please.
- Mar 25, 2019
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girls look REALLY fucking great and hot and nice renders but UFO... i so hoped this is about alien interspecies stuff or something but it seems its just a typcial little-boy-harem game? ah come on... if at least the little boy would be an alien-boy or something... hoped for a better version of tentacular (but with more humanoid aliens and less bestiality)
if this really is just little-boy-harem game please rename it to "Mothership" or something then you have the sci-fi factor but also it shows more what the game seems to be just about
if this really is just little-boy-harem game please rename it to "Mothership" or something then you have the sci-fi factor but also it shows more what the game seems to be just about
- Mar 25, 2019
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wouldn't be a problem if it was a humanoid maybe a bit grotesque looking 12-year-old alien... but i get your point and i agree with it personally already enough of this on pixiv
- Feb 25, 2020
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