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17MOONKEYS

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Just a suggestion.
You are great at renders. If storyline isn't your strong point and you're unsure of writing elements into it, either use AI or hire someone to write it for you. This and Our Secret still has potential, salvageable.
I believe storytelling is my strength, and artificial intelligence might drown out my voice.
 

MalLiz

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I believe storytelling is my strength, and artificial intelligence might drown out my voice.
Yeeeeeaaaaah... Don't ever use AI to "write" anything intended to be of a creative nature. Anyone who thinks that is a viable strategy has never done any kind of creative writing in their entire life, that's for sure! Or at the very least they have abysmally low standards for their, ehem, "writing." :FacePalm:

Besides, I for one think your writing is pretty good. Not on par with Isaac Asimov maybe, but that would just be a silly comparison anyway. :rolleyes:

-Mal
 

juancj0710

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Bro, I'm just saying that it's a great game, with a good story for me and good CG, so I think the only thing the game needs is quality in the updates. I mean it doesn't matter if you only release 3 or 4 updates per year, as long as it has a good story line and good abundant content it's more than perfect.
 
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He makes MC bite the pillow while being fucked with a big dick, oooh sorry he says its a big clit.... :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :FacePalm:

Used to love this game until he started to make things unavoidable and making the MC love dicks. My suggestion, run from this dev as fast as u can. What a way to destroy a game :FacePalm:

BTW asking for paying 50$ for an unfinished VN project was a good move right? ;):ROFLMAO: First you bite harem players and then u bite dust at steam hahahaah good luck, if ppl is wise will stay away from you.
That first sentence is gold :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO: . But, yeah, I feel the same way.... loved this game, then BAM, forced gay content. Pretty much a "fuck you" to his fans that loved the original part of the game.
 

naibreezy

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I believe storytelling is my strength, and artificial intelligence might drown out my voice.
ur storytelling is pretty good (could use some work but good enough), but you really need to work on world-building. Seeing as most games on this site don't have good world-building, it doesn't matter too much, I guess, but having that can make ur games stand out more.
That's what separates books like Harry Potter and LOTR from others: those worlds are built so well that if u were dropped in, you could live ur whole life there, which draws the readers in, making them enjoy the world and story longer.
And AI can help if used correctly, but don't let AI write most of the story and world.
 
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lightwingz

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There is nothing to limit here, there is very little content.
I believe he is trying to say from a pc version port to android it couldn't be done due to size of the file but you can he just don't wont to like he doesn't want to finish a game and just makes excuses like I don't want to burn myself out so I start a new game as we all know he gets bored of what he is doing and is like I need something new to engage my interest for a month or two until I then jump to my next project.
You don't make anything for most of your games and say I need thinking time if you think any harder your brain might implode.
 
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MalLiz

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I believe he is trying to say from a pc version port to android it couldn't be done due to size of the file but you can he just don't wont to like he doesn't want to finish a game and just makes excuses like I don't want to burn myself out so I start a new game as we all know he gets bored of what he is doing and is like I need something new to engage my interest for a month or two until I then jump to my next project.
You don't make anything for most of your games and say I need thinking time if you think any harder your brain might implode.
...I feel as though my brain just about imploded while trying to read your post. No offense, but would it have killed you to slap on a bit of polish here and there, maybe throw in a few commas to help make it less painful to read through? :unsure:

-Mal
 
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sanmal

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I believe he is trying to say from a pc version port to android it couldn't be done due to size of the file but you can he just don't wont to like he doesn't want to finish a game and just makes excuses like I don't want to burn myself out so I start a new game as we all know he gets bored of what he is doing and is like I need something new to engage my interest for a month or two until I then jump to my next project.
You don't make anything for most of your games and say I need thinking time if you think any harder your brain might implode.
Yes, the game was promising at the start, but in the end we got another Slonique.
 
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