I've enjoyed this game. The models are fun and alluring. There's a lot of 'say less, show more' which is always good in a porn game. And I enjoy the kinks, though I know others will not. However, the writing is a little bit all over the place, and the plot is a bit disconnected as well.
I think the important thing the creator has to do is stick by their guns. There's a lot of static in the airwaves around these parts, and everyone has their own idea for what they want to see in the game. It's impossible to please everyone.
I feel like the dev has a great few ideas, and an urge to see certain scenarios realized. I think that's very interesting, and I'd like to see more of that. While it's important to take suggestions into balance, the last thing a creator needs to do go is back and edit/change things to appeal to a wider audience. Backpedaling and revising and rewriting is a trap that will ensnare new game developers into a cycle of self-doubt.
My advice to the dev : The only way from here is forward. Just keep writing, keep rendering, and do the content that YOU want to see, and do it with rich detail. I look forward to seeing more updates.