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NoBrainTrust

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Jun 16, 2017
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May be way to soon but make it so that in the story is an undercover woman or from a rival mafia gang. (She likes vodka yada yada yada f.e. xD)
 

VM356255

Active Member
Jan 1, 2018
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Olá, este será um jogo de harém no futuro. Espero que haja Ntr ou compartilhamento, se houver, podemos desativá-lo se quisermos? amo o jogo até agora
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no NTR EVER..dev has guaranteed there will be none..so..that term is banned from thread :D
Man, seriously, how can anyone like NTR?
sharing is acceptable,
but betrayal?
 

meigame

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Dec 2, 2017
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Liked the story idea. My issue is with Della. She comes off as incompetent. Like a flighty school age girlfriend not a professional assassin bodyguard that a powerful crime lord would trust his only heir with. Throws the whole story off for me. Would prefer her more cool and professional. He should come off as irresponsible spoiled rich kid and she as the skilled settling influence - then you can have him grow in maturity as the story progresses. But that's just me. will watch this as it progresses. thank you
 

Efol

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Nov 18, 2018
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Eranfer I really liked your game so far but I have to agree with Meigame that Delly seems and acts a little to loveydovey newlywed like. I don't really see a professional assassin when I look at her considering her behavior so far in the story. You might want to consider redoing the prologue a little or showcasing her training and skills more in the next updates.

Just some food for thought.
 
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Eranfer

Underboss Life Dev.
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Eranfer I really liked your game so far but I have to agree with Meigame that Delly seems and acts a little to loveydovey newlywed like. I don't really see a professional assassin when I look at her considering her behavior so far in the story. You might want to consider redoing the prologue a little or showcasing her training and skills more in the next updates.

Just some food for thought.
Thanks for the feedback:) Yeah I have that in my mind right now. I even already make that scene. I just keep that for the future updates.
 

meigame

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Dec 2, 2017
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Thanks for the feedback:) Yeah I have that in my mind right now. I even already make that scene. I just keep that for the future updates.
I'm hoping you change her behavior, not just show she can kick ass. She should be protecting him by making good decisions, not just be able to fight and shoot. She should be strong, intelligent, capable to be entrusted with the bosses son.
 

Eranfer

Underboss Life Dev.
Game Developer
Mar 18, 2019
142
565
I asking for a mega link
I don't think I can upload that to mega because I don't have enough bandwidth quota.
Completely random thought:

Is it weird that the only 2 institutions to use "under" as a rank designation (as opposed to "vice" (president), "deputy" (sheriff), "assistant" (manager) etc) are organized crime and the civil service?

There's a lewd pun buried in there - ala if someone were to say Under-President one would think it referred to people like Monica Lewinsky rather than the VP. :D
Well It's not just like that :v If you search about that in google you'll find that. Well if you lazy enough to research about mafia structure just wait for the future updates hehe.
 

SeeEmilyPlay

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Aug 12, 2017
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I love myself some sweet Honey Select once in a while, but for the love of everything that is lewd I wish Illusion would let us have at least 10 more different guys. I'm so sick of the same blokes all the time.
 

Avaron1974

Resident Lesbian
Aug 22, 2018
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In her own headquarters, with her own people? That's some deep cover thinking there. Total immersion in the roleplay.
Any particular reason why she can't act like that when she wants?

Is there a guide book on how professional assassins should act?

If so I hope you don't play other games because there is one in The Deluca Family that acts like a camp clown and that's a game aimed at more realism.
 

meigame

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Dec 2, 2017
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Yeah, seen The Deluca Family. Can't say I recall it. Maybe I'll go back and look. All I am saying is that I just don't buy it in the story. If you like it, fine. If the author wants to write that, also fine. But it seems to me more like writing to a hentai female character cliche than anything else. But maybe it's just me. Never cared for the frequently used stupid goofy sidekick characters or the silly schoolgirl thing. And I don't get the schoolgirl thing in this setting. But if ya dig it, good on you. Just not for me. I'll continue watching this to see where it goes but she seems less like a body guard and more like a friend who might have been trained as an assassin.
 
4.40 star(s) 22 Votes