VN Ren'Py Unexpected Opportunity [Ch. 6] [Sweetychily]

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johnmnf692

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Actually I wanted to put a char on the story that MC can fuck her whenever he wants. MC doesn't try to be in a relationship with her and there is no emotion for MC's side. Kind of a getting revenge from a slut ex GF and have fun with it. Obviously I couldn't expose it on the script...
Dude, if you are making a harem game, there is no point in adding a character that is only there for sex. You already have multiple LI's to make scenes for, making scenes with some random thot just detracts from your ability to make scenes with the characters in your game that people actually like and want to see. As many others have said you could have built something up with her mother, as an avenue for revenge, or you could have just made her an actual LI and not had her be a cheater. You still could have made a sex scene with her if she was your ex-gf, even if she never cheated, but because you've made her a cheater you've essentially wasted all the time and effort that went into writing and rendering her scenes.
 

goulet1995

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Dude, if you are making a harem game, there is no point in adding a character that is only there for sex. You already have multiple LI's to make scenes for, making scenes with some random thot just detracts from your ability to make scenes with the characters in your game that people actually like and want to see. As many others have said you could have built something up with her mother, as an avenue for revenge, or you could have just made her an actual LI and not had her be a cheater. You still could have made a sex scene with her if she was your ex-gf, even if she never cheated, but because you've made her a cheater you've essentially wasted all the time and effort that went into writing and rendering her scenes.
i agree with everthing said here and if you really want to push the revenge thing getting with her mother or a sister if she has one would be better revenge imo
 

Larry2000

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I'll just say this quickly.

Hello! I'm the new writer for this game!
Samsam3421 and I are making this now and I've been working on a pretty significant rewrite.

Girlfriend avoidance is coming and no more cuck shenanigans with the porn scene.

A new update is coming soon. Hopefully by early next week, if not sooner :)

This is my first Public writing session, so please be nice :D
Also, if you're wondering, no bad tags will be involved in this game ever. You know which ones I mean ;)
 

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I'll just say this quickly.

Hello! I'm the new writer for this game!
Samsam3421 and I are making this now and I've been working on a pretty significant rewrite.

Girlfriend avoidance is coming and no more cuck shenanigans with the porn scene.

A new update is coming soon. Hopefully by early next week, if not sooner :)

This is my first Public writing session, so please be nice :D
Also, if you're wondering, no bad tags will be involved in this game ever. You know which ones I mean ;)
So, should we be mean now, before you release or after? Maybe both? ;) :ROFLMAO: Just glad a non-cuck is doing the writing now, so, I'll give it another try.
 

Larry2000

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So, should we be mean now, before you release or after? Maybe both? ;) :ROFLMAO: Just glad a non-cuck is doing the writing now, so, I'll give it another try.
Oh, the meanness is already here? Oh goody! ;)

On a serious note, didn't expect anyone to see this so soon. I was gonna quote a few people on it, but I gave up when I couldn't find you in the database by using the @ symbol. You're tm messed everything up D:

As far as the cuck comment, Samsam is cool. His brain just doesn't work like ours do, we are like vampires and En Tee Argh is the sun. :ROFLMAO: Honestly, I became the writer as a coincidence and because I'm in love with Lisa :love: She's mine now! *Cough cough* I mean, I'll make sure to do right by her for you guys :D
 

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Oh, the meanness is already here? Oh goody! ;)

On a serious note, didn't expect anyone to see this so soon. I was gonna quote a few people on it, but I gave up when I couldn't find you in the database by using the @ symbol. You're tm messed everything up D:

As far as the cuck comment, Samsam is cool. His brain just doesn't work like ours do, we are like vampires and En Tee Argh is the sun. :ROFLMAO: Honestly, I became the writer as a coincidence and because I'm in love with Lisa :love: She's mine now! *Cough cough* I mean, I'll make sure to do right by her for you guys :D
Well, my is awesome. You're just jelly. :devilish: But cucks are cucks. I know a few that are cool, most are not. I'll just add Samsam into the cool list. lol Also, if you need help with a bit of writing, or some advice/ideas, let me know. I was writing my own game and gave up after I lost everything that I wrote, due to my own stupidity and not bothering to back it up online. :ROFLMAO: I laugh about it, but it still pisses me off. I had a shit ton wrote after 2 years, was just trying to find a Daz guy. So, now I just QC for some devs.

Anyway, I'll dl it next release and good luck to you and Samsam.
 
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Larry2000

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Well, my is awesome. You're just jelly. :devilish: But cucks are cucks. I know a few that are cool, most are not. I'll just add Samsam into the cool list. lol Also, if you need help with a bit of writing, or some advice/ideas, let me know. I was writing my own game and gave up after I lost everything that I wrote, due to my own stupidity and not bothering to back it up online. :ROFLMAO: I laugh about it, but it still pisses me off. I had a shit ton wrote after 2 years, was just trying to find a Daz guy. So, now I just QC for some devs.

Amyway, I'll dl it next release and good luck to you and Samsam.
Okay there's a bit of jelly, but it's a healthy amount. It's barely even oozing.

Thanks on the advice portion. If anything, I'll have you look at future ideas and do the hot or cold test. I'm having a lot of fun writing this and finding all the girls' characters. I came in after they were created, so I've done my tweaking of who they are. I'm really satisfied by what I'm coming up with.

By the way Wolf, I noticed in an old message that you liked the girl with short hair? You asked if she was a main love interest, I'll say VERY much she is.

There will be more than a few Love Interests, but as of right now there are 3. Lisa, Emily (Short haired girl) and Nicole.
I'm in love with each and everyone of their stories and I have a clear vision on where they're going. Especially Lisa and Nicole. I'll stop talking for now, this is all becoming TMI at the moment for the thread. If you want to know more you can DM :)
Just know that Emily IS a love interest and she's cute and spunky. She also has a love hate relationship with Rock music. Blame her dad :rolleyes:

Sorry about you losing your stuff, a back up would have been good to have. Maybe it's a sign for me to back it up. I've also been writing a story :D Maybe we can swap notes some day soon!
 

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Okay there's a bit of jelly, but it's a healthy amount. It's barely even oozing.

Thanks on the advice portion. If anything, I'll have you look at future ideas and do the hot or cold test. I'm having a lot of fun writing this and finding all the girls' characters. I came in after they were created, so I've done my tweaking of who they are. I'm really satisfied by what I'm coming up with.

By the way Wolf, I noticed in an old message that you liked the girl with short hair? You asked if she was a main love interest, I'll say VERY much she is.

There will be more than a few Love Interests, but as of right now there are 3. Lisa, Emily (Short haired girl) and Nicole.
I'm in love with each and everyone of their stories and I have a clear vision on where they're going. Especially Lisa and Nicole. I'll stop talking for now, this is all becoming TMI at the moment for the thread. If you want to know more you can DM :)
Just know that Emily IS a love interest and she's cute and spunky. She also has a love hate relationship with Rock music. Blame her dad :rolleyes:

Sorry about you losing your stuff, a back up would have been good to have. Maybe it's a sign for me to back it up. I've also been writing a story :D Maybe we can swap notes some day soon!
No worries, bro. I'll help where I can. I don't remember who I liked in this game tbh. It's been a long time since I played. I'll figure it out after you guys drop a new release.

Well... I know It seemed like that for some reason... I'm just the person who doesn't know something about here for sure :D.
:LOL: Ok then. I'll take that explanation. Now, let's get back to work!

 

Larry2000

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No worries, bro. I'll help where I can. I don't remember who I liked in this game tbh. It's been a long time since I played. I'll figure it out after you guys drop a new release.


:LOL: Ok then. I'll take that explanation. Now, let's get back to work!

My fingers... they bleed! The coalmine is a familiar place to me now...

Yeah, writing is an arduous task and my mind is limited in its bigness. We're still banging on some story points, but we hope to be finishing this soonish :D
If you liked the old version at all, you'll definitely like this version a LOT more. Famous last words! See ya on release <3
 

Larry2000

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Yo! How's it going all! Developer and Lead Writer of Unexpected Opportunity. Samsam3421 has just uploaded our rewrite AND our new update to F95zone for free. WOOT! So download it now!

We really wanted to make sure everyone played our first outing together. We thought about posting the rewrite as it was in the original and put 0.3 as a thing for patrons, but to be honest, we saw that it was fair to give it to all of you guys for free :D

Reason 1: We want everyone to play it at it's most complete form since we were working on both the rewrite and the new update simultaneously.

Reason 2: We know that the first game was a little janky. Samsam and I understand that, but the bones were good and that's why I wanted to commit to making it better. (Mostly Lisa :love: ) We hope that it gives some good will out there in our commitment to making this game better.

Reason 3: We like you guys? Well, at least I do. Samsam is newer, but he's learning to embrace all this. I've been here for years and I'm happy to put my writing out there. So hopefully people that have seen me around bombarding threads with my paragraphs of yapping can see me put into something more... useful...

If you have any questions, we'll answer most of them in a separate post from either Samsam or me. But to cut it to the quick:

NO BAD TAGS IN THIS GAME EVER. You know which ones!

That is all :D
 

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Yo! How's it going all! Developer and Lead Writer of Unexpected Opportunity. Samsam3421 has just uploaded our rewrite AND our new update to F95zone for free. WOOT! So download it now!

We really wanted to make sure everyone played our first outing together. We thought about posting the rewrite as it was in the original and put 0.3 as a thing for patrons, but to be honest, we saw that it was fair to give it to all of you guys for free :D

Reason 1: We want everyone to play it at it's most complete form since we were working on both the rewrite and the new update simultaneously.

Reason 2: We know that the first game was a little janky. Samsam and I understand that, but the bones were good and that's why I wanted to commit to making it better. (Mostly Lisa :love: ) We hope that it gives some good will out there in our commitment to making this game better.

Reason 3: We like you guys? Well, at least I do. Samsam is newer, but he's learning to embrace all this. I've been here for years and I'm happy to put my writing out there. So hopefully people that have seen me around bombarding threads with my paragraphs of yapping can see me put into something more... useful...

If you have any questions, we'll answer most of them in a separate post from either Samsam or me. But to cut it to the quick:

NO BAD TAGS IN THIS GAME EVER. You know which ones!

That is all :D
Can't wait.
 
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