I've not tried this AVN before but so far, my impression is that while the renders are good the story is just bad.
It makes no sense.
There are so many things I can point out but here is an example, we've been told that the MC must hide, stay quiet, .etc but now he going around picking up fetch-quests for his secretary and her mother?
Why? This dude has much bigger problems and should be dealing with that.
And what can he do anyway? He has no financial backing, is already on the run and we saw he can barely even split firewood, there is no way he's some elite special-forces guy who can fight gangs.
Also the MC seems to be a moron.
He has deleted all this data and whatever but never took the time to secure his finances or exit strategy beforehand?
You'd have to be a total idiot.
There is something about him not being able to leave the city, why?
No one can stop you leaving a city, this sort of thing sounds very Chinese, where local aristocrats wield some kind of regional power. This isn't a thing in western/English speaking countries.
Jesus, another example, it's getting annoying.
Not only is he in a potentially life-threatening situation, but he is also "in a hurry" ...
STOP PICKING UP FETCH QUESTS, YOU FUCKWIT.
Why the fuck would some random bint need help moving EMPTY BOXES?
Additionally, calling people "Mr [first-name]" is annoying, wrong and very culturally specific.
The whole cafe dialogue with Gia is utterly moronic and mostly nonsensical.
Does whoever is writing this even know what words mean?
None of that conversation makes sense.
Why is the MC excited about a car? He's a rich kid, some car is neither surprising nor exciting.
What does that even mean?
Buffalo don't have cubs.
The dialogue is just complete gibberish at this point, entirely devoid of whatever meaning it was intended to convey.
Yes, I see that now ...
