VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unforgiving Lust [Ch.1a] [FlipJoker]

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Overview:
A young man went to the city to find scholarship, he visited his sister to stay in while waiting for his college approval before moving to dorms, He met with different girls to satisfy his needs.​

Thread Updated: 2020-12-03
Release Date: 2020-11-12
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Version: Ch.1a
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac, Android
Language: English
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Almost as short as possible, maybe worthwhile looking at in fourteen or fifteen updates.
 
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out of the box daz models and sets? check.
badly written english? chcek
something barely resembling a game? check
and finally a patreon to cash in on something so generic it may as well have Made in China stamped on it? check check and triple check.

Hard. Pass.
 
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FlipJoker, I hate being a negative Nancy, but the previews are utterly disappointing. I can forgive bad English as long as it is understandable, but the synopsis itself is unclear, and there aren't enough tags. Render quality of this kind is absolutely unacceptable in 2020, let alone 5-6 years ago. Backgrounds are low-fidelity, models are unattractive and blurry, contrast and colour correction is way off, and facial expressions are non-existent.

Demos are usually released as a sneak peek for a "full product". VNs that have continuous updates do not and should not have demos/previews, they should have v0.1 First Releases.

I hope you've released this short preview of a game with all seriousness and intent to continue and greatly improve upon it. Because I am appalled when I see a project like this in 2020, 5+ year old games look way better than this. There is no way people will and should play this game, let alone support it the way it is now, atleast. You're just asking for this game to be abandoned.

Good Luck! I hope you massively improve your work, and seek help for the language in your "game".
 
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Praxxxus said:
FlipJoker, I hate being a negative Nancy, but the previews are utterly disappointing. I can forgive bad English as long as it is understandable, but the synopsis itself is unclear, and there aren't enough tags. Render quality of this kind is absolutely unacceptable in 2020, let alone 5-6 years ago. Backgrounds are low-fidelity, models are unattractive and blurry, contrast and colour correction is way off, and facial expressions are non-existent.

Demos are usually released as a sneak peek for a "full product". VNs that have continuous updates do not and should not have demos/previews, they should have v0.1 First Releases.

I hope you've released this short preview of a game with all seriousness and intent to continue and greatly improve upon it. Because I am appalled when I see a project like this in 2020, 5+ year old games look way better than this. There is no way people will and should play this game, let alone support it the way it is now, atleast. You're just asking for this game to be abandoned.

Good Luck! I hope you massively improve your work, and seek help for the language in your "game".
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Glad you left your review, surely it will help improve my next update
 
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:geek::geek::geek:
Paitryn said:
out of the box daz models and sets? check.
badly written english? chcek
something barely resembling a game? check
and finally a patreon to cash in on something so generic it may as well have Made in China stamped on it? check check and triple check.

Hard. Pass.
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Jimbog

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FlipJoker said:
Tested on mine and worked just fine
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kauthor said:
And can't open in Mac.
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The Mac version is compressed in the RAR format so can't be opened when it is unpacked. There is something about the unrar pulling a file out , I don't know what really happens but it never works to unrar a Ren'Py game on a Mac, the only way to play afterwards is to open up Ren"Py and play the game from within the program, which is what I did. Likely it worked fine on the developers machine because it didn't have to be unpacked first. Anytime you see a Red'Py game in the RAR format just assume you are not going to be able to open it.
 
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The actual game will have a few extra changes.


Demo versions did not have a few facial expressions but the fixes are on the next update

Meet Chloe, Mia's best friend from the gym
 
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