VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unforgiving Lust [Ch.1a] [FlipJoker]

L3z1l3

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Aug 19, 2018
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I think this is too short even for a demo.
There is barely any dialogue in the game but even that little doesn't make any sense.
The models are passable enough and sexy costumes are always welcome, but I hope dev will improve on the writing. Both, the grammar and the dialogues needs to fixed for the game to be enjoyable.
 

FlipJoker

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Game Developer
Jun 5, 2020
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I'm confused, did you remake this game? I thought it looked different

The demo i made will be the part in Chapter 3 of the game, if you are aware the the demo does not tell how the male character got to her sister's house, all stories from the demo will be available
 

FlipJoker

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Game Developer
Jun 5, 2020
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I'd say that most of the game is fine enough, it's still a small game so I don't really have any suggestions for it, just do your best and bring more creative content to the game !

Thank you so much, i will be bring a mini update for the scene left behind on chapter 1.. you can join my for more mini updates
 
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assman1337

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chapter 1a
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myuhinny

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Sep 7, 2017
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Why would he go meet with different girls to satisfy his needs when he could just let his sister satisfy his needs instead and never even leave her house?
 
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