jonquilnatrix

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Yes, most expect parentheses for inner thoughts, but that's not a rule. This game clearly shows " thoughts " as "thoughts."
I think every variation has been used in AVNs for thoughts, whispering, showing anger, fright, etc...
Because Renpy is so flexible in coding, developers have experimented greatly.
Yeah I know it's not a rule, but once a game establishes it's formatting I don't thinking it's asking too much to more or less stick to it. Up until this episode whispers were always indicated by either (whisper) or *whisper* (even that wasn't uniform but still close enough and not confusing).
As for thoughts...sadly they don't actually always use the "thoughts" character as the speaker either in this game (more inconsistency). For example check out the shower scene with the landlady at the start of this chapter. Thoughts are done as words in parentheses for the MC... So you have the same exact parentheses notation for both thinking something and whispering something in the same chapter... Sloppy and confusing.
 
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Yeah I know it's not a rule, but once a game establishes it's formatting I don't thinking it's asking too much to more or less stick to it. Up until this episode whispers were always indicated by either (whisper) or *whisper* (even that wasn't uniform but still close enough and not confusing).
As for thoughts...sadly they don't actually always use the "thoughts" character as the speaker either in this game (more inconsistency). For example check out the shower scene with the landlady at the start of this chapter. Thoughts are done as words in parentheses for the MC... So you have the same exact parentheses notation for both thinking something and whispering something in the same chapter... Sloppy and confusing.
I'm a proofreader and I also did what I could with non-language issues, but I suck at understanding code. :LOL: I think I fixed some of the problems you mentioned.
I've contacted Greebo on Discord and sent him some corrected files. Maybe we'll get a more polished game soon. ;)
 

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FYI Dev added the Bonus scenes as a free DLC on steam now. if you have it there you can get them back.
Yes which is a good step in the right direction.

However my opinion of the Dev still is not good after deleting comments bringing to attention that the bonus scenes where removed with no mention of why. And then adding the dlc to add them back in again with no mention of the mistake and categorizing is as FREE!. when it was original part of the game to begin with.

EDIT: In essence the problem was solved while ignoring / trying to not draw attention to the cause of the problem. I'm a proponent of good communication with your players and admitting fault when it occurs over trying to sweep it under the rug. But this chapter is done and I probably won't be purchasing anything else from this Dev on steam now. But I am glad everyone got their scenes back.
 
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Havent played through the entire game yet, but I could see nipple piercings for gf Luna and Ivy disappearead, it's an update dev forgot to render or they are gone?
 

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Havent played through the entire game yet, but I could see nipple piercings for gf Luna and Ivy disappearead, it's an update dev forgot to render or they are gone?
Just finished and the dev sent the nipple piercings to oblivion, both on Luna and on Ivy. Sad thing, it was hot like it was. Luna was hotter with blue hair too.


Nobody like play games like this on pc
Why nobody would enjoy paying a sex game in a big screen to see the renders properly, without getting a neck pain looking down and with both hands free? You for sure don't know how much better is to play adult games in a PC.

Also I'm pretty sure, considering the amount of games with Android versions and the ones that have, the amount of downloads, that the majority play these games in a PC.
 
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