VN Ren'Py Unleashed [v0.6.5b] [CarbonBlue]

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I was a little on the fence until you explicitly said there will be no NTR. I will definitely check it out.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

Thank you for all the kind words! Some responses:

Sorry about the error screens. Everything is implemented and working, so I don't know what happened. I'll fix it in the next version.

For the MC and Olivia's ages, as I mentioned, I want to play with the common tropes of these VN's. So I want the game to dab a toe or two into that "unbelievable porn" territory without diving all in and going full parody.

For NTR/Jealousy all I'll say is none of the girls are going to have sex with men other than the MC. You're not gonna get cucked.

Future versions of the game will feature a lot more player choices, along with branching. I intentionally kept it way simple in 0.1 because, frankly, I had no idea wtf I was doing.

Maeve is not a werewolf. Though Unleashed would be a great name for a werewolf game now that I think of it.

Is this a red herring to throw me off the scent or are you being serious? I would ask if not werewolves how it'll be horror but I wanna be surprised.
Also thank you for using the real definition of ntr and for keeping that shit out of your game. I'm grateful.

 

[ILCjr]

Ok, interesting start. The renders are good. The story line right now seems somewhat stable, if not a little chaotic. I am looking forward to the next version. I would like to suggest that unless you are trying to be more kinetic with your story to refrain from just allowing one choice on scenes. There are many on this site that will get bored with that and leave your story.

 

[Warhawk1]

good start..Hoepfully a lot more will come

 

[Baharomont]

Nah... Just Another boring "clon by clon" Project

 

[Blockout]

A male protagonist in college who lives with 3 women under one roof who doesn't look like a 12 year old.

This is already starting to be a weird week.

 

[drcynic22]

Color me interested.

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[magicdrago]

I'm sorry, but what 18 year old kid going into college looks like that?! That dude is on the back end of his 20's at the least.

It's possible. I had a classmate back in high school who could grow a full beard in a week. It's rare, but possible.

 

[WaerM]

NIce start , good looking ladies , and that little sis was really a blast..
I like a girl with dark humor , anda fiery redhead to boot . will keep my eye on this

 

[ILCjr]

It's possible. I had a classmate back in high school who could grow a full beard in a week. It's rare, but possible.

I was one of the ones who could do that.

 

[Xyze]

When choosing to not peek on Shannon,

An exception has occured.
Exception : "courage" is not known

Then, it's playing the peeking scene.

Hi

I believed in the same thing, but after checking the code, it's not a real error, it's an image the dev put here in purpose.

menu:
    "Peek":
        jump scene3_32

    "Don't risk it":
        jump error_courage

Here you can see if you choose "Don't risk it" the game go to the error_courage label:

label error_courage:
    call screen error2
    return

And the error_courage label call the screen error2:

screen error2:
    imagemap:
        ground "error_courage.webp"
        hotspot (140, 998, 128, 128) action Jump("scene3_32")

This screen display an error on purpose and when you click "OK" you return in scene3_32 (it's the same scene as if you directly choosen "Peek")

 

[introvtx]

I'm sorry, but what 18 year old kid going into college looks like that?! That dude is on the back end of his 20's at the least.

It's possible. I had a classmate back in high school who could grow a full beard in a week. It's rare, but possible.

I was one of the ones who could do that.

In middle school I already grow mustache, and even a bit of goatee. So it's not impossible. Never had a full grown beard though, not that lucky lol.

About the game though... It's going to be goooooood!..... hopefully.

 

[Walter Victor]

Gorgeous models; good writing, with proper English; good renders; off-beat humor... I'm all in!

As for whether Olivia looks age-appropriate or not... I don't care. She's a fox, and I'm in lust!

Okay, the choices have NO effect in this, except for minor dialogue differences; no variables kept for any of the choices.

Even if the name-changes worked, 'Maeve' and 'Shannon' are hardcoded into several spots in the script.

I'm wondering if the developer intends to redo the Demo to add some real choices and variables. If he really wants to allow us to change names, I guess he would have to.

At any rate, I am looking forward to what comes next, and am optimistic that we might just have another real winner here.

 

[Skylaroo]

The game seems super promising. However I have a persona rule to wait till a game gets to 500 MB before I download and try it. This is so I don't end up playing a short game and ultimately get disappointed in the lack of content. However 300 MB on just the first version...….promising.

File size doesn't really indicate size of content. This is 300MB but only about 10-minute demo. 1-hour content doesn't mean 1.8GB size.

 

[Spyderwraith]

Did anybody get an error when choosing not to change Maeve's name? it was not game breaking but odd at any rate

 

[BigBrotherrrr]

This is what I get when trying not to peek:

 

[Avaron1974]

I'm sorry, but what 18 year old kid going into college looks like that?! That dude is on the back end of his 20's at the least.

He had a hard life, the paper round was rough.

 

[Deximay]

Potential potential. Let's now see this guy's work ethic.

 

[Xyze]

Did anybody get an error when choosing not to change Maeve's name? it was not game breaking but odd at any rate

It's the same thing for "Don't risk it" when you're asked to peek or not on Shanonn, it's a fake error placed here on purpose by the dev.

This is what I get when trying not to peek:
View attachment 346645

Look at my precedent message: https://f95zone.to/threads/unleashed-v0-1-carbonblue.33424/page-4#post-2146563