VN Ren'Py Unleashed [v0.6.5b] [CarbonBlue]

[stanley tucci]

I got an error when deciding to rename Maeve or not. Either option brings up this error code:

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This also causes any renamed characters to return to their default names. Besides that, this is a pretty good start. Keep up the good work!

 

[G3d4s]

Dammm!!! That was really dark humor

 

[gtz-god]

so far so good and one chose that do matter dont matter spying on her no matter what it force you to but that ok but it likely better to have ir so hear a sound when he walk and thought he try spying in future update

 

[Carpe Stultus]

I'm sorry, but what 18 year old kid going into college looks like that?! That dude is on the back end of his 20's at the least.

You are complaining about the guy that doesn't look like a baby but don't say a word about the mother who looks like she is in her early 20's? What?

 

[gtz-god]

Dammm!!! That was really dark humor

i dont think it was to dark only trying to scary him and with that it with take two hit to remove his d
and after the first he will sream so high every see and take he to the doctor where he dick a heal or b dont dead by blood loss

 

[gtz-god]

i some what sad future update may not add harem say this beciase it say there will be cheat but still can add harem but matter and how you talk her into it

 

[Carpe Stultus]

I like the flow of this and the fact that i had some good laughs. I'll keep an eye on it.

And yeah not peaking doesn't work.

 

[Sulring Durgul]

Interesting project so far. Characters are nice and I really enjoyed Shannon's humor, but I find Maeve's eye color extremely strange and disturbing. Is she an android?
I guess this demo is just a proof of concept, and in future versions we'll be able to pick from more options during choices?

 

[Rico Caramba]

It is short, but it has more interesting story and renders than many other introductions that are much longer. I like the style of the girl with the

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The other girls look attractive and interesting as well.

If you are really planning to include, quote Exhibitionism (a lot of it), unquote, I will certainly keep checking on this story.

 

[MikieB]

Good start, definitely got me interested. Good laughs, hot looking models. I like the daughters dark humor. Big sis eyes are indeed special, in a good way. Having mysterious elements is nice. No NTR, that's great in my book. Hoping for some fluid animations in new updates.

 

[NeroZee]

Could be interesting, it has potential but with short 0.1 always leave me underwhelmed. I know developers are eager to get their game out and open up that patreon, but i think people underestimate how important first impressions are.

As it stands the game is worth keeping an eye on but nothing really special grabbed my attention, hopefully future updates wont be as underwhelming.

 

[bonghits420]

I'm sorry, but what 18 year old kid going into college looks like that?! That dude is on the back end of his 20's at the least.

I was able to grow a full beard when I was 18.

 

[Rico Caramba]

I was able to grow a full beard when I was 18.

So was I.

In my opinion, all the characters I've seen look their age, in a porn game sort of way. Which means, they look better than real life. And so they should.

 

[macadam]

I believe it's not super rare for an 18 year old to look like that in countries like Turkey, Greece, Italy and maybe Spain, France and some other Eastern European countries, where a good number of men are hairy. Sure, it's not the stereotypical look for an 18 y.o. but it doesn't strike me as immersion-breakingly odd tbh.

lol.. hey ! i didnt looked like that at 18yo XD

still, true that todays, young look way more older than they are...

i m pretty sure that some kind of shadow cult working on a drink that can change young appareance soo they can slip into nightclub without having to show their ID..

 

[Comdom]

I got an error when deciding to rename Maeve or not. Either option brings up this error code:

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This also causes any renamed characters to return to their default names. Besides that, this is a pretty good start. Keep up the good work!

Yes, the script does miss a code to input a name for her, and also a scene jumppoint is missing.
Also it resets all names after this point.

I fixed the custom name input code, kept chat colors and commented the character names reset code lines.
Replace the script.ryp in the game folder to try

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

From those eyes and "unleashed" is this werewolves?

 

[Sulring Durgul]

From those eyes and "unleashed" is this werewolves?

If that's the case, Maeve can be my alpha any day. Woof!

 

[Bueno]

Oh a game that wants to "subvert my expectations". That has gone beautifully this season right?

 

[Canto Forte]

Did somebody say ... werewolves?

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[Mormont]

It is short, but it has more interesting story and renders than many other introductions that are much longer. I like the style of the girl with the

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The other girls look attractive and interesting as well.

If you are really planning to include, quote Exhibitionism (a lot of it), unquote, I will certainly keep checking on this story.

Cute redhead Shannon she has me intrigued especially when she said she has that dark sense of humor but who am I kidding all the women look good so far especially Olivia the milf she looks a bit on the young side though