Yeah, I'll keep it simple. This is by far the best written and directed SoL AVN out there. The level of character definition, dialogue crafting and scenes direction being maintained consistently throughout the novel is a couple of times higher than anything I've seen in top 200 AVNs (by user ratings and by views and downloads) so far. 5 minutes in you already understand that you're reading something written and directed by a highly skilled professional writer (with superb scene directing skills as well), who uses this medium as an exercise in merely retouching everything that's bad and cringe in SoL AVNs and making it acceptable, believable, fun and engaging. The absence of "the plot" and "the story" that some people here pointed out completely misses the purpose and the goal of this exercise, that is clearly stated and explained by the author on his Patreon. This one should serve as a craftmanship benchmark for roughly 99% of AVN authors, no matter the genre and the style they work in. Personally, I even think this guy should be outsourced as a co-writer and co-director by almost every author of any of the top 20-30 AVNs, at least at a chapter script brainstorming and first draft stages, as it would give them even more edge in the cluttered and trashy adult games space when they hit the Steam for big bucks.