Just finished playing through this (v5.2) and instantly subscribed to the highest tier on Patreon. By far the best written and visualized VN I've played so far.
(1) There are *actual* characters in the story. If Carbon Blue isn't a professional writer, they could be. Differentiated characterization is something few VN writers appear able to do consistently. And Carbon Blue's characters act and talk in age appropriate ways.
(2) It has *actual* artistry. I don't mean fancy renders. I mean the way they are thought out. There is a scene with lightening that is pure brilliance and emotional for me -- it's depth is worthy of a literary analysis. Try the game out at least until you get through this scene and I think you'll be hooked.
(3) It successfully balances actual humor and eroticism. Hard to do at all; hard to do this well.
(4) The story is still early, but there are enough clues to think this will take an epic turn at some point soon. Can't wait to see how the storyline develops.
(1) There are *actual* characters in the story. If Carbon Blue isn't a professional writer, they could be. Differentiated characterization is something few VN writers appear able to do consistently. And Carbon Blue's characters act and talk in age appropriate ways.
(2) It has *actual* artistry. I don't mean fancy renders. I mean the way they are thought out. There is a scene with lightening that is pure brilliance and emotional for me -- it's depth is worthy of a literary analysis. Try the game out at least until you get through this scene and I think you'll be hooked.
(3) It successfully balances actual humor and eroticism. Hard to do at all; hard to do this well.
(4) The story is still early, but there are enough clues to think this will take an epic turn at some point soon. Can't wait to see how the storyline develops.