VN - Ren'Py - Unnatural Instinct [v0.8] [Merizmare]

Rating for game version v0.3:

A really fun game with nice renders, good looking girls (maybe the mom looks a bit young) and also with very good animations. Quite some funny dialogs, too. I liked that. The story is of course not new, but the story telling is well made. The engrish is there (therefore not five points). But it's still not that bad, you can follow the dialogs without problems.

All in all a game I will definitely follow, good luck to the dev.

Skip it.

There's nothing else to say since there's nothing else to this. The somewhat okay-ish renders don't save it from its own unoriginality. You'll get bored of the style and characters in about 10 minutes if you're able to read the incomprehensible text. There's far better games out there that follow this formula, if you're not bored to death of them.

I gave it 2 stars but its barely worth the 1,5 star I had in mind, I have some pity because its the first update.

Great renders with an interesting cast. Writing needs a bit of polish but it's early days in development.

Contains Trans content that is not optional AT THIS POINT so keep that in mind.

Overall a great first release and I look forward to what they deliver in future.

Recommend a look.

Guy returns to rub nasties with his 3 sisters, is a much better title.

Story:

Generic story so far but it can't be helped sometimes. Same old, same old in terms of the setup. Little sister wants you but is secretly or not so secretly trying to set you up with her friend who his a "Little secret" if you know what I mean. The game is overshadowed by the bad grammar and bland dialogue though. It was hard to follow, you mainly stare at the pretty pictures.

Renders:
Okay. Minus the eyes.

Characters:
As I said before the setup is very typical. Charlie looked too much like the Mom to me, but that's me.

Dialogue/Grammar:
Hard to focus.

Overall, I'm gonna slip this. Besides the dialogue, I don't see anything I'll like when it comes to the story.

If you can ignore the bad English this is pretty good for a first release. Models are excellent and the one animated scene is solid. 1star knocked off due to bad translation. 5 stars if good English. Support this new dev, if this is the beginning he can only improve on his work