- Aug 10, 2017
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I loved it. Got distracted by the tetris, but then after that, right back into the story. I didn't play that generation, admittedly, but I gotta say I loved the characterization here. And the art was great, too. My minor criticisms are a spelling error here and there, and that the pic after you remove her undershirt still has her hair up, but it said that her hair beads joined the clothes on the floor shortly before (but that's just a minor nitpick, overall it was great.) Given the story selection thing at the beginning, I'm hoping that this means that Roxie is only the beginning. I can't wait to see what else you have in store.