Fantastic writing, which made it a joy to play through. My only gripes would both be a personal taste issue- tetris is my least favorite game of all time and playing it an an absolute nightmarish chore, so I didn't enjoy that part at all. Second would be the fact that Roxie admits to having been with other guys before you, which.. I don't know.. because the writing is so good, I was emotionally invested up to that point, and upon learning that it felt like a part of me died inside, or something. Like I said, it's just personal taste, and I know there's plenty of people who don't care about something like that.
Either way, outside of those issues, I loved it. Just to be sure, though, Roxie is the only story so far, yes? I've only skimmed through the other comments, but it looked like some people were saying there are other girl's stories? Well, regardless, I'm really looking forward to more. I kind of hope, if there are more stories in the future, that they all remain self-contained so it doesn't imply you're just romancing and sleeping with a bunch of girls at the same time. I know it's your story and you absolutely have the right to do what you want, but you strike up such a good relationship with Roxie at the end so it'd be a bummer if you just kind of spit on that.