Abhorson

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Game Developer
Jun 21, 2017
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Decent first release, especially for a dev newbie. So here is my feedback. I liked some design decisions you made - like the fast corruption progression in the lack of other content, otherwise you're right, ppl would be bored. Once the game is fleshed out more, I'd pace the start down. Also, doing 3 shifts in one day shouldn't be a permanent thing. And we need some more material for the good girl path over time and of course revenge paths towards ex-bf and family - at least based on what we read at the intro. Be aware of the model choices in the vids/pics please. I know it's almost impossible to keep it consistent over the game with a female MC, but I really hate when the model changes within one sequence or has zero resemblence. It just breaks the immersion. Most important of all, keep it fun to develop and play. You did a good job with that in your first release.
Concerning content. Yep that's the plan going forward.
Concerning models. Yeah it throws me off as well when a model changes. I'm trying to keep hair consistent at least, but sometimes it's hard. I'll keep an eye out.
 
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trexop

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Oct 9, 2020
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Written through Google-translator, do not kick for errors:

1) According to the plot, very good. I like the corruption of the character. However, this happens too abruptly (I understand that this is at the start - I just hope in the future this path will be more plot-based, and not so that "Jerk off and there will be grandmas")
2) By design. Color identification is very good, thanks for confusing this issue.
One more thing, (personal), I am not English speaking, and I play using the built-in google translator, which is a huge plus for HTML games. However, the auto-translator has one significant drawback, it shifts the text and overlays the link words. It would be ideal if the text is formatted as a table, and the link words are formatted with separate buttons.
Also, a little advice, arrange the transfer words so that their placement on the screen is grouped in one place on the screen. So, for example, after the word-link of the transition is not on the left, but on the right of the screen.
 
Mar 6, 2018
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I like no BS approach. The grind tbh is non-existent, you can just spam a few times doing same thing and you get to a route. For the first release as people stated: true little content, but I'm glad to see routes upfront. My suggestion is to add like a street/bordello whore route, or at least like a red light district stripper route. Good game so far and little bugs! Can't wait for next update.
 

Innesda

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Jul 25, 2018
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I can see why this is rated 5 stars by two people, you can go to a restaurant and work and then you can go to a restaurant and work. And of course don't forget about "watch porn on computer".
 

ustar

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Dec 29, 2017
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Bug Report
The camgirl 13 and 14 images fail to load for me...
You are right. It's a bug because I'm a potato head. It will be fixed by the next update.
It's pretty simple fix, images are there, but directory in HTML was set incorrect.
I fixed it, in attached file, .HTM fix only, so original images must be present.
By the way, good start of the game!
 

drenai1

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Feb 22, 2021
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- Add a pharmacy that will introduce pregnancy management options. Such as birth control pills, condoms, plan B pills, pregnancy tests, etc. You can have it further developed by having consequences from sex. If the protagonist gets creampied, there would be a random chance she will get pregnant. This can either lead to an abortion, single mother ending, or shotgun marriage ending (if the MC gets pregnant from her boyfriend).
Or she gives birth and gives the baby up for adoption. Then the game goes on.
 

TiffanyFox25

Newbie
Aug 3, 2019
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Great job on your first game and coding in general. Will look forward to your game updates.
For a version 1.0, its good and as described.
 
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