overall, 2/5 for Prologue
story:
1. It feels a similar style to "Rebirth." MC is forced to leave the house after 80 years and go to vampire school to learn about war and he's a sniper type I guess? He has heated talk to another top-over ego guy about not touching his girls (40 males and 400 females in school), and he's number one.
Dean and Queen Vampire choose MC to go some training with two girls, one being an ego guy girlfriend and a very old vampire for some reason for years. After they return, they do some testing, and the result is that MC wins.
2. Later on queen gives MC the first contract, which results in killing (Lilith because the queen hates her for being half-breed.)
3. MC goes and talks to the queen of queens (was MC's dad a harem lover at some point?) and makes a deal with her to save Lilith
4. The story is all over the place and feels rushed, with each event not fully explaining what's going on, and the prologue feels already almost over
Renders/ scenes:
1. Zero sex scenes (which I completely find if focused on the story and development of girls), but outside in the woods scene, MC talks about "Everything that happened that night was amazing, but the problem was the next morning." In the next scene, Lilith and MC wake up naked, and she says good morning, "Last night was good, but it was fun, nothing else." Why wasn't there a sex scene there?
2. all scenes get is MC and cuddling with girls naked
3. The character renders okay, not great, but also not bad, except for MC (first, we get creepy baby doll-looking MC when he's a child, and when he grew up, he still looks like a 13-year-old kid)
Characters
1. Lilith: is a crazy slutty trouble, the girl with problems and trouble past
2. Talon: is an average bully villain with a huge ego, thinking he can't talk to his girls, and is number 1
3. queen: I do not know much about her except she beyrays you later on
4. Beth: who is she? She was in the beginning, and was that it?
5. Alexandra: bitch girl and Talon and acts MC is a nobody and should stay away from her, but later on, she is connected to him and cares about him. Dev needs to rewrite some dialog because, during the scene with Bert and MC, he says Talon has never kissed Alex yet, but in the next scene, he sees Talon and her kissing.
6. Bella knows nothing about her except that she is MC's friend and somehow knows when MC needs a helping hand.
What's up with some of the same girls we keep running into, and the only names are training member/ sniper training member?
Choices:
1. It doesn't feel like it matters much. One set of choices (find Belle or go back to the beach), but both lead to the same location?
Other than that, get 1+ with some girls
story:
1. It feels a similar style to "Rebirth." MC is forced to leave the house after 80 years and go to vampire school to learn about war and he's a sniper type I guess? He has heated talk to another top-over ego guy about not touching his girls (40 males and 400 females in school), and he's number one.
Dean and Queen Vampire choose MC to go some training with two girls, one being an ego guy girlfriend and a very old vampire for some reason for years. After they return, they do some testing, and the result is that MC wins.
2. Later on queen gives MC the first contract, which results in killing (Lilith because the queen hates her for being half-breed.)
3. MC goes and talks to the queen of queens (was MC's dad a harem lover at some point?) and makes a deal with her to save Lilith
4. The story is all over the place and feels rushed, with each event not fully explaining what's going on, and the prologue feels already almost over
Renders/ scenes:
1. Zero sex scenes (which I completely find if focused on the story and development of girls), but outside in the woods scene, MC talks about "Everything that happened that night was amazing, but the problem was the next morning." In the next scene, Lilith and MC wake up naked, and she says good morning, "Last night was good, but it was fun, nothing else." Why wasn't there a sex scene there?
2. all scenes get is MC and cuddling with girls naked
3. The character renders okay, not great, but also not bad, except for MC (first, we get creepy baby doll-looking MC when he's a child, and when he grew up, he still looks like a 13-year-old kid)
Characters
1. Lilith: is a crazy slutty trouble, the girl with problems and trouble past
2. Talon: is an average bully villain with a huge ego, thinking he can't talk to his girls, and is number 1
3. queen: I do not know much about her except she beyrays you later on
4. Beth: who is she? She was in the beginning, and was that it?
5. Alexandra: bitch girl and Talon and acts MC is a nobody and should stay away from her, but later on, she is connected to him and cares about him. Dev needs to rewrite some dialog because, during the scene with Bert and MC, he says Talon has never kissed Alex yet, but in the next scene, he sees Talon and her kissing.
6. Bella knows nothing about her except that she is MC's friend and somehow knows when MC needs a helping hand.
What's up with some of the same girls we keep running into, and the only names are training member/ sniper training member?
Choices:
1. It doesn't feel like it matters much. One set of choices (find Belle or go back to the beach), but both lead to the same location?
Other than that, get 1+ with some girls
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HFS this Mc is a loser and his appearance looks more like a femboy, the guy gets beaten up twice by the same person, and what the hell is wrong with the way he speaks for someone 80+ years old?
Wearing a backpack with a rainbow and hearts.....
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The only choice where it seems like the Mc could show a bit of backbone can't be chosen because the Mc is afraid of teachers
(whit this Mc i have no doubt that he will even end up being pegged for one of the LI)
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- Feb 25, 2020
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This game won't be around long, devs clearly taking the piss
to be objective here
- ntr tag
- the mc looks like a femboy and has a rainbow backpack
- acts like a dweeb
- already got his ass kicked twice in the prologue
- the typical alpha chad bully character was already introduced
- Mar 10, 2024
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Would like to like this game dialogue is a big issue. example even if you don't kiss Lilith you still tell Alexandra you did.
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You’re just saying that because the dude in the cover photo with all the Lis isn’t the MC
- Jan 15, 2018
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The “harem tag" is red flag for cuck games as well
- May 4, 2017
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the was promising initially but then it goes and forces you to choose a LI you barely know, declaring 'shes the one and I knew from the first moment' The protagonist has zero facial expressions for anything
he's as interesting as a block of wood an twice as stiff
the writing needs polish
the characters need real motivations and personalities
the project needs the kinetic tag at least for now as there are zero choices
the protagonist needs to be explored in the prologue so we resonate with him and understand him.... this does NOT occur in any form
file size is already almost 3gb an its just the first installment, that needs to be reigned in hard.
Theres some good ideas here and something of a foundation but it needs a serious amount of work before it becomes something worthwhile.
he's as interesting as a block of wood an twice as stiff
the writing needs polish
the characters need real motivations and personalities
the project needs the kinetic tag at least for now as there are zero choices
the protagonist needs to be explored in the prologue so we resonate with him and understand him.... this does NOT occur in any form
file size is already almost 3gb an its just the first installment, that needs to be reigned in hard.
Theres some good ideas here and something of a foundation but it needs a serious amount of work before it becomes something worthwhile.
- Feb 14, 2018
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Another harem with ntr? oh really? Damn, it's really putting content in regardless of whether it doesn't make sense.
What a waste of renders.
What a waste of renders.
- Aug 19, 2022
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I could handle about everything else, but the MC being a massive pussy. Why?
Ntr and harem(yeah right) + a beta loser mc, what could go wrong
- Feb 3, 2024
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Damn, what a bad game, the MC looks like a cowardly femboy, they'll definitely take his anal virginity in the future, very bad writing, the MC acts like a 12 year old, it's ridiculous and very poorly written
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Well, here's another developer who believes they can satisfy both sides of the issue simultaneously.
My suggestion: pick a clear direction.
Trying to cater to both sides will only lead to unnecessary headaches.