QSP HTML Vicindio [v0.8.6 Twine] [Solid Snekk]

[Fallenshadow747]

For quest maybe a button for index or maybe a place in player stats that records what quest you are on or have completed.
You could also do a item in the inventory that tracks your progress and transformations. I apologize if it sounds condescending i
do not mean it that way i also dont know if that is possible to code on the new system you are working on.

 

[Fallenshadow747]

Thank you so much! It worked

No problem it can be confusing do to the change in quest.

 

[xeivous]

Where would be a good spot to show the health if I put it somewhere on every page? Having a bar for health can be something I have as the default and as a toggle in the menu.

As for quests, what would be the best way to sort them?

Either as a side bar or under the current set of icons for all the menu stuff.

As for sorting quests, there are multiple good answers. However I gotta say that sorting them by questline is the best option. Assuming that the details for a given quest are sufficient to remind about where one is supposed to go and who is involved. Like the first quest for the kitsune goddess at the bar would be under the kitsune questline and remind you to go to the shrine near the fort.

 

[Solid Snekk]

The extra section under the current one is gonna require some work, but how is this for the Quest system?

Screenshot 1 is what it currently is.

Screenshot 2 is what you see when you click on the Quest tab. This will remove the Completed quest tab as it puts it all in the same area.

Screenshot 3 is when you click on the name of the quest to see the full quest details instead of just the next objective.

 

[Solid Snekk]

Picked up someone's code for stat bars on twinery and am trying it out.

They could still use some work but was this what you were thinking?

 

[xeivous]

Much better quest system. Though it is a bit unclear if the quest for talking to the lizard is set on the dragon isles or is named after them.

stat bars are also neat, but I think being under the menu bars would look better

 

[duy123a]

I just new to the game, but is the bow combat suck or if I really bad. Everytime I move further the enemy also move so no way to hit them.

 

[doujinftw]

I just new to the game, but is the bow combat suck or if I really bad. Everytime I move further the enemy also move so no way to hit them.

yeh dont play bow snekk still working on improving the combat, bow have a major problem that it can't be fire at point blank, but every encounter starts you at right next to the enemies, so you already force to waste 1st turn to move away, and if they have higher speed than you, well you're shit out of luck they'll just catch up to u and knock you down.

 

[doujinftw]

Picked up someone's code for stat bars on twinery and am trying it out.

They could still use some work but was this what you were thinking?

yeh, it looks good at full bar can u show one more screen shot of lost hp,mana,and stamina?

 

[Vombatidi]

Picked up someone's code for stat bars on twinery and am trying it out.

They could still use some work but was this what you were thinking?

Maybe under the "menu is better, like this;
I did it quickly on photoshop to indicate its position

 

[CaptainBipto]

Picked up someone's code for stat bars on twinery and am trying it out.

They could still use some work but was this what you were thinking?

Unless there is a way to make the various bars line up with the text, personally, I would prefer just the plain bars (screenshot_4).
The bars with the text offset and throwing a gap between the bars just looks kind of weird. If the text could like up directly below or above each of the bars, that would be fine, but as it is in that screenshot, it looks kind of 'blegh'.

 

[Throw_AwayPower]

The extra section under the current one is gonna require some work, but how is this for the Quest system?

Screenshot 1 is what it currently is.

Screenshot 2 is what you see when you click on the Quest tab. This will remove the Completed quest tab as it puts it all in the same area.

Screenshot 3 is when you click on the name of the quest to see the full quest details instead of just the next objective.

I think a nicer version of the health bar location is under the like vombatidi gave an example of.

Also I prefer the second method, so Screenshot 2 and 3. Although maybe make it so completed quest also show up and it's collapsible. It's always hand to know what you've done and where you've been, but you don't need to know about it always.

 

[xeivous]

Vertically stacking the bars is kinda bad looking though.

 

[Solid Snekk]

Here it is, below the bar, and I've added the stats inside the health bar. They line up with the text and the numbers don't cut off the bars in any way.

Working on the single line of bars and a toggle between them, I'll post an update when I figure that out.

I also need to make it work in light mode.

 

[xeivous]

the white text on the green stamina bar is a bit hard to read

also a minor criticism for the parley screen. A more neutral way of phrasing that enemies are interested in your surrender to them because they want to fuck you would be more fitting and leaves open the chance to influence that possibility. Like instead of " They are a Male, which you might be able to use." something like "Their eyes stray from yours to roam your body, you may be able to use this" would fit better and could be customized on an enemy by enemy basis like with wolves it would be "Their eyes shine with an unnatural hunger, you may be able to use this" or just for a bit of variety in the text.

 

[Vombatidi]

Here it is, below the bar, and I've added the stats inside the health bar. They line up with the text and the numbers don't cut off the bars in any way.

Working on the single line of bars and a toggle between them, I'll post an update when I figure that out.

I also need to make it work in light mode.

light mode is a crime and shouldn't be allowed /s

 

[doujinftw]

Here it is, below the bar, and I've added the stats inside the health bar. They line up with the text and the numbers don't cut off the bars in any way.

Working on the single line of bars and a toggle between them, I'll post an update when I figure that out.

I also need to make it work in light mode.

btw have you tried horizontal bar yet, just curious if fit better than vertical, also I think you don't really need the words health, stamina, and mana in the bar, most people would know what the bar color associate with what by now unless this is their 1st rpg game ever, it might save a few space for if the game ever go for really high stat numbers in the future.

 

[Solid Snekk]

the white text on the green stamina bar is a bit hard to read

also a minor criticism for the parley screen. A more neutral way of phrasing that enemies are interested in your surrender to them because they want to fuck you would be more fitting and leaves open the chance to influence that possibility. Like instead of " They are a Male, which you might be able to use." something like "Their eyes stray from yours to roam your body, you may be able to use this" would fit better and could be customized on an enemy by enemy basis like with wolves it would be "Their eyes shine with an unnatural hunger, you may be able to use this" or just for a bit of variety in the text.

I'm going to go in and add the various things that you can offer to each specific enemy. Giant Snakes would not be able to be bribed with money, but bandits and guards could, for example.

btw have you tried horizontal bar yet, just curious if fit better than vertical, also I think you don't really need the words health, stamina, and mana in the bar, most people would know what the bar color associate with what by now unless this is their 1st rpg game ever, it might save a few space for if the game ever go for really high stat numbers in the future.

I did consider having the health run down the left side and stamina down the right but since the various passages are not uniform in how long they are it just looked bad.

I am trying to make the health and numbers their own toggle in the settings

 

[xeivous]

I'm going to go in and add the various things that you can offer to each specific enemy. Giant Snakes would not be able to be bribed with money, but bandits and guards could, for example.

I was more concerned about you potentially writing/coding yourself into a corner when it came to surrendering sex stuff. As the text with the bandits I quoted was too limiting. That said, the specifics of what can be achieved during parley being different from enemy to enemy is good.

 

[Solid Snekk]

Okay!

I have the toggles up for the stats.

You can now enable the health, stamina and mana bars and they will be below the menu.

You can also toggle the stat name and the number.

Working on changing the text color/allowing the text color to be chosen.