Can someone slap Eromantis with constructive feedback and critique? I just don't have time
I can only say that this scene in particular feels a bit too forced, mostly rendering wise, girl know about lingerie, etc. Yet she does this provocative pose. It could be better if this man did something to get the same blackmail source by leaning with his phone or something.
I can speculate that it's been done in order to avoid excessive rendering, but i just want to be sure.
It's much more fun when girl doesn't act stupid imo, like in "Special request" for example.
But SR go downhill with blackmail in blackmail in blackmail...
I also think that it's better to avoid too grotesque scenes for now, make this girl worth breaking.
Sorry
About the blackmailer, as I understand it was necessary to drive the plot ahead while lily didn't have her underwear on that day... but if you ask me, showing cleavage would've been a great start with the blackmailer guy.
Visualize a flashback from the perspective of the blackmailer
OR lily recollecting her past few days while changing to her work clothes:
- First the day he drops the fork and lily shows her cleavage. She instantly becomes his target, and he
wants her now. So, he is determined to keep visiting every day.
- Second day he drops the fork again but takes a picture of her cleavage. Pictures act as blackmailing material later.
- Third day he calls her closer to ask about the menu, lily is too busy explaining him while he takes an upskirt picture of her. He later spills his drink and while lily cleans the table, he brushes his arm against her tits or touches her ass (if the scene looks organic)
- Fourth day he drops the fork again, but this time due to a wardrobe malfunction, lily shows deep cleavage (maybe even a nipple poking out and a picture taken). This drives him crazy and now he is ready to
confront her.
- Fifth day is the actual current day, when the events unfold as they currently do. No changes are needed here at all.
As you can see, it gives a little bit more backstory to the blackmailer, why he's preying on poor lily, and doesn't feel rushed like "I need to do something with her right now!!" in the very first encounter. That is kept for the fifth day so until then, he collects evidence and his interest in her keeps on growing. These five days can also play out in a sequence like "and on the next day, this happened..." and so on.
This is just wishful thinking on my part, as lily knew she would be exposed without her panties but still bends over without any concern... It would also help flesh out the start of blackmail much better as it also takes place over multiple days, giving more time for the plot to breathe.