VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.11] [Saxonado Studios]

[Aenys_Faelin]

It seems to me that the issue could be at least alleviated with a simple rewrite. She could be saying things like: "Wait, Brandon, not yet" and "We can do this later, OK?"

That happened just nobody has posted 0.11a lol

 

[Yougiblack]

That happened just nobody has posted 0.11a lol

Wait he rewrote the scene why so?

 

[quandin]

I really feel like some people should get banned from reviewing games

 

[deviousstorm]

Just for the sake of discussion, do you really not understand those people's perspective? Her exact lines:

am "B-Brandon, stop...!"
am "W-We can't...!"
am "...I-I'm a married woman...!"
am "I-I can't do this to my husba-"

And she's making this face.
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If her looking pained and telling him to stop while she tries to hold him back doesn't mean "stop", then what does? This sounds like saying "no means yes", which people nowadays know better than to think that. Until she notices her husband and decides to turn it into a play, the scene looks indistinguishable from an assault scene.

Despite her being the supposed mafia princess, she hasn't really exercised that at all since the Geist situation. She's been more and more submissive, and has done nothing to talk back when they insult her or her husband. Not allowing disrespect is one of the key traits of mafioso types, and she just has not acted like that at all. And as for being physically dangerous, she hasn't exercised that either. Plus, Brandon is jacked. He could 100% overpower her if he wanted. I think the mafia princess angle is cool, but it feels largely forgotten in the story.

nah you correct here. It could be changed to be less rapey.

 

[dankselz]

honestly, gooners see one BBC in the game and it's all "downhill" from there

u right but don't act all high and mighty we're all gooners here bro

 

[Terry Zimmerman]

It seems to me that the issue could be at least alleviated with a simple rewrite. She could be saying things like: "Wait, Brandon, not yet" and "We can do this later, OK?"

Ok, that wouldnt be so bad. Just replacing the stop with a wait is enough. The whole set up of the scene it was obvious to me that it was planned from the beggining. She has been teasing Brandon this last two days, gives to his advances (flirting and touching and looking at his dick), follows him to the (I think they say its male, but could be wrong) locker room. Says "I cant do this to my husband" like?? What does she mean by that? I think at that point she is roleplaying as a cheating wife overcame with lust. Brandon literally says she could get away at any point, but it is obvious she wants it too and that he wouldnt stop her. She is moaning. She is reluctangly giving to his advances, but is just acting. She is roleplaying as a cheating wife. She literally smiles as she sees the mc and then does the sluttiest face and tells him (at least in the humilliation/sub path or whatv) yeah, its true, my husband cant satisfy me. Like come on people, how many signs do you need to get that ame planed everything since the begining, she was just waiting for the mc to find her and get off from his reaction.

 

[Terry Zimmerman]

And at the end of the day, its a porn set up for a porn game. Filming someone without their consent (like the guy in the hotel) is a shitty thing to do in real life, but is a hot scene anyways if you dont think too hard about it.

 

[BangB420]

u right but don't act all high and mighty we're all gooners here bro

no shit sherlock

 

[dankselz]

no shit sherlock

corny

 

[cryfane]

Just for the sake of discussion, do you really not understand those people's perspective? Her exact lines:

am "B-Brandon, stop...!"
am "W-We can't...!"
am "...I-I'm a married woman...!"
am "I-I can't do this to my husba-"

And she's making this face.
View attachment 4577366

If her looking pained and telling him to stop while she tries to hold him back doesn't mean "stop", then what does? This sounds like saying "no means yes", which people nowadays know better than to think that. Until she notices her husband and decides to turn it into a play, the scene looks indistinguishable from an assault scene.

Despite her being the supposed mafia princess, she hasn't really exercised that at all since the Geist situation. She's been more and more submissive, and has done nothing to talk back when they insult her or her husband. Not allowing disrespect is one of the key traits of mafioso types, and she just has not acted like that at all. And as for being physically dangerous, she hasn't exercised that either. Plus, Brandon is jacked. He could 100% overpower her if he wanted. I think the mafia princess angle is cool, but it feels largely forgotten in the story.

You don't know what acting is (or Ammy is really that good at acting she even made you believe lol)

 

[nidezrel]

You don't know what acting is (or Ammy is really that good at acting she even made you believe lol)

What acting? She only started acting when she saw that the MC arrived. Before that it wasn't acting. The shift in demeanor is extremely clear.