VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.13 Fix] [Saxonado Studios]

[Hmong-sama]

Waited a few updates and it was well worth the wait! That was hot ngl. OMG Amelia!
But I feel like the next few updates is going to be more of a serious one. Maybe some scenes for MC and Ame at most.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Amelia sex is fine and all but I want to see how DEV incorporates the mafia into the story. Will do things for the mafia with her husbands blessings.

 

[nidezrel]

Is this it? I mean... It wasn't bad, but... All that hype for... this? Very mid update. Mid banter, mid teasing, bellow average sex scenes that were EXTREMELY short, in fact, shorter than the teasing scenes from the earlier updates.

The writing for those scenes was very poor, to say the least. Felt like a "well, let's get this out of the way so that we can move on" kinda scene.

People saying "Saxy is cooking!" probably can't even go to the gym without creaming their underpants, because seriously... Even though we finally got the long awaited sex scene with the coach, there was nothing hot about it. Actually, I think this is the worse I've seen the pacing and text for any update, so far.

It felt like watching someone rip apart the concept of "show, don't tell". Because we are told multiple times Ammie is getting fucked hard, intensely and losing her mind from pleasure... But we don't actually see that happening, because the author doesn't show us, he only tells us it's happening. And then you press enter a couple of times and the sex scene is over, without even giving you enough time to get a hard-on. Lmao.

You're telling me the jacked personal trainer who just so happens to present himself as a fuckboy could only mannage that? 2 positions in bed for what seemed like a couple of minutes, then a slightly longer and somehwat "spicier" (hair grabbing and spanking) scene in the bathroom with only silhouetes?

Again, there was no kissing, no breast sucking, no foreplay, nothing interesting going on. Straight to the bedroom, then straight to sex (very lame sex, at that), pump a couple of times, aaaaaand done! What an absolute shitshow of a sex scene.

And what the fuck is up with the dialogue? "ahhmm", "uhhmmmf", "aaargh", "fuck!"... We grade schoolers now? The fucking AI NTR games being spammed on this site have better dialogue for the sex scenes. For shame!

Great art tho. Karman is the one actually cooking.

I've come to the conclusion that Saxonado can't write sex scenes. The one with the coworker seems to have been a fluke.

Just wanted to say that I personally do not like overly long sex scenes. I think this was pretty much the limit of what I would consider acceptable. If I like a scene a lot, I'll replay it. I don't want to just be hearing the same canned moans and descriptions for 30 minutes. Of course, for the word count, I think they could've done a lot better. But in terms of length, much more than this would be a problem, imo.

 

[Xill]

The only thing I didn't like for this update is that the very first scene with the reverse cowgirl position wasn't turned into a full sex scene, and that they used condoms. Other than that it was pretty good.

 

[BL45T]

I'm sorry but, if people fear that this is going to NTR territory then people just ain't reading the text correctly. And the dev isn't doing it right, because that isn't the devs intention at all.

The way I see it, there will be two things going on at once. The mafia arc, and the couples fetish. There will never be a part of the story that goes "oh no honey they're gonna gangrape me now, I'm so sorry, I have to do this." And then the husband watching in horror while getting aroused. That won't happen. No matter how anyone thinks the story will go, you have to keep in mind that the dev will always write it as NTS and never as NTR. So even if there's gangbangs involved, it will happen because the MC and Ame think it's hot and not because "they have to" or because they're in danger.

Of course I could be wrong and the dev might have been lying all this time or they just go crazy and start writing NTR out of the blue, but those are not the facts we have. The facts are, this is an NTS story and that's the premise. When you guys speculate about what could happen then you have to keep those things in mind. So when there's talks about manipulation, or Ame liking it so much that she will get addicted and betray the MC, that's just headcanon, or fanfiction. Speculation needs to make sense.

The part where she blow job in bathroom then fucks him. That part was 100% made to fool the players into thinking she cheated on him (of course we know she is playing with MC before she reveals it) and it worked like a charm. Most people are being scared due to that one scene(and the non reclaim after that??). But that is also the scene which made it a 100 times better. The jealousy and the uncertainty. That is what I mean by dev doing it right. That is also the magic of NTS. Keep it uncertain and interesting but safe. We know she is not gonna turn but we still love the "thought" of it and this dev is knocking it out of the park.

Now people not reading her intention that is their problem. If they have already made up their mind that this is going to end up being NTR by their own headcanon then they are never gonna listen to what she is saying. A lot of ADHD brain skims through the text too. It also breaks the immersion when she and the MC have to keep reassuring each other. Lets thing play out and trust the process. This is not Azienda or Hangover Cat

 

[Tripfriend]

I have condom fatigue

 

[FMarshallboy]

Someone please be so kind as to share their saves before the new scenes please.