FalsePrince
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To conclude, he asked " What do you think of Ammie kissing another guy and not using a condom? "Anyone know what the latest post says about Ammie's Evolution?
Oh awesome, thats going to be fun. Ammie is going to finally do the things we've all been waiting for!
And you are a byproduct of when god accidentally pushed a button when he was on launch break seriously why are you still here aren't you tired of always blabbering the same stuff over and over again ?He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.
U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.
Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.
Hey it's valid feedback and good writers need valid feedback to improve their work. That would be a funny button for sure.And you are a byproduct of when god accidentally pushed a button when he was on launch break seriously why are you still here aren't you tired of always blabbering the same stuff over and over again ?
Go make your own game instead of labeling characters slut because your brain can't handle it that way you can give the mc a pls stop button i wet my pants and the fmc will stop
Author is in the habit of arbitrary choice/false choice.I’m not sure why he would even ask that question. The simple answer is that it’s just a choice within the game — anyone who wants to pick kissing or raw sex can do so freely, and anyone who doesn’t can simply choose otherwise. It doesn’t require much effort. He’s still pushing strong opinions for no real reason.
Valid feed back ?????Hey it's valid feedback and good writers need valid feedback to improve their work. That would be a funny button for sure.
Yes. It's something that is commonly done wrong for reasons unknown to me, maybe because ntr enjoyers conscious or unconscious bleed their fetish into nts.Valid feed back ?????
Making the lover a living dildo is valid feedback in a nts game ????
He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.
U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.
Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.
Looks like he really wants to lean into some fake couple play with Jack. Sounds fun for a NTS game and I don't understand at this point how anyone thinks Jack will ever be a threat. Might as well just move on if you can't handle this level of NTS.
Find me good pillow talk content and I'll be on my way sirThe last person on earth that can talk about writing good nts scene is a person that wants just pillow talk
I'm sorry, I cannot stop laughing at the cuck mentality of the commentI am fine with no condom, cause there is zero percent chance they would force pregnancy anyway, so that is whatever, and would increase scene strength and other aspects.
I will say kissing is kind of where I draw the line. I just rather keep that just for MC. Its just something I can't get behind personally. I really hope they make that a choice.