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MagicMan753

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I am fine with no condom, cause there is zero percent chance they would force pregnancy anyway, so that is whatever, and would increase scene strength and other aspects.

I will say kissing is kind of where I draw the line. I just rather keep that just for MC. Its just something I can't get behind personally. I really hope they make that a choice.
 

Fusionzone

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He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.

U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.

Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.
 
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Neonviolet

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He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.

U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.

Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.
And you are a byproduct of when god accidentally pushed a button when he was on launch break seriously why are you still here aren't you tired of always blabbering the same stuff over and over again ?
Go make your own game instead of labeling characters slut because your brain can't handle it that way you can give the mc a pls stop button i wet my pants and the fmc will stop
 

Kaizen@99

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I’m not sure why he would even ask that question. The simple answer is that it’s just a choice within the game — anyone who wants to pick kissing or raw sex can do so freely, and anyone who doesn’t can simply choose otherwise. It doesn’t require much effort. He’s still pushing strong opinions for no real reason.
 

Fusionzone

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And you are a byproduct of when god accidentally pushed a button when he was on launch break seriously why are you still here aren't you tired of always blabbering the same stuff over and over again ?
Go make your own game instead of labeling characters slut because your brain can't handle it that way you can give the mc a pls stop button i wet my pants and the fmc will stop
Hey it's valid feedback and good writers need valid feedback to improve their work. That would be a funny button for sure.
 

Fusionzone

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I’m not sure why he would even ask that question. The simple answer is that it’s just a choice within the game — anyone who wants to pick kissing or raw sex can do so freely, and anyone who doesn’t can simply choose otherwise. It doesn’t require much effort. He’s still pushing strong opinions for no real reason.
Author is in the habit of arbitrary choice/false choice.
 

Fusionzone

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Valid feed back ?????
Making the lover a living dildo is valid feedback in a nts game ????
Yes. It's something that is commonly done wrong for reasons unknown to me, maybe because ntr enjoyers conscious or unconscious bleed their fetish into nts.
 

luccel

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He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.

U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.

Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.

games still nts, stop self inserting so much and just go play a game that's vanilla.
 

nidezrel

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Explicitly refusing kisses from the bull is an active turn *on* for me, so I hope Saxxy makes it a choice and not just an ommission in the text, but something that's actually remarked upon.
 
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d183

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I am fine with no condom, cause there is zero percent chance they would force pregnancy anyway, so that is whatever, and would increase scene strength and other aspects.

I will say kissing is kind of where I draw the line. I just rather keep that just for MC. Its just something I can't get behind personally. I really hope they make that a choice.
I'm sorry, I cannot stop laughing at the cuck mentality of the comment :KEK:
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unknown5629

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It’s kind of wild when you think about it. Ame got spit roasted before getting kissed.

according to sax kissing will not be optional, and before anyone posts anything crazy the entire patreon except 1 guy is fully behind it.

sax said there will be no creampies yet. But it will happen.
One poster did post about maybe wanting the blue route to choose if the guy finishes inside or out, and the green route Ame chooses

Idk if it’s possible to do that though on the art side though. Idk if it’s as simple as adding a condom color to the dick on the same scene or ifs a serious undertaking. Not a bad idea though
 
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