@Irphaeus
Honestly don't know what to tell ya...so Imma just throw random (abstract) ideas and thoughts hopefully one of them gonna sound good enough to ya and come to your liking...
- Having the MC to go to a bar or school to gather information and hear rumors around the town during the break freely in any time of the day (btw the school population seems kinda low maybe it just me...there's no random dudes or girls to encounters, have a normal interaction esp when the MC going to be the DC leader...so far all of them are characters that MC to-be sought after)
-I could suggest a fix to the resturant dialoge when the texts clamped together, don't know if it was intentional or not ...it true that I was able to read it but it was annoying to do so...
-Are you intending to make a point of the used-to be workout room and now the MC room as in make him work out more to buff up? and potentially make him able to fight and win that tomboy mafia girl over
-Can't we pick the order of our targets ourself? that's could be interesting and could have and lead to a decent amount of different endings kinda and special scenes if that's one of the things you aiming at
-I kinda found it weird that the MC had only the option to sleep-drug his step-sis just that and not his M-O-M cuz if she fell for him at first he could have her make step-sis for you and prevent her from telling on you anyway and could get you money from your m-om husband...?
-Umm, this game I found it kinda as a different type of Renpy games for sure...it seems like a Japanese VN due to the lack of free strolling like there's no map and the waiting for the right to time to make a move just a choice to make things happen...I got it, it fits because it's not a grinding game as you said but I think grinding might not be that bad thing to consider maybe...? like you doing time-job to be able to by sleeping-drug? or a dress? (like the game corruption in case you know it)
minor thoughts (crappy thoughts rather):
- the list where you click on the target names to view their details... I think it could be use some images instead...that would look neat and nicer in my humble opinion ...and maybe view them in folder in a computer which has a password or something instead of writing such details and scheming in a book that anyone could find and screw you over?
- I really wanna see him beat those gangs back at the park with help of tomboy chick that in the Dōjō or that dude who's all about money? well even tho I think you already thinking about that
- the school nurse kinda feels weird and really wanna know where you going with her tbh... and her being in the mc dreams?
- so far I don't see the pervert friend being helpful at all tbh...like what he's gonna do? give pictures of the principle? and is that it? ...okay what I'm getting at...is make him do stuff for you...he's the only would appreicate what's your doing anyway so I'm hoping for a more of friend doing stuff together ...like send him to distract the principle while you check the pc? idk something like dat
anyway, I legit had a hard time give a feedback...you just did an incredible job and might as well just ignore what I said and you would still be golden...great job my friend and sorry if I wasted your time with my un-creative thinking
...at least I tried, no?
