- Jun 7, 2017
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So I've played a lot more and I'd like to amend my comments about spelling and grammar:
LOTS of Spelling and grammar errors! It's almost like Irphaeus never proofread at all.
Add instead of ad (advertisement) staring (staring at the moon) instead of starring (like starring Jennifer Lawrence). This just a few I remember off the top of my head. A couple sentences were intelligible nonsense. A few /word/ in a couple sentences. Almost like C:\directory\whatthefuck\ or something... I'm just not sure what he was trying to do.
Still...the story is really good (I'm not finished yet) along with images, animations etc. I really LOVE the game. But considering how long this release took, one would expect a lot more polish. As best as I can remember the errors started with the 6.4a content.
LOTS of Spelling and grammar errors! It's almost like Irphaeus never proofread at all.
Add instead of ad (advertisement) staring (staring at the moon) instead of starring (like starring Jennifer Lawrence). This just a few I remember off the top of my head. A couple sentences were intelligible nonsense. A few /word/ in a couple sentences. Almost like C:\directory\whatthefuck\ or something... I'm just not sure what he was trying to do.
Still...the story is really good (I'm not finished yet) along with images, animations etc. I really LOVE the game. But considering how long this release took, one would expect a lot more polish. As best as I can remember the errors started with the 6.4a content.