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bobdillan

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More of minor issue, but is there a way to get sheila to be listed as a half-sister, instead of step-sister. Like i know storywise she is half sister, but seeing the step there isntead of half is a bit annoying to me :S although is a good way to avoid overlords at patreon.
 

Jstforme

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I hope in tournament takamura fight and win.I really don't want to MC replace her in tournament. The only chance of MC to win tournament by using Rachel's magic or some supersoldier serum
I don't think Rachel is there to really help him, why else wipe his memory after he saved her. She's in bed with the bad guys, he'll have to tamper with whatever help Rachel gives them to get his advantage I'm thinking.
 
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Is it just me or did the quality of the writing suddenly drop after that
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I just discovered this game, but I gathered something about a troubled development from the ending and some posts on this forum.

Other than that, this a damn good read and I probably wouldn't be bitching if the writing wasn't so clever otherwise. Not professional, by any standards, but fun, smart and entertaining.
 
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Is it just me or did the quality of the writing suddenly drop after that
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I just discovered this game, but I gathered something about a troubled development from the ending and some posts on this forum.

Other than that, this a damn good read and I probably wouldn't be bitching if the writing wasn't so clever otherwise. Not professional, by any standards, but fun, smart and entertaining.
I had the same feeling when I was playing after that point the games writing just dove off a cliff.
 

Evans15

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More of minor issue, but is there a way to get sheila to be listed as a half-sister, instead of step-sister. Like i know storywise she is half sister, but seeing the step there isntead of half is a bit annoying to me :S although is a good way to avoid overlords at patreon.
The game isn't even allowed on Patreon anymore so that isn't the issue anymore, most likely a translation error, Irphaeus isn't a native english speaker and his english isn't good enough so that's why he has Vash for proofreading.

The other thing is maybe a fan theory but she's probably only your step sister, she could be the daugther of your mom's husband with another marriage, but that doesn't make much sense either. Anyway choose your poison, it is a mistranslation or she's your step sister.
 

Nixi~

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If I was the protag I wouldn't have helped Rachel. Sure he would've lost the mind control juice but does he really need it at this point? Feels like he can just talk his way into any girl's pussy as he is now.
 

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Is it just me or did the quality of the writing suddenly drop after that
The reason I theorize Maki is going to die is just the straight up tonal shift with dealing with her, where before this update she was dealt with as being a generally kind of wacky but good natured person and the MC felt kind of bad about manipulating her (as generally the MC is more or less manipulating everyone, and the karma choices just decide if you're also a dick about it), this time around he's full on crushing on her. The way it's written seems to be a setup for her to be a . Waiting on that heart wrenching death.

That said, it could be the chalked up to the writing being different/worse this time around, and that explains the tonal shift.
 

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I got to the part when we get the "rough" scene with Rikuna in the showers and I have to say that for a "rough" scene it's super laughable even compared to previous scenes from the same game. That's not rough at all, that's just MC taking the lead in the scene but the difference from that to "rough" is like the difference between vanilla and NTR. The music is super annoying, like really, there is no need for that imo. As someone who likes both sweet lovey dovey vanilla sex with lots of kisses and rough as fuck sex where it feels like the woman has no rights at all (as long as its consensual of course), that "rough" scene was a big let down.

I'm not saying this just be a dick. I think me and a lot of people in my position have absolutely no right to complain about something that someone gives us for free and we voluntarily decide to play. It's like if someone gave me $100 and then I complain because it wasn't $200, pretty damn stupid. I'm only commenting this because that scene encourage us to leave a comment about it, and since it doesn't specify where should we leave that comment, I guess this place works.

Lastly and more important: please marry Kayane. She deserves a happy life too.
 

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The reason I theorize Maki is going to die is just the straight up tonal shift with dealing with her, where before this update she was dealt with as being a generally kind of wacky but good natured person and the MC felt kind of bad about manipulating her (as generally the MC is more or less manipulating everyone, and the karma choices just decide if you're also a dick about it), this time around he's full on crushing on her. The way it's written seems to be a setup for her to be a . Waiting on that heart wrenching death.

That said, it could be the chalked up to the writing being different/worse this time around, and that explains the tonal shift.
who is maki
 

Jstforme

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I got to the part when we get the "rough" scene with Rikuna in the showers and I have to say that for a "rough" scene it's super laughable even compared to previous scenes from the same game. That's not rough at all, that's just MC taking the lead in the scene but the difference from that to "rough" is like the difference between vanilla and NTR. The music is super annoying, like really, there is no need for that imo. As someone who likes both sweet lovey dovey vanilla sex with lots of kisses and rough as fuck sex where it feels like the woman has no rights at all (as long as its consensual of course), that "rough" scene was a big let down.

I'm not saying this just be a dick. I think me and a lot of people in my position have absolutely no right to complain about something that someone gives us for free and we voluntarily decide to play. It's like if someone gave me $100 and then I complain because it wasn't $200, pretty damn stupid. I'm only commenting this because that scene encourage us to leave a comment about it, and since it doesn't specify where should we leave that comment, I guess this place works.

Lastly and more important: please marry Kayane. She deserves a happy life too.
Yea, I know what you mean. It’s a bit on the light side when the situation calls for some rough play. But the story has lots of other aspects that makes it easy to not care too much about it.
 
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bobdillan

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The game isn't even allowed on Patreon anymore so that isn't the issue anymore, most likely a translation error, Irphaeus isn't a native english speaker and his english isn't good enough so that's why he has Vash for proofreading.

The other thing is maybe a fan theory but she's probably only your step sister, she could be the daugther of your mom's husband with another marriage, but that doesn't make much sense either. Anyway choose your poison, it is a mistranslation or she's your step sister.
From memory, she is def your half-sister, The story establishes your mom is her mom. it just says step sister. And with the patreon thing, It sorta is but isn't, looking at the page, the link is sent via email to patreons, just not uploaded directly to patreon. previews are still seemingly allowed tho.
 

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Lastly and more important: please marry Kayane. She deserves a happy life too.
I liked that scene with her when the MC walks up to her and she pretty much has no time for him but we see her thoughts it's all an act I just wonder what would have happened if she'd gone over to the MC first. We really need that much needed Kayane content to see what's really going on with her.
 

Jacktron1

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I have the perfect scene in my head for when we feed Yoko to Mr Faris, the MC stands behind the false mirror watching Faris drug and bang her and its brutal.....when he's finished he leaves her to two of his boys to finish her off, they eventually leave her bent over a table unable to move and thats when the MC comes from behind the secret window and has his go of her....but she is so out of it that she thinks its one of Faris's boys......let's make it happen.
I don't see Faris ever getting with any of the girls unless he at some point blackmails them
 

blabbolo

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I liked that scene with her when the MC walks up to her and she pretty much has no time for him but we see her thoughts it's all an act I just wonder what would have happened if she'd gone over to the MC first. We really need that much needed Kayane content to see what's really going on with her.
Sadly she will probably get content only during the endgame, at least now we know that she is still a virgin despite her appearance and that she actually likes the mc but she is forced to keep him away to follow her duty.
 
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