I'm tweaking some of the dialogue after re re reading it, because it was still rather confusing, trying to be in the reader position
without knowing the whole plot"
"The pleasure when you do some "3D sofware" update with that tool, and you find out your old rendered scene full of red mark , missplaced object, and bald NPC xD. It's been almost an hour I try to fix the mess... fortunatly i saved lot of things, but it's tedious
I should have been more careful "
" I will take a break and come back tonight probably, im on the script since this morning, tweaking it. "