Madarahyuuga

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The game looks like it will be very good, but try to separate the scenes like the interview with Anne because it got so big that the app I use on my cell phone even restarts at a certain point. Not I got through there.
 

1tomadeira

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Please add an option to go back in the menu. The arrows we have are just the ones already included in Twine, and remove any kind of messaging as well on the phone.

Also, the font and delayed messages is quite annoying. The game has potential, but it seems it wasn't tested before putting here.
 
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Notification bar? I can't find anything to close the phone, clicked pretty much everything.
The notification bar is that thing that pops up in between the game on the right side corner but yes back button needs to be added in the phone passage, I am working on it.
Man, playing a character that has dreams of being a sleazy movie producer. My favorite. /s
I just wanted to add that scene with the redhead, so that was kind of an excuse.
Ditch the delayed chat boxes and do some proofreading, as it is now it's very poorly written.
I know, I am trying to find someone to read the game before uploading it but as you know it's hard to find someone to proofread a porn game. :cry: Also, I made the entire game on Microsoft excel so that might be the reason. The delayed chat boxes are only for the prologue I just wanted to make RPG type prologue.
oof a simple suggestion can you get rid of the fat girls? they are like instant turn off. Or maybe make it optional so I can skip the scenes with them as I don't find them attractive at all.
It's a prologue, in the next update entire thing can be skipped.
There is no femdom in this game unfortunately only maledom. tags wrong as always
I have added the tag because of the last scene but honestly, I didn't know people like Female Dom that much. I am going to add Femdom in the next update. Any suggestion for actresses for that?
Please add an option to go back in the menu. The arrows we have are just the ones already included in Twine, and remove any kind of messaging as well on the phone.

Also, the font and delayed messages is quite annoying. The game has potential, but it seems it wasn't tested before putting here.
I am working on the back button. That entire phone part was added at the last movement so sadly wasn't
The game looks like it will be very good, but try to separate the scenes like the interview with Anne because it got so big that the app I use on my cell phone even restarts at a certain point. Not I got through there.
I am sorry about that. I will separate the long scenes into small passages in the future. Thanks.
tested properly, apologies for that.
good amount of programming went into this well played
also Fuck you for unending back and forth
:LOL: I wanted to make a Christopher Nolan movies type climax :p Try that whole scene with sound there is a surprise at the end.
 

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I have added the tag because of the last scene but honestly, I didn't know people like Female Dom that much. I am going to add Femdom in the next update. Any suggestion for actresses for that?
Well I don't care much for male dom but really hate fem dom.
So optional kinks are great, it means people can opt in or not rather than not play at all.

Although my main gripe is I wish people would properly tag and explain which kinks are optional or not. That would remove 90% of the bitching in game threads.
 
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Well I don't care much for male dom but really hate fem dom.
So optional kinks are great, it means people can opt in or not rather than not play at all.
Yes, that's why I have added the stat's for girls. In the future, you will be able to choose which path you want to go for each girl. Also, I am thinking about using the girls in the main story quests depending upon their stat's, hopefully, I will be able to figure that out.
 
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Yes, that's why I have added the stat's for girls. In the future, you will be able to choose which path you want to go for each girl. Also, I am thinking about using the girls in the main story quests depending upon their stat's, hopefully, I will be able to figure that out.
It's always better to be optional. You can also choose how the MC will behave. Like he can behave submissively or in a dominant or romantic way.
 

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good prologue, relatively interesting story, although the fact that the texts jump like that makes it somewhat annoying but hey I hope it will improve in the following versions


only 2 details 1st that the sex scenes do not play in a loop makes it a pain in the ass to have to click every 10 seconds to see the animation and by god the song at the end is exaggeratedly loud which is very annoying

and now a suggestion Since you have added images of celebrities to represent the characters which I think is great, I hope that implies that apart from pornstars you add celebrities using deepfakes as other fuckable characters later it would be great
 

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I have added the tag because of the last scene but honestly, I didn't know people like Female Dom that much. I am going to add Femdom in the next update. Any suggestion for actresses for that?
Even that last scene is maledom xd. Valentina Nappi is already in the game, it could be her. Abella Danger Cassidy Klein Naomi Swann Ava Addams Dakota Skye Ash Hollywood. But the actress is generally not very important, mostly looking at what is written.
 

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good prologue, relatively interesting story, although the fact that the texts jump like that makes it somewhat annoying but hey I hope it will improve in the following versions


only 2 details 1st that the sex scenes do not play in a loop makes it a pain in the ass to have to click every 10 seconds to see the animation and by god the song at the end is exaggeratedly loud which is very annoying

and now a suggestion Since you have added images of celebrities to represent the characters which I think is great, I hope that implies that apart from pornstars you add celebrities using deepfakes as other fuckable characters later it would be great
I am actually considering adding Emma Watson as a librarian in wizard world but it will take few more updates because the next couple of updates will mainly focus on the political side, which is mostly set up in the normal world.

Even that last scene is maledom xd. Valentina Nappi is already in the game, it could be her. Abella Danger Cassidy Klein Naomi Swann Ava Addams Dakota Skye Ash Hollywood. But the actress is generally not very important, mostly looking at what is written.
Yes, I think Valentina Nappi already has some points in her dom stats.
 
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Varador

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Good start and looks like an interesting story, but needs a bit more work on the technical/visual side.

A few suggestions:

Black text is sometimes hard to see with the complex background images. Having borders on text may solve that, if not maybe speech box background could be less transparent - if it's currently 50 percent maybe it would be better at 75 percent transparency.
Cursive font is hard to read - especially on long texts. As a "next" button it's fine, but a more reader friendly font on normal paragraphs would be better. Just make the font italic and/or bold.
Two or more videos on one screen is troublesome, especially when they all start at the same time and have sound. So maybe hide videos behind buttons, or pause all videos at start (don't know if that's an option).
 
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