Thank you for your reply. I do enjoy this story.I am glad it seemed to make sense up until that point! Thank you for bearing with it for so long. I am hoping the next build cycle doesn't take nearly as long. Take care on your adventures.
I think you understand my point about flashbacks. How you perceive your dreams may not be the same as others perceive their dreams. In that way, dreams/flashbacks are not universal and force the reader to have to think about something they have no or little point of reference to/for. The same reason why most stories don't usually switch languages mid-story, even for some theatrical effect.
Having now made it though the latest Origins, I do understand this better but it has stripped all linearity from the story, making it harder to understand. Again, I hope the payoff will be worth it.
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