HTML Abandoned Waste Management Consultant [v0.01] [Sgt. Pepper]

Who's your favourite girl?


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Sgt. Pepper

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I like the start of this story so far. You're telling a good tale, with a solid foundation. To me, this seems to be a story driven concept, with smut on the side (which can/may/will change with player choices) as it goes. I much prefer stories that actually invest in characters and development, rather than "Hi, I'm a real person! Let's bang everything because we can!"

Keep up with the good efforts so far! There are a few punctuation errors I noticed throughout, but little errors like that are to be expected in new creations.

I am a very story oriented man, when it comes to games like these. If there is nothing to root me in the reality of the world, I could just watch porn.

I'll go back and give it a lookover, thank you for your kind words!
 
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Sgt. Pepper

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Ai art is a mistake...
I talk about this in the developer notes, but I'll drop it here too.


Hello all, just wanted to mention the use of AI generated images in the game. I dislike AI imagery and hate that it is putting real artists out of work. But I also do not currently have the capacity to hire an artist to help with special renders for the game just yet, I also do not feel that a patreon is necessary for one version of the game. Trust has to be built and that requires many iterations and updates along the way.

The plan is to replace all A.I imagery ASAP for real art that contains soul.
 

Sgt. Pepper

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another ai attempt

I talk about this in the developer notes, but I'll drop it here too.


Hello all, just wanted to mention the use of AI generated images in the game. I dislike AI imagery and hate that it is putting real artists out of work. But I also do not currently have the capacity to hire an artist to help with special renders for the game just yet, I also do not feel that a patreon is necessary for one version of the game. Trust has to be built and that requires many iterations and updates along the way.

The plan is to replace all A.I imagery ASAP for real art that contains soul.
 
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1tomadeira

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Good luck on your product. I would like to have a sister or at least cousins btw, since we already have an uncle.

Also, I would deeply recommend to make the page go up. The layout shows care and effort when writing, but it's a bit annoying to need to push the page up all the time when you click to the next page.

Finally, although not as important and crucial to the game, but a bit more images would be nice.
 

1tomadeira

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Also one random thing I noticed when reading the text: 375º is way too hot for salmon, that would overcook the damn fish. Oven with 200º is more than enough, unless you were mentioning imperial units.
 

Sgt. Pepper

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Mar 6, 2018
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Good luck on your product. I would like to have a sister or at least cousins btw, since we already have an uncle.

Also, I would deeply recommend to make the page go up. The layout shows care and effort when writing, but it's a bit annoying to need to push the page up all the time when you click to the next page.

Finally, although not as important and crucial to the game, but a bit more images would be nice.
Didn't even think of adding kids to the Uncle, smart idea. I'm a total dunce ahaha.

I'll try to find a way to patch that, for some reason I just can't figure it out.

You're right. I'll get to cookin' for the next update.
 

Sgt. Pepper

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Also one random thing I noticed when reading the text: 375º is way too hot for salmon, that would overcook the damn fish. Oven with 200º is more than enough, unless you were mentioning imperial units.

My oven is Fahrenheit, as I am from North America and we used a bastardised version of both.

I had to second guess myself but then remembered what I did a few days ago.
 

quiboune

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AI cg games are usually instant ignores for me but a few things made me hesitate with this one.
Namely this:
Use of A.I.
Hello all, just wanted to mention the use of AI generated images in the game. I dislike AI imagery and hate that it is putting real artists out of work. But I also do not currently have the capacity to hire an artist to help with special renders for the game just yet, I also do not feel that a patreon is necessary for one version of the game. Trust has to be built and that requires many iterations and updates along the way.

The plan is to replace all A.I imagery ASAP for real art that contains soul.
Though it is still icky and I'll probably avoid the game until that transition happens.
And this:
A secondary inspiration to even get me started on this was G28 and College Daze.
It gives me hope that you'll at least attempt the power fantasy that CD is, at least with cheats. That game is a power fantasy in a way that no other HTML ever manages to be because it doesn't make the MC super respected and feared from the beginning. On the contrary, it makes the MC a nobody that no one takes seriously until they're his victims, and that's why it works so well. You can compare it to any other "mafia" or "rich guy" game that comes out here, and I've played a bunch: everyone knows the MC, he can get anything easily and every single woman falls for him after a short conversation about the weather. It doesn't work, it's boring. A power fantasy is much more fun when the MC has the power but no one respects or even knows him.
That said...
Open to ideas!​
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Planned: ... More! (Idea's accepted.)
Pregnancy, maledom and a corruption/mean path. Those are musts.
Godspeed, Dev!
 
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