Deckmaster

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Illegible Mink First of all this game has a lot of potential I think and has a very nice suspense building towards the chosen path.

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You are using side characters to addapt to the mc's choices in a rather strange way in this update . James is reacting differently to seeing Stella and Conner which makes no sense and seems it is just to adjust to mc's situation and preferences without even being able to know what these are as they have never been mentioned before. Make sure side characters behave the same way they always do unless the mc/gamer had some kind of influence on that.

And there are some lines where it says mc's wife is talking but it's the mc instead. Maybe you can check that. Especially when arriving back home from camping.
 

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Think this is one of the better if not the best visual novel on the site tbh. I just wish I didn't have to replay for the locked scenes but this is great. The final 5.0 scene was reaaally realistic so you know your shit. My only recommendation is to let the corruption in the obvious upcoming sex scenes flow slowly and not be a total 180 flip, because the build up so far has been good. Cheers.
Yep - it's a difficult balance. After all - we've been at this a year! Take too long and I'll have a riot, rush it and I'll feel I've let myself down :).
 

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Can anyone answer a few questions about the game for me?
Does this game force the MC or FMC to do certain things or is it completely in the players control?
Like does one of them cheat regardless of the decisions you make?
Is the sharing actually sharing or does it just eventually become cheating/cuckolding?
Does the couple do things together and include others or is it mostly just they do things separately with other people and maybe one will just watch but don't really get involved?
Is the husband a small dick incompetent loser and the relationship is on the rocks?
Someone recommended me this game because they said it manages to avoid most of the usual NTR/corruption/swinging/sharing/etc tropes and leaps of logic that every other game of the genre seems to suffer from so just wanted to see if that really is the case before jumping in.

Edit: Sorry just read the dev notes and most of these are answered.
Except if the sharing eventually just becomes the cheating/cuckold path?
Also sorry one more question. Do you ever make decisions for the wife or only see her point of view and how she reacts to the decisions made by the husband?
Sharing will stay sharing - wouldn't dream of bringing that kink that over to the dark side. You don't play as the wife - she reacts to what you do, but essentially you have no control over her. Just like in real life...
 
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Hi Illegible Mink! Your game has really big potential, very nice renders and characters and most important, various ways to go about. As I mentioned in a post before, I prefer the love and sharing routes in games, glad to see they are here not only in name!

As for the characters, Debbie is really growing on me and it seems she is really in love with the MMC. Looking forward what comes out of that path.

It seems that Heather and MMC start to gain a better relationship as well. I have to say even before the new update, I liked Heather more than Trish. Heather is a wild one, but not really bad. Whereas Trish is an office bully.
 

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Alright. I'm not trying to influence the creative process if you have something specific you are going for. Just letting you know my perspective as someone who was on the cheating route specifically because I don't like netorase (willing cuckold stuff).

If I wanted an MC who is into sharing or getting cucked, it would make more sense to play one of the other routes, no? To be fair, there is that one NTR scenario that starts as consensual sharing/swinging but then spirals out of control into real cheating. Maybe you are going for that. I personally find that pretty weak and unsatisfying, but that's getting into subjective taste.
There is a fine line between Cuck vs Cheat - many games I've played have the female character playing away, and the game is billed as NTR. At this time, in WMW, all we have is her dalliance with Trish - imo, that is more like cheating, but depending on some views (not necessarily mine 100%) the husband is getting cucked too. Tbh, I just wanted her to sleep with Trish regardless of what we call it :). However, don't worry - re WMW, the paths will diverge more as the story develops...as you'll see.
 
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Sorry for the question. But when I play on cheating path, my points of love and respect have to be lowest to unblock all the scenes? What about other routes, sharing and cuckold? I have to be nice to my wife or not to see all the scenes? :)
Love can be high on all routes - it allows you to be as nice as you choose to be - but it won't save you from being cucked or cheated on. However, for Cuck / Cheat, Respect need to be low - not necessarily rock bottom, just in the Green zone on the thermometer. Once it's there you just need to keep it there. Share need to have respect kept in the higher end (Light Green or above).
 
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Since everyone is impacient i'll release android version without any mods and update once it's released (y)
 
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