- May 29, 2024
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Started it and found it mildly interesting. However, I felt the transition of getting to the Hotel could have been done better.
Maybe a plane scene where they are all drinking, and then pass out? This would eliminate the need to have to explain it all later on. Also, I felt there were way too many pages of dialogue and empty hallways. This could probably be condensed quite a bit while still keeping the mood of the story in tact.
I assume this was a translation, hence the dialogue could have been better written in some spots, but overall it was decent. I also found that the text was also hard to read at times, maybe a transparent dialogue box would have been a better option.
As for the sexy bits, I'm not too fond of the Barbie doll types, but I loved the Velvet model. She is a hottie.
Unfortunately, the animations were robotic, but the body textures looked nice. A bummer that there weren't any facial or breast cum shots.
Good attempt at trying something a little different, but IMO, it could use a bit of tweaking.
Maybe a plane scene where they are all drinking, and then pass out? This would eliminate the need to have to explain it all later on. Also, I felt there were way too many pages of dialogue and empty hallways. This could probably be condensed quite a bit while still keeping the mood of the story in tact.
I assume this was a translation, hence the dialogue could have been better written in some spots, but overall it was decent. I also found that the text was also hard to read at times, maybe a transparent dialogue box would have been a better option.
As for the sexy bits, I'm not too fond of the Barbie doll types, but I loved the Velvet model. She is a hottie.
Unfortunately, the animations were robotic, but the body textures looked nice. A bummer that there weren't any facial or breast cum shots.
Good attempt at trying something a little different, but IMO, it could use a bit of tweaking.
