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wedoom

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Great start. I'm interested to see where this goes. Seems like its setting up for a romance with the white roommate, but it would be interesting to explore other options as well, especially given the race play themes it seems like you are heading towards.

Regardless, make sure to pace yourself so you don't burn out and become another abandoned html game grifter
 
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wobblebobble

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Pleasant slow pace to start with.
Font colour mix a little hard to read.
Unsure what the mixed classes are for since the Alphas share the same class but also don't do the same work? Are they on their phones while the MC is looking at sissy hypno?

Writing-wise - contrasting us with the Alphas (you even set up an established bully for the MC) I'm surprised there isn't testing where they set us up with an Alpha guy to demonstrate which class we should be in. A mixed class with Dom/Sub ought to feature activities to reinforce their dynamic.
I.e:
The outfits MC wears is picked by an alpha in their class or their Roommate, since its clear rooms are all Alpha/beta setups.
Early classes have a conflict where they pretend they haven't already decided which spec you are and you get beta'd. They then pick classes or groups for everyone. Perhaps the Alpha boys share the class but leave for their own stuff once sissy hypno is playing? Otherwise, why are they there?
Off the top of my head - their homework is making the hypno for MC to watch, taking pictures of themselves looking buff and hard to make MC want to fuck them, etc.

Linear story, which is fine, I appreciate the lack of grinding and the clarification that I can't miss anything by clicking around.


Glancing through the thread the Dev has written out a known extremist conspiracy theory as into the intro to their game and is also confused as to why people are unsure if they're joking or playing it straight. (laugh track plays.)
With sympathy to the dev, I recommend a:
'This is a work of parody, themes in this story do not represent any real-world political views'
Type of disclaimer on its own page at the beginning, otherwise you'll be fending off these comments for the rest of the game's development.

Looking forward to more.
 
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bastardSon099

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wobblebobble said:
Pleasant slow pace to start with.
Font colour mix a little hard to read.
Unsure what the mixed classes are for since the Alphas share the same class but also don't do the same work? Are they on their phones while the MC is looking at sissy hypno?

Writing-wise - contrasting us with the Alphas (you even set up an established bully for the MC) I'm surprised there isn't testing where they set us up with an Alpha guy to demonstrate which class we should be in. A mixed class with Dom/Sub ought to feature activities to reinforce their dynamic.
I.e:
The outfits MC wears is picked by an alpha in their class or their Roommate, since its clear rooms are all Alpha/beta setups.
Early classes have a conflict where they pretend they haven't already decided which spec you are and you get beta'd. They then pick classes or groups for everyone. Perhaps the Alpha boys share the class but leave for their own stuff once sissy hypno is playing? Otherwise, why are they there?
Off the top of my head - their homework is making the hypno for MC to watch, taking pictures of themselves looking buff and hard to make MC want to fuck them, etc.

Linear story, which is fine, I appreciate the lack of grinding and the clarification that I can't miss anything by clicking around.


Glancing through the thread the Dev has written out a known extremist conspiracy theory as into the intro to their game and is also confused as to why people are unsure if they're joking or playing it straight. (laugh track plays.)
With sympathy to the dev, I recommend a:
'This is a work of parody, themes in this story do not represent any real-world political views'
Type of disclaimer on its own page at the beginning, otherwise you'll be fending off these comments for the rest of the game's development.

Looking forward to more.
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hi!

from top to bottom (west has fallen: reeducation (laugh track plays x2 lol)):

i thought about having the game start with player testing, and having the player initially be in the "doubtful" group, and wrote the events for that, but unfortunately found that the game stretched out a lot. this is one of the decisions that was decided to be abandoned (for example, the game was originally a sandbox game from start and when i did playtests i realised that the gameplay was just.... bad).
so i decided to skip that part. but i have to say that this is not the first feedback on this, so..

.. so i don't know, can't promise about it. i'll be doing a QoL version later and there will be a small remaster of the first phase, ill have to take another look at that. maybe it can be solution.

about "why are they (aplhas) there" — i may have made a mistake somewhere or made it not transparent enough, but not all classes are joint. some classes are separate, some are not. i may have accidentally pointed out somewhere that the classes are joint when they shouldn't be.... i'll check

disclaimer idea is great. thanks for it, will add it to game and to resources like f95
anyway, it was a little funny

thanks for feedback!! <3
 
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tkrett

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Tbh I would rather have a bunch of games that get abandoned but have *good pacing* than those featureful games that are a sandbox with a delivery mechanism for disjointed tropes of content.

It's obvious that the fluffy bastard is thoroughly dogfooding his own game so I am glad that we are finally getting some top notch quality again
 
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bastardSon099

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fluffy bastard lol
abandoning the game has been added to the plans...

btw about sandbox. i wrote post at the discord server with mentioning it but not hard for me to duplicate that game will not be full sandboxed, but sandbox mechanics will be (some will be in upcoming version). i'm trying to find correct formula by which sandbox will work for storytelling in a good way.

and as i mentioned in previous message here — first try ended up bad. so can't say how fast we can reach such point when all sandbox mechanics will be implemented, but current game weeks that i'm developing already feels more free from going from one to one events.

and a little shame-update about aproximate dates: i will release next version near Halloween, not in upcoming weekends. despite the fact that i'm almost wrote everything i want — i still don't fill passages with gifs/pics and obiously will need an extra time for it + content polish

so
i'm sorry robin312 and everyone else i lied to.........
 
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