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VN Ren'Py Westview Academy [v0.6.2] [Tako Yuh]

4.20 star(s) 64 Votes
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YeColo

YeColo

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Amedore said:
There's not even a real plot right now, just a collection of scenes. :unsure:
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You'll notice I said writing and not plot or story. Give me writing this good over the contrived drivel of returning home after a long time away, before having to peek at my sister and overly voluptuous mother in the shower.
 
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Jacowboy

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Amedore said:
There's not even a real plot right now, just a collection of scenes. :unsure:
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I agree with this, it's been my main complaint about the game, tbh. That said tho, Tako does write good dialogues, so that helps somewhat, but I really wish there was a more structured plot in this one... I'm playing the update and I'm absolutely lost and it's indeed feeling like I'm jumping from a random scene to the other.

Anyways, I came to ask, is there a WT somewhere? I feel I need one to refresh my mind and see what path(s) I'm in, I don't feel like starting over at the moment... =/
 
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It would be better if there weren't two major paths, music and sports.
All the focus on one meaty major path is better than being spread thin.
Don't like some LIs being exclusive to one major path.

I personally think that the basketball side of things feels more natural to the story.

The writing loses my interest at times, and feels a bit long-winded without relevant substance.
The lack of progress with most of the LIs has been disappointing.

The first 2-3 chapters had my attention.
The past two were hard for me to finish.

I wish that the writing would have less cringe "wacky moments" and be more straight to the point.
Game still has potential and is a valid effort.
Just some constructive criticism. Keep up the promising work developer.
 
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Hotkillerz

Hotkillerz

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just wondering was there anything added? as i loaded up my last save and it didnt add anything as it went through the park dialog with june and then went to the thanks for playing scene.
 
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f45450

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TurhaanKoitatte said:
So MC can fuck all over the city, but at the end you have to choose ONLY one? So not my game. It pisses me the hell off at that point, when suddenly you have to choose one of many good options.
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Yeah, this game is too realistic :ROFLMAO:
Do not worry though. There are games in modern setting without a boring gring. With a plot like "- Hey, beautiful, wanna fuck? - Sure, handsome! - ... - OMG that was so intense, please add me to your harem!" :p
Though there was quite a praised game, where MC could avoid "single choice" by a few inconspicious decisions earlier. But there was much more action-packed plot, not some "boring realistic academy".
 
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Dessolos

Dessolos

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f45450 said:
Yeah, this game is too realistic :ROFLMAO:
Do not worry though. There are games with plot like "- hey, beautiful, wanna fuck? - sure, handsome! - ... - OMG that was so intense, please add me to your harem" :p
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lmfao why am I imaging the Fallout 4 dialogue box and there being a dialogue option that says recruit / add to your harem. then of course it wouldn't be Fallout without Preston Garvey saying another settlement needs your help
 
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Vasin

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This game is a poster child for outlining your story before writing. Quippy dialogue can only get you so far, and just because the story is slice of life doesn't mean that it can be directionless. Even if all you have are just vignettes, they still have to contain something more in terms of writing other than "characters went to a place and did a thing". Good example of that is a scene with Jordan in this recent episode where there's a hint of us possibly learning something about her and it's failed spectacularly for a gag that doesn't even land. The best way I can describe the story of the game is meandering and unsure of itself.

From the technical standpoint, I think it's very well done though, music is non-offensive, renders are good, models are fine (except for the childhood friend that has a face that someone probably sat on when she was a baby) and you have a good sense of directing a scene with camera angles and animations.

I really hope the writing will get better, as there's a lot of potential here.
 
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DeFuZe

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I just finished Chapter 5 on Steam and I have to say it was the best release yet. It had the perfect mix of fun moments with some serious ones and great character development.

I have 2 saves and on Sports path I cannot see myself going forward without having Paige as a LI, she was so great there, I liked that MC's loyality was also being put to test by temptations.

On the other save with Music path I went with Alyssa and I also enjoyed this one so much. I love how she slowly warms up and starts opening more, some people might think it's too slow but to me it's going to be even more satisfying and rewarding later. Honestly these moments where they just bonded and later hug and teased each other are better than quick lewd gratification.

I'm really surprised how different these 2 paths, like not just dialogue variations and same places like most VNs but total new areas and interactions with chracters that are otherwise not interactable in other path. I hope the dev can continue this way without overwhelming himself because it must be an immense work to basically work on 2 different games considering how different Sports and Music paths are, but I can only wish good luck and hope he pulls it off.

Overall I loved this update and I cannot wait to see how Tako develops this lovely project going forward. :love:
 
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Semak34

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This kinda disorients me; at times it's your typical college story with college drama, only to suddenly switch up to a silly sitcom story (all mixed with porn logic). Or the plot has an identity crisis or i'm not smart enough to understand it's "complexity"
 
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