OldMoonSong
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My list made with VNs in mind:
- dream sex (usually used to insert sex early into a story before plot/relationships are developed)
- sleep molestation (same thing)
- lazy incest patching (change relationship title from "roommate" to "sister", the relationship is never commented on, never referenced beyond the title--with no actual context for any tension or preexisting relationship)
- linear sex progression (1 sex act per interaction, starting with petting and then elevating to anal over the course of 5-6 "progression" scenes that are spread out, like, A -> AB -> ABC -> ABCD -> ABCDE ... or A -> B -> C -> D -> E ...)
- extreme (IMO, anything even closely beyond "reasonably realistic") bimbo proportions of tits and asses
- MC written with the personality of an immature, horny school boy
- "sandbag MC", what I call an MC with zero / very little agency or participation in moving the plot or relationships forward--a character that is more of a prop or object being acted upon by other characters / events