VN Ren'Py Where It All Began [S1 Ch.4 Fix 1 Steam] [Oceanlab]

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Ayhsel

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I'm glad I discovered this game. Katie and Leia are really well-written characters. Looking forward to the remake.


Do you know if Ocean is looking for someone to proof-read and edit the game? Asking as an editor and fan of the project.
I honestly have no idea. He visits this forum, so I would quote him/mention him or sinply sendimg a PM message amd ask him directly.
 
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I'm glad I discovered this game. Katie and Leia are really well-written characters. Looking forward to the remake.


Do you know if Ocean is looking for someone to proof-read and edit the game? Asking as an editor and fan of the project.
around the last update Ocean said he hired a professional proofreader for future updates

i just saw i'm not in the summers gone thread, but i'd imagine if he'd do it for one game, he will do it for the other too
 
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Does anyone know if Ocean will be doing a rewrite/edit of dialogue?

The renders and story are phenomenal and i love the Basketball and court house videos.

it just hurts my head to see so many grammatical and spelling errors... it detracts from a truly great piece of work
There is a lot of rewriting being done as the remake is not a simply update of the renders but a big change in how the story develops in the beginning.

Whether that would improve the grammatical and spelling quality that you are talking about I cannot say.
 

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Please write in English. Use google translator if necessary.

영어로 작성 해주십시오. 필요한 경우 Google 번역기를 사용하십시오.
Damm... I wrote it in English, but Google automatic translation changed it to Korean at will. sorry
 

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Is there a PDF walkthrough that covers v0.6? The walkthrough that is linked in post-2467788 only covers till v0.5. Thanks in advance.

EDIT: Found there is no official walkthrough, and looking in other places didn't help either. Any user created ones?
 
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Is there a PDF walkthrough that covers v0.6? The walkthrough that is linked in post-2467788 only covers till v0.5. Thanks in advance.

EDIT: Found there is no official walkthrough, and looking in other places didn't help either. Any user created ones?
If you don't see one on the first page, I doubt there is one unfortunately. The game is currently being reworked anyways though
 
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so, this game is partially reworked? Is the a full pre-rework version? People said it's worth playing both versions, but playing a mix doesn't make sense to me.
 

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so, this game is partially reworked? Is the a full pre-rework version? People said it's worth playing both versions, but playing a mix doesn't make sense to me.
What is released right now has most content pre rework. However, the content that was added from version 0.5 to 0.6 is already in rework mode (with some potential changes given how much he is actually changing).

While the new version is supposed to be way better in terms of writing and consistency, just play the game. Even now it is fantastic. It is one of those games that every new version i always start from zero given how much I love it.
 
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What is released right now has most content pre rework. However, the content that was added from version 0.5 to 0.6 is already in rework mode (with some potential changes given how much he is actually changing).

While the new version is supposed to be way better in terms of writing and consistency, just play the game. Even now it is fantastic. It is one of those games that every new version i always start from zero given how much I love it.

old Miru
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new Miru

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and I'ma tell you right now I call dibs
 
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Vidal the king of Pervert Up to the previous versions, Katie has been my favorite. Beyond Miru not looking that good, she barely had any development as a character. This was the biggest problem. But luckily, it will change in the new version with more backgroun on her and their relationship

So having said that,

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Vidal the king of Pervert Up to the previous versions, Katie has been my favorite. Beyond Miru not looking that good, she barely had any development as a character. This was the biggest problem. But luckily, it will change in the new version with more backgroun on her and their relationship

So having said that,

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indeed it will be dear brother

and not looking that good
in my opinion she was ass ugly

I used to dump her the first chance I got
and now i love her
 

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indeed it will be dear brother

and not looking that good
in my opinion she was ass ugly

I used to dump her the first chance I got
and now i love her
Totally agree. You can find several post of mine calling the new Miru a goddess. She is really breathtaking. From what I remember reading, we will also see a way better Miru. So while I said Katie has been my favorite since the first time I played this game (I think it was version 0.4), given how much different the new game will be, I am keeping my heart open.

In Ocean's game are full of amazing women.
 
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Totally agree. You can find several post calling the new Miru a goddess. She is really breathtaking. From what I remember reading, we will also see a way better Miru. So while I said Katie has been my favorite since the first time I played this game (I think it was version 0.4), given how much different the new game will be, I am keeping my heart open.

In Ocean's game are full of amazing women.
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yess and right now I plan on giving Miru all of the babies if you know what I mean
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no wonder they update is taking so long Miru know her looks was not good enough to compete with the

other girls so she went off on a anime training Arc

and now her power level
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That's the Miru rework? Hot damn! She wasn't all that attractive last time I played but now I'm looking forward to further developments.
 
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